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Birth date:Born on July 19th 1978( 28 )

Race:Human

Gender:Male

Hair: Black

Eyes:Blue

Body:muscular

Home:US navy base camp. Georgia

Parents:Elizabeth and Peter

Siblings: 1 Daughter:Sarah age 4

History:During the battle in iraq,Grimly was working as a paramedic, bandaging a gunshot would on a fallen comrad. He heard somone else shouting out for a medic. "Yo somone take care of him i've got my hands full!" grimly shouted. No one else replied. "Stay here im going to cheak on the other"
He said to the man. He didnt speak but nodded his head in understanding. Grimly ran to the other and immedietly asked questions. He had found that the soider had been shot in the leg and hip. Grimly got out his first aid and a tool that would help take out the bullets.The leg shot had been a threw and threw meaning it went in the front and came out the back. He cheaked for internal bleeding on the hip. The bullet had stoped on his right hip bone.The soldier didnt feel any signs of internal bleeding but it was to early to tell for sure if he was. He would have to keep a close eye on him. Managing to remove the bullet without to much damage done he bandaged it and the leg adding disenfectant. Grimly picked him up, the soider groand a little from the pain while grim ran to the other fallen. He cheaked him quickly to find he was alright then took the one he was carring to shelter. Bullets where flying everywere explotions killed all other sound when the came. He came to a small church other americans were holding up in. He ran in, laid the soilder on a bed and ran out to get the other. When he came back the other was being treated and he laid the second on a diffrent bed. "Well done lutenant, return to your post." One of the men said. Grimly ran out of the church back to a little house he and two other people were holding. He took a wrong turn down an ally and his foot sank in the sand. He immediatly knew his life was over, once his head went under no one would come to save him he didn't even call for help. Just waited for what was to come. As the sand was to his neck he closed his eyes and took a breath, he would rathrer die from suffacating than sand in his stomac. When his head was under he felt very light thinking he was dead, he opend his eyes and took a breath. He was falling threw the air! Fear immeditatly gripped him as a lake came rushing tward him. Hitting the water with his boots witch absorbed some of the force, left his legs without feeling. Scrambling to stay afloat he swam to the shore, "There are no lakes like this in iraq where am I!? He thought to himself.

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Army cammo uniform with black bootsImage. A swis army knife hangs from a pocket on the right side of his cheast An empty pistol hangs from his belt along with a first aid med kitImage. Cammo gloves with black leather palms on each hand. A wrist watch on his right armImage. Green hard helmet rests on his head with strapsImage. A cammo colord backpack filled with supplies, Medicines, and other things. A black strip patch on his cheast shows Lt.Grimly and another patch on his right shoulder reads Image.



Personality:Easy going. Use to read storys to his 4 year old daughter when he was at home. Overall a nice person doing his duty. Doesn't get annoyd easily only when somone is hurting or beating someone does he really get upset.Generaly keeps his comments to himself he doesn't blurt out things.


Likes:Watching a football game on sundays, running/jogging

Dislikes:Failing a misson,long debreifs


Dreams for the futur:To return to his oun time and get back to his daughter.

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Last edited by Grimly(darkstar) on May 11th, 2006, 2:40 am, edited 11 times in total.

February 27th, 2006, 10:29 pm Profile
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Try filling out the application form I made, the annoucment topic.

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February 27th, 2006, 10:37 pm Profile
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yeah I made it. before I read it. :oops: Sorry It is now edited.

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February 27th, 2006, 10:48 pm Profile
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Just a bit more on history please.

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February 27th, 2006, 10:50 pm Profile
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That good or more?

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February 27th, 2006, 11:03 pm Profile
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Change the person, so that. 'He has a black suit' use past tense and third person

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February 28th, 2006, 4:21 pm Profile
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there I edited mostly in descriptions.

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April 4th, 2006, 9:28 pm Profile
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i think it needs ot be longer

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The history does need to be longer.

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April 4th, 2006, 9:54 pm Profile
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yea my history is bigger than almost all ur stuff together

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April 4th, 2006, 10:06 pm Profile
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Some more on personality and history...

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Hmm......It's okay, but ya. More.

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April 5th, 2006, 1:30 pm Profile
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look at the accepted ones to get an idea

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Suggestion: Put at least five more lines for history and at least three more for personality. Your description is longer than both :) .


April 12th, 2006, 9:56 pm Profile
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your personality isnt really a personality...

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I think he is expressing his characters personality by words said by the character himself. I think it is very original. 8)


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History has to be quite long so keep adding :D

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April 13th, 2006, 1:40 pm Profile
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Sorry i'm really bad at this stuff im tring to use the character in my book but hide some of the stuff otherwize youl know what happens in my book when it comes out. thinking about changing it but have same name.
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I changed him what do you think? i know he still needs work.

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I think its nice...its original.....its cool....but i dont know about your history but i think its ok...but its up to te mods

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Thanks not to be a stick in the mud but...
Glenwing wrote:
Please do NOT post unless its your bio or you are a member of staff.


But I don't care if you guys post in myn if its alright with louis/glenwing

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wow a complete revision of character...slightly unorthodox. Oh and it make it harder for me in my limited time to get through bios if lots of people post... accepted then, this may be funny to read about

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