Okay in my English class we are going over ways to help with creative writing. these ways are called smily face tricks and i will show them to you. Then you respond with your own example of the trick and i will tell you if you got it right then i will start with a newone.

First trick is Magic 3 instead of this: The girl punched, kicked, and hit, the man. You put: The girl punched like a pro boxer, Kicked like a kangaroo, and hit the man like an aligator.
Now you try.

all it is is being a bit mor discriptive.