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Rien.1234
Master DragonRider
Joined: May 8th, 2007, 5:01 am Posts: 2058 Location: San Antonio
Affiliation: Dragonriders
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 Fenlore
Name: - Fenlore
Age:- 38
Gender: - Male
Skills: He is an excellent Archer, he can hit a target from around 200 to 225 yards away. He can match anyone with a blade Elf, human, or Shade. He also is very good with his spear, he can hurdle it 60 yards accurately. He has the speed and agility of and elf. He has walls of Iron around his mind though he can be easily distracted. His magical ability can equal Elves. And like an elf him mind can think on many different levels at once. His human blood does limit him in his stamina (even though he can outlast any human) but other than that there isn’t much he cannot match an elf in. Sköliro kveykva: A skill tought to him by Elfrida to fight Wulfe with. It is a lightning based attack of great power that only need a small amount of energy to begin. The magic feeds off the power of two opposing forces with in the body, such as love and hate. The stronger the clash of emotions the more powerful the attack. One major down side to this attack is that with the use of these powerful emotions he is giving more room for the darkness he reseived from Elfrida to grow and spread.
Race: - A half Breed Elf/human
Hair: - brown
Eyes: -bright blue
Home Village: - He doesn't know where he was born but he considers Orome house along the Edda River his home or it was when he was raised.
Parents: -His parents died before he was 1 year of age, but his father was an Elven Dragon Rider who lost his Dragon and his mom was human.
Siblings: - none
Character Personality: He is a very mellow but hard person; you can even say he is sad a lot. He cares for few he meets because he finds them to be ignorant. He is scared of things he doesn't understand. He likes to help people in need but does what he must to survive. He cares dearly for his horse, Bree, and will kill any who tries to harm him. He has not had any serious relationship with a woman before or a non-serious relationship for that matter. He can have his moments of bliss though they are rare. He takes his work whatever it might be very seriously. He does fear death to a point but not a sort of fear where he is scared but respects those who die and are dead, even if he kills them. He can hide his emotions very well though he doesn't try to at times. He loves to be challenged and never refuses a fight unless magic is involved then he do his best to avoid a conflict with magic for there are many unknown when fighting with magic. If a foe beats him and lets him live he will show gratitude but not necessarily thank that foe. He will fight foes stronger than him just to learn and test his knowledge and strength. He is happy to answer questions from others as long as it is not about his past or family. He also holds Shades to a high regard though he will kill them if they attack him. A darkness has krept into his mind that seeks to corupt his being. It feeds off of his sorrow and pain and hate. So he does his best to keep those emotions in check so that the darkness does not grow stronger.
Character History: No one knows where Fenlore was born, but he was raised by a sorcerer from 8 months of age. The sorcerer's name was Orome. Orome was wise, strong, and a great magic user. When he found Fenlore he saw that his father was a Elf and Rider but his mother was only a human. It looked as if a great battle had taken place, 56 bodies lay around Fenlore's father. He was strong enough to protect Fenlore but not his wife who was killed by an Arrow to the back. Orome heard his father's plea to take care of Fenlore. With the last of his strength he gave Orome his sword, and then he died. Orome lived East of Hedrath on the Edda River. As Orome raised Fenlore he taught him how to speak the common human language and also the ancient language. At age 5 he could read and write just about everything. At age 6 he began to train with a bow, sword, and spear. It was obvious that he inherited his father's elven strength and senses, but he looked like a human. At the age of 16 Orome gave Fenlore his father’s sword, spear, bow, and armor. Orome was going to let him leave until one day Fenlore was hunting but got ambushed by slavers. He killed five with his bow, but five still remained. They captured and bound him. He struggled but it he could not break his bonds. So like he heard Orome say before to break things with magic he yelled jierda and his bonds fell severed to the ground. It took its toll but he was not going to be bound again and killed the slavers. After that he decided to stay with Orome and learn about magic.
For a few years their training was undisturbed and Fenlore advanced quickly from basic magic control to advanced spells, and the extent of his master knowledge amazed him further for this sorcerer knew many different practices of magic. When Fenlore ever question Orome’s knowledge he never got a clear answer and was told to attend to his studies of magic and not question where the knowledge he was given came from. So Fenlore didn’t question his master but suspected that Orome was more than a mere sorcerer. But the peaceful days died out when the band of slavers Fenlore freed himself from found where he lived, they came after him with thirty people. When Orome saw the slaves he gathered all of his strength to summon and control a very powerful spirit but he was not strong enough to control it. So Fenlore watched as his former master, friend, and step-father was transformed into a Shade. The Shade killed all of the slavers but then turned on Fenlore. Fenlore fought back against the Shade. It was a hard fought battle that eventually became a fight with magic. Fenlore was greatly out matched by his former master but he fought off every attack that was thrown at him. When the fight did not seem like it was ever going to end, Fenlore made bold move and ignoring all of his own defenses he lunged for the Shades heart. Fenlore’s blade struck true but at the price being wounded himself. Fenlore broke down after having to kill his own master and stayed in grief at the house for week. Once his wounds heal Fenlore, in his grief, saddled Bree and with his weapons he rode off and eventually joined a group of bandits for 20 years growing in strength and power slowly, until he left for the Empire looking to start over. As time progress and his exploits against the empire increased in number he came across a half breed, were-cat/elf, named Elfrida. She tought him much but also burdened him with a darkness that festers in his mind. He is not sure what is to happen with this darkness but he does his best to keep it in check for he does not know what would happen if it over took him.
