Since, I have some time on me, I figured it would be best to not let you hanging on a string about me. I have rare, blond hair. I'm about 13, around 14. I used to were a midnight purple cloth around my face (only showing my eyes) to hide my identity (tell you why in a second). I'm usually seen wearing a black long-sleeve shirt and black pants with boots. At my waist hangs my faithful companion, my sword (a jade color, with a greenish stone), Withrill (Holder of Power/Wisdom).
Here is my past:
My mother gave birth to me in Dras-Leona. She gave me to her trusting friend, an elderly woman, named Withrill and ran away. I do not know why, so don't ask.
Withrill cared for me.When I was two we moved to Belatona. Withrill continued to care for me. I made a few friends but once I started playing with them, their mothers would shoo me away. Soon, even my friends didn't want me near them.
When I was five, Withrill died. Devasted, I fled from the house. I came across a farm and stole a horse about 6 months old. I quickly saddled it and took off east. I followed the river, with my bow at my side. I hunted for myself. My quest was to find somebody who would love me and care for me.
A few weeks later my 6th birthday passed. I came upon a familiar black mountain. Curious I entered the town. My first mistake. It seemed like everyone I met eyes with avoided me. They all gasped and fled.
My curiousty, once again, taking over I went into this gigantic building. I wondered around, pausing to look at fairths of a dragon. I turned to leave when there stood two hooded men. My heart skipped a beat.
I reached for my bow but was too late, the hooded men were grabbed me with abnormal reflexes. My horse winnied outside. One of the men knocked me out.
When I awoke, I was in a caged cell guarded by Galbortix's men. I was fortunate enough to learn how bad Galbortix was before so I knew what I was about to encouter.
The guards summoned me. Each taking me by an arm. I saw, while they were dragging me down the hall, a boy, with red hair and eyes that bore into you smirk at me. I shivered with uneasiness.
The guards dropped me to the floor. Blood dripped down my mouth as I heard footsteps continueing to get closer until they stopped. I looked up to see no other than Galbortix himself, hissing my name. He grabbed me by the callor, lifting me higher and higher until my eyes met him. His eyes, like fire, bore into me. I flinched as he banged me up against the wall. He took out his dagger and put it to my neck. Blood trickled down the dagger.
Just then a guard slammed open the doors saying that there's been a theif and stole an egg. I had no idea that an egg could be so important but like a potatoe, Galbortix dropped me and raced out of the room.
Angry mixed with fear as I thought about Galbortix. I wanted to do something. I needed to. Something caught my eye. It was a sword of the color jade. It was so shiny, I couldn't resist it so I took it.
Racing from the room, I went to my horse and sped off. I ran and ran until dawn, when I finally stopped. I looked back to see nothing but the river. Pleased with myself, I followed the river.
I cover my face with torn cloth and hid my hair, since I knew it was most noticable and went into Teirm. I stayed there until I was about 10, hiding in allies.
I practiced sparring most of the time, partially knowing it'd come in handy. Then one day, when I was wandering the streets I over-heard a man complaining about his ship. He saw me, though.
He was talking about his ship "Dragon Wing". I knew he was with the empire, but in order not to raise any suspision I offered to help him . . .for a price. I fixed up his ship and installed a motor in it to make it run better. He gave me 500 coins. Pleased with myself, I ran. My horse and I ran until we reached the Spine.
Bored in the Spine, I tested some magic and my ancient language I have picked up. But when I went to bed one night I had a dream about a boy in the Spine hunting game. That boy now known as Eragon. I spent about 3 years in the Spine practicing magic before continuing my pointless quest.
As I continued on my journeys to nowhere I stumbled upon three elves. One with black hair that shown like night and her two companions that also had midnight black hair. I travelled with her for a day or so, then I parted.
As I was riding through the forest, I smelt something quite revolting. Sensing danger I turned and ran to tell the elves. They nodded.
I heard screaming and I went to turn around to help when two Urgals blocked my path. I gasped and turned to fled as the forest behind me burst into flames. The Urgals shrieked as they were caught in the falmes. I kept running until I reached the edge of the forest.
I sat there letting my breath come back to me and my horse. Suddenly a blue stone appeared in my lap. I recongnized it from the description of people back in Teirm. A dragon egg. It wiggled. I looked up to see the boy from my dreams approaching a heard of deer and eyeing a particular one that seemed to be injured.
Knowing that he was destined to be the new rider, I combined the ancient words and poofed it into the middle of the heard. The deer fled as I saw Eragon grow angry. Curious he went over to the egg. Tested it to make sure it wasn't a trap, picked it up, satisfied, and left.
Later on over the next week or so I heard about a boy tryng to sell a precious blue stone. I was furious so I went to see my old pal, Brom. I told him about Eragon and he said that he'd handle it.
Then for the next 7 months I went back and forth to Surda reporting what I've seen and heard. I was quite their source. When I returned to Carvahall I saw the Ra'Zac. Thristy for revenge, I soon joined the battle. I was ruthless, furious. I've heard what they've done to people and I found out how they betrayed my mother.
Once I've heard that Rorun wanted to take us all to Surda, I started pitching in, convincing people to go. I helped with families and catching game, although, it was hard.
I was somewhat angry when I heard Rorun threatening Clovis in such a way but I knew it was necessary. When we reached Teirm, I snuck in before Rorun's group and gave a visit to Jeod. He seemed happy to see me and agreed to help me steal "Dragon Wing".
After weeks of sea, the crew decided to take the route by the Boar's Eye. We seemed to be having some trouble so when nobody was looking, I tied myself to a rope and jumped off the ship. I went underneath it and started the motor. It was no easy task but it was done, but from the weight of the villagers, it was still labor to row.
We soon arrived at the war scene. Taking no time I jumped off and ran in there myself. But I knew who were my allies so I always got my target. Then I saw Murtagh come into battle, at first I was filled with joy but then I learned he was working for Galbortix.
Wrath filled me. Not because of Murtagh but because Galbortix manipulated him into being evil. I'm more determined than ever to kill Galbortix.
Sorry for it being so long but now I'm off to see if I can find Eragon to see if I can make a plan for that bloody Galbortix.

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hi Katena, that was a long post, cool!