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New Peasant   Joined: April 8th, 2011, 6:46 pm Posts: 31 Location: U.S.A. Gender: Guy Affiliation: Dragonriders |
 The ChuckName: Chuck Norris
Age: Infinity Gender: All Race: Chuck is what ever he wants to be and where ever he wants to be. Skills: Everything Scales: Invisible Eyes: Rainbow Home Village: Everywhere Parents: Chuck Norris is Chuck Norris' parents Siblings: Chuck Norris Personality: He needs no explaning and everyone knows and fears him. History:Chuck needs not give you a history lesson. Weapons: Law & Order Likes: Round House Dislikes: People who do not let him on this site. Weakness: Nothing Fear: He does not have any Companions: No companions. Discription: If you don't know then you are an idiot Dreams for the future: Destroy all humans, dragons, elves, dwarfs, and the world. Reason for dream: Can't stand humans dwarfs or elves, but he will work with them if events call for it. Alignment: He walkes alone The only reason this website is still up is because Chuck Norris alows it to be. _________________ this is my dragon eggs clik on the following to view them! 
Last edited by bran g11 on January 13th, 2012, 4:30 pm, edited 19 times in total. |
| May 4th, 2011, 11:26 pm |
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RPG Team   Joined: April 17th, 2007, 11:40 am Posts: 4344 Location: Australia, waiting in the sun with my dragon, Aeraldi, for when we are needed Gender: Guy Affiliation: Shades Dragon: Aelir |
Re: Heretic Grunt I can take from what you have that you have some of what we require, but can I ask you to please space out everything like we have it in the application? Otherwise we just can't read it.
_________________  For though I move on, I will always remember you I-L-S. Keralin and Aelir, (And Keralin's past) Hayren and Taliear Aeraldi, (And Aeraldi's past) Polaris and Saiph Nilarek, (And Nilarek's newest host) Legion Kharsin |
| May 5th, 2011, 3:21 am |
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Admin   Joined: February 12th, 2011, 4:13 am Posts: 179 Gender: Girl Affiliation: Elves |
Re: Heretic Grunt We do not allow guns and related high technology inside our RPG section, as that flies in the face of the world created by Mr Paolini's books.
Please revise your character to fit these standards, (while expanding it to meet the criteria in our template application) , and we'll take another look at it.  _________________ 
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| May 8th, 2011, 3:23 pm |
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Wise DragonRider  Joined: June 21st, 2009, 8:52 pm Posts: 1366 Location: U.S.A. and proud of it. Gender: Guy Affiliation: Lamp Shade |
Re: Heretic Grunt Excuse me, but can't guns be allowed in the Non-Canon Adventures? "When Alagaesia and its limitations aren't enough, take your characters to the non-canon area. Visit any universe, create your own world, or break the rules of the land of Alagaesia. These adventures do not actually occur in canon, but are purely to have fun and explore your characters' limits."
Also bran g11 is this who you mean? You do not have the required permissions to view the files attached to this post. _________________ Der Überbringer der Apfelmus ist hier. |
| May 8th, 2011, 7:19 pm |
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Admin Joined: February 12th, 2011, 4:13 am Posts: 179 Gender: Girl Affiliation: Elves |
Re: Heretic Grunt This isn't the non-canon area.
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| May 8th, 2011, 9:06 pm |
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Wise DragonRider Joined: June 21st, 2009, 8:52 pm Posts: 1366 Location: U.S.A. and proud of it. Gender: Guy Affiliation: Lamp Shade |
Re: Heretic Grunt Ok, otherwise would it be okay?
_________________ Der Überbringer der Apfelmus ist hier. |
| May 9th, 2011, 12:26 am |
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Admin Joined: February 12th, 2011, 4:13 am Posts: 179 Gender: Girl Affiliation: Elves |
Re: Heretic Grunt Jaythe_wise wrote: Ok, otherwise would it be okay? Yes, as that's the point of the new section. If anyone reading this has any other questions, please PM or post in the non-canon section. _________________
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| May 9th, 2011, 12:56 am |
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RPG Team  Joined: July 12th, 2007, 7:25 pm Posts: 2102 Location: Lost within the darkness. Gender: Guy Affiliation: Dragonriders Dragon: Bahamut |
Re: Heretic Grunt Just a reminder, dont post in some one else's application. If you have problems or questions PM some one from the RPG team. Thanks.
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| May 9th, 2011, 2:13 am |
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New Peasant Joined: April 8th, 2011, 6:46 pm Posts: 31 Location: U.S.A. Gender: Guy Affiliation: Dragonriders |
Re: lost dragon Some one needs to come and read this thing it is just siting here.
_________________ this is my dragon eggs clik on the following to view them!
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| May 20th, 2011, 3:44 pm |
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Admin Joined: February 12th, 2011, 4:13 am Posts: 179 Gender: Girl Affiliation: Elves |
Re: lost dragon History and Character Personality need to be expanded (15 and 12 lines respectively) Description of Character needs to be expanded. Run it through a spell checking tool of some sort so it's easier for us to understand. Some sort of weakness is needed. More detail on skills and weapons, so I can figure out more specific comments to make. general polishing on your application.
See here: viewtopic.php?f=56&t=8551 _________________
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| May 20th, 2011, 4:37 pm |
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RPG Team Joined: April 17th, 2007, 11:40 am Posts: 4344 Location: Australia, waiting in the sun with my dragon, Aeraldi, for when we are needed Gender: Guy Affiliation: Shades Dragon: Aelir |
Re: lost dragon Also, See my first post.