Weapons: His sword belonged to his father as was his bow and spear, the sword was of the finest make, it is unbreakable and could not be scratched. It had a fine silver gem at the end of the handle. Fenlore's spear was also unbreakable and could not be scratched. His bow was finer than any other bow he had ever seen, it could easily shoot 250 yards (if you were strong enough). His armor was his father's also, it had been forged by Rhunon the great elven smith. It was very light and thin and also could also be hidden well under a cloak. The armor is extremely durrible and will also protect every part of the wearers skin that is covered from fire.
Likes: - Bree his horse, his weapons, humans, elves (he has met a few elves in his travels and finds them to be breath taking, he knows not that he can make himself in a similar fashion if he only tried for he has the strength)
Dislikes: - Dragons he thinks it is scary to have huge almost unstoppable beasts flying around non tamed (he knows very little about Dragons and is not sure if he wants to know more), dwarves because they stay hidden and he doesn't know why, shades because one was the cause of death to his teacher in his eyes.
Animal Companions: - Bree his horse it is smart enough to take commands in the ancient language and to communicate through pictures and emotions. Bree is Fenlore closest companion and is normally with him everywhere. Bree has been kept young through spells Fenlore placed on him using the Bree's own strength to help. Something that Fenlore did with the spell that he had not intended increased Bree’s energy and stamina making the horse a good support for fights with magic.
Character's Physical Description: Fenlore stands at 6 foot 3 inches; his build is strong and slender with broad shoulders. His weight is around 180 to 190. His face is has been hardened over the years of sun and fighting and his eye's show that he is wise and full of thought. His hair is long enough to cover the ears but that is it. His legs are strong like tree trunks but nimble enough to be quicker that any human and keep up with elves. He has a slight tip on his ear but it is a tiny detail only the most observant will see if they can get his hair away from his ears.
Dreams for the Future: - His dream occurred in one of the many cities in the Empire. He doesn't know which one because he has never seen any. He is standing in the middle of a group of slain solders by his blade. He hears a Thud. He look around him but nothing. Thud! He looks up to see a Dragon and........
Reason for Dreams: - He has this Dream to go and meet this Dragon and the rest I'll save for when he does meet It.
Alignment/side: - He is on the Vardens side though he does not take orders from them. He doesn’t know much about the Varden except that Human run it while elves and dwarves support it, and that they are against the King
Last edited by Rien.1234 on April 22nd, 2011, 10:03 pm, edited 12 times in total.
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May 14th, 2007, 7:15 am |
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Star Gazer
RPG Team
Joined: July 14th, 2006, 3:30 am Posts: 3465 Location: texas, sitting in the grass gazing at the stars with my dragon
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Dragonriders
Dragon: Caoimhe
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Bravo, just a few spelling mistakes but other than that it was great. No shade just need to over look it as well as othsta.
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May 16th, 2007, 2:34 am |
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Rien.1234
Master DragonRider
Joined: May 8th, 2007, 5:01 am Posts: 2058 Location: San Antonio
Affiliation: Dragonriders
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thank you I worked on it for a long time.
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 Characters Alvina, Fenlore Orome,Zef Horrin Rien,Esther
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May 16th, 2007, 2:36 am |
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Star Gazer
RPG Team
Joined: July 14th, 2006, 3:30 am Posts: 3465 Location: texas, sitting in the grass gazing at the stars with my dragon
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Dragonriders
Dragon: Caoimhe
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It shows, good work. LOL if your chary hates shades then it hates my chary, oh well
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May 16th, 2007, 2:44 am |
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Rien.1234
Master DragonRider
Joined: May 8th, 2007, 5:01 am Posts: 2058 Location: San Antonio
Affiliation: Dragonriders
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Hates and likes them, it is complicated read his history and that might explain why a little.
