just some songs u might have come up with.....
me and a friend made this. its emo. if your emophobiac or afraid of emo things. leave now. idk.....well here it is...


This is a memorial to my friends who have given up the war
This is a memorial to my friends who won't suffer anymore
This is a memorial to my friends who's life's are such a mess
This is a memorial to my friends whom now lay to rest

She Holds a razor to her wrist and a gun to her head.
Her boy friend left her, her parents divorced, and she'd rather be dead.
She takes a deep breath before her method of death she can decide.
As she becomes another victim of teenage suicide.

This is a memorial to my friends who have given up the war
This is a memorial to my friends who won't suffer anymore
This is a memorial to my friends who's life's are such a mess
This is a memorial to my friends whom now lay to rest

He downed 30 pills now, his vision starts to blur.
His girlfriend cheats on him, and hes completely insecure.
Living on his own, he sits all alone.
Listening to his girlfriend having sex while on the phone.
Hes up to 42 now, and hes wishing and praying for death.
His heart stops, his eyes shut, and he exhales his final breath.

The sad part to this tale is this happened to my friend Jason.
Who would talk to me everyday about all the problems he was facing.
I would tell him to calm down, be cool, and everything would be alright
Until I was talking to him in June on one faithful night
He asked me to pray for him, something came up, and no matter what be strong.
Hearing him say those things, I immediately knew something was wrong.
But before I could ask anything he had already left.
3 Weeks later I was informed by his brother of his drug induced death.

This is a memorial to my friends who have given up the war
This is a memorial to my friends who won't suffer anymore
This is a memorial to my friends who's life's are such a mess
This is a memorial to my friends whom now lay to rest

hehe "Emoness" Its good, and deep. nice job, emo songs are my kind of thing >.<

Dude, let me know if you ever record that. I want it.

I know how it is. Emoness, I like it too. Nice word usage.

im not into emo music really...im more punk....(i only listen to stuff like weezer and jimmy eat world)and i have written a few songs...im gonna try and make a career out of it too and my friend has almost 60 songs done now...i did read the first verse(or should i say the chorus) and it was pretty cool...i dont like the "first verse" but its just because i dont like emo music

Look that song is great, it reminds me of stuff I've written. Here's some advice never hold things like that in, never keep them to youself. Its good that you shared that with us, I love it.