_________________ For though I move on, I will always remember you I-L-S. Keralin and Aelir, (And Keralin's past) Hayren and Taliear Aeraldi, (And Aeraldi's past) Polaris and Saiph Nilarek, (And Nilarek's newest host) Legion Kharsin |
| May 22nd, 2011, 6:29 am |
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New Peasant Joined: April 8th, 2011, 6:46 pm Posts: 31 Location: U.S.A. Gender: Guy Affiliation: Dragonriders |
Re: lost dragon Need some one to read this tell me what you think
_________________ this is my dragon eggs clik on the following to view them!
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| November 18th, 2011, 6:59 pm |
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RPG Team Head   Joined: November 17th, 2007, 6:26 pm Posts: 5587 Location: attending a pie-eating contest with the other aspiring evil overlords Gender: Girl Affiliation: Skulblakans Dragon: Ardel |
Re: lost dragon Some of the concept is a bit too sci-fi for Alagaesia (though it is pretty interesting). Also you need a great deal more length on most of your sections, and space between each section. I would suggest going through the character bio form again, and also try and fit the charry history into more of a fantasy type setting.
What you have so far for other things isn't bad; you just need to expand on things mostly. _________________  ****Phalynx**Solarae**Rigel**Alna'ir**Sirius**Ecco**Temias**Kalo**** And I'm watching out for your charries, ILS. *****Faefnir***Navarre***Rimfax***** |
| November 20th, 2011, 4:18 am |
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New Peasant Joined: April 8th, 2011, 6:46 pm Posts: 31 Location: U.S.A. Gender: Guy Affiliation: Dragonriders |
Re: lost dragon Come see what you think I want this to work read it and tell me if it neads any thing.
_________________ this is my dragon eggs clik on the following to view them!
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| December 5th, 2011, 6:59 pm |
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RPG Team Head Joined: November 17th, 2007, 6:26 pm Posts: 5587 Location: attending a pie-eating contest with the other aspiring evil overlords Gender: Girl Affiliation: Skulblakans Dragon: Ardel |
Re: lost dragon You still need a great deal more length on History, Personality, and Physical Description. Also, there are several things that make him too overpowered, I'm afraid. His age is somewhat ridiculous, also the ability to use magic without limits and regenerating after death is too much. And a weakness of a large group of dragons doesn't exactly count (anyone would be weak against a large group of dragons).
So yeah, add some length and perhaps some depth into the character's background (for example, why does he have this pentagram marking?), and lessen his power a great deal. _________________ ****Phalynx**Solarae**Rigel**Alna'ir**Sirius**Ecco**Temias**Kalo**** And I'm watching out for your charries, ILS. *****Faefnir***Navarre***Rimfax***** |
| January 6th, 2012, 3:49 am |
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RPG Team  Joined: July 14th, 2006, 3:30 am Posts: 3465 Location: texas, sitting in the grass gazing at the stars with my dragon Gender: Girl Affiliation: Dragonriders Dragon: Caoimhe |
Re: The Chuck I do not think I could accept this character even with more added....it is based off of a real person....if others say thst is ok then I will reconcider but as it stands it isnt really your character you just revamped a real person.
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| January 27th, 2012, 6:25 pm |
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RPG Team Head Joined: November 17th, 2007, 6:26 pm Posts: 5587 Location: attending a pie-eating contest with the other aspiring evil overlords Gender: Girl Affiliation: Skulblakans Dragon: Ardel |
Re: The Chuck I'm not entirely sure why you changed your original bio to this... um... obviously this can't be accepted. If you want to rp on these boards please read through our suggestions posted earlier and make a character according to the rules.
Otherwise, you should probably entertain yourself elsewhere._________________ ****Phalynx**Solarae**Rigel**Alna'ir**Sirius**Ecco**Temias**Kalo**** And I'm watching out for your charries, ILS. *****Faefnir***Navarre***Rimfax***** |
| February 7th, 2012, 2:19 am |
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Dragon Egg Carrier   Joined: March 22nd, 2009, 10:17 pm Posts: 159 Location: Soon to be Fort Sill, OK Gender: Guy Affiliation: Dragonriders |
Re: The Chuck I dont think i should be posting in here, but i will anyways, this thread made my lol so hard. Not sure if troll or just stupid...
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| February 7th, 2012, 2:30 am |
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RPG Team Head Joined: November 17th, 2007, 6:26 pm Posts: 5587 Location: attending a pie-eating contest with the other aspiring evil overlords Gender: Girl Affiliation: Skulblakans Dragon: Ardel |
Re: The Chuck Hehe no you are not allowed to post here, Exdragon. Just remember that in the future.
But you do have a point. _________________ ****Phalynx**Solarae**Rigel**Alna'ir**Sirius**Ecco**Temias**Kalo**** And I'm watching out for your charries, ILS. *****Faefnir***Navarre***Rimfax***** |
| February 8th, 2012, 6:04 am |
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New Peasant Joined: April 8th, 2011, 6:46 pm Posts: 31 Location: U.S.A. Gender: Guy Affiliation: Dragonriders |
Re: The Chuck I knew that would get your attention. Also, this is a troll, and I'm not stupid.
_________________ this is my dragon eggs clik on the following to view them!
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| February 10th, 2012, 4:12 pm |
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RPG Team Head Joined: November 17th, 2007, 6:26 pm Posts: 5587 Location: attending a pie-eating contest with the other aspiring evil overlords Gender: Girl Affiliation: Skulblakans Dragon: Ardel |
Re: The Chuck That's what I was thinking. Please stop wasting our time.
_________________ ****Phalynx**Solarae**Rigel**Alna'ir**Sirius**Ecco**Temias**Kalo**** And I'm watching out for your charries, ILS. *****Faefnir***Navarre***Rimfax***** |
| February 11th, 2012, 6:04 am |
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