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 Characters Alvina, Fenlore Orome,Zef Horrin Rien,Esther
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May 16th, 2007, 2:46 am |
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RiderEriel
Master DragonRider
Joined: February 21st, 2007, 11:57 am Posts: 2038
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Vardens
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Nice work rien, hope my tips help lawl. If you like, i could PM shade to check your charry though i don't think he'll do it immediately ^^
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Eriel & Emrhyst Gryfendel Alcioraell
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May 17th, 2007, 6:28 am |
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Star Gazer
RPG Team
Joined: July 14th, 2006, 3:30 am Posts: 3465 Location: texas, sitting in the grass gazing at the stars with my dragon
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Dragonriders
Dragon: Caoimhe
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Eriel don't post in these, your not supposed to and I already read the history
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May 17th, 2007, 1:25 pm |
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Rien.1234
Master DragonRider
Joined: May 8th, 2007, 5:01 am Posts: 2058 Location: San Antonio
Affiliation: Dragonriders
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I added reasons to his Likes and Dislikes so I hope that helps explain alittle.
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 Characters Alvina, Fenlore Orome,Zef Horrin Rien,Esther
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May 17th, 2007, 1:32 pm |
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Star Gazer
RPG Team
Joined: July 14th, 2006, 3:30 am Posts: 3465 Location: texas, sitting in the grass gazing at the stars with my dragon
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Dragonriders
Dragon: Caoimhe
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Okay well as soon as they get on here, i'm sure it will be accepted.
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May 18th, 2007, 1:40 pm |
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Shade of Fear
RPG Team Head
Joined: February 6th, 2006, 11:51 pm Posts: 4527 Location: Dreaming.
Gender: Guy
Affiliation: Lamp Shade
Dragon: DrAgonPhD
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looks okay to me. Osthato?
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May 18th, 2007, 10:46 pm |
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The Other Shade
Peasant Elder
Joined: May 30th, 2007, 12:17 am Posts: 89 Location: Racoon City
Gender: Guy
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 Re: Fenlore
Impressive, but i'm a nebie eveything ipresses me. Oh look a picture the dragon saphira ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. 
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May 30th, 2007, 1:09 am |
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fronzz
Global Moderator.
Joined: June 20th, 2006, 7:52 pm Posts: 5390 Location: Wherever I want to be
Gender: Guy
Affiliation: Dwarves
Dragon: Drakk
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 Re: Fenlore
The Other Shade, please dont post in other peoples apps. I guess i should take my own advice...Sry rpg people 
_________________ "Oh bother" Said Pooh as the tripwire clicked.
"I am a Christian and I will not be silenced" One day, a fireman came up to me and said, "Sir, we've been called to put you out, you're too hot!"
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May 30th, 2007, 3:09 am |
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Star Gazer
RPG Team
Joined: July 14th, 2006, 3:30 am Posts: 3465 Location: texas, sitting in the grass gazing at the stars with my dragon
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Dragonriders
Dragon: Caoimhe
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 Re: Fenlore
LOL fronzz you are a mod I think that allows you to post in here, but no other's can sorry, and Rien I am posotive as soon as othsta is on it will be accepted. Just be patient.
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June 1st, 2007, 7:05 pm |
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Rien.1234
Master DragonRider
Joined: May 8th, 2007, 5:01 am Posts: 2058 Location: San Antonio
Affiliation: Dragonriders
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 Re: Fenlore
I have to say that it is taking a while. But hey I've come up with an awesome way to introduce my caracter to the RPG world. But Oh well. Thanks y'all.
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 Characters Alvina, Fenlore Orome,Zef Horrin Rien,Esther
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June 24th, 2007, 3:25 am |
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Star Gazer
RPG Team
Joined: July 14th, 2006, 3:30 am Posts: 3465 Location: texas, sitting in the grass gazing at the stars with my dragon
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Dragonriders
Dragon: Caoimhe
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 Re: Fenlore
accepted* have fun and follow the rules.
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June 24th, 2007, 3:31 am |
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Rien.1234
Master DragonRider
Joined: May 8th, 2007, 5:01 am Posts: 2058 Location: San Antonio
Affiliation: Dragonriders
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 Re: Fenlore
Ok y'all I don't know whats going on. Thanks for accepting him but when can I start RPGing?
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August 25th, 2007, 1:51 am |
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Star Gazer
RPG Team
Joined: July 14th, 2006, 3:30 am Posts: 3465 Location: texas, sitting in the grass gazing at the stars with my dragon
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Dragonriders
Dragon: Caoimhe
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 Re: Fenlore
I know it's taking awhile. I'm trying to fix this problem.
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August 25th, 2007, 3:29 am |
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Rien.1234
Master DragonRider
Joined: May 8th, 2007, 5:01 am Posts: 2058 Location: San Antonio
Affiliation: Dragonriders
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 Re: Fenlore
OKay take ur time I can wait.
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August 25th, 2007, 4:30 pm |
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