Name: Ghansor

Age: 23

Gender: Male

Race: Human

Hair: Long Dark Black

Eyes: Green

Home: Uru'baen

Parents: Alira and Disu but were killed.

Siblings: One who is a brother but he betrayed Ghansor

Character Personality: Dark and very quiet. He waits and watches his opponents before he strikes. He serves loyaly. He has but one Master. Very strong and slim. He likes to keep to himself and only speaks with his dragon and his master. He is skilled with the blade. He is acknowledged with the bow as well. Favorite weapon would have to be his two handed long red hilted, green glint sword. He hates anyone who defies his master by all means and will kill them if they even think about betraying his lord. His favorite thing to do is pry into someone's mind and see what they are plotting and then gets them before they even can do what they were planning. He has a great way into prioring into someone's mind and torturing them.

History: At 9 years of age his parents were killed by the Varden. They had sent an attack on Uru'bean and had killed many villagers including Ghansor's parents. He was alone and it was the time when Galbatorix was looking for recruits. He took many villagers and tried to see if one of his dragon eggs would hatch for one lucky villager. As it so happened the egg hatched to Ghansor. Galbatorix was very pleased at that and called him into his own secret part of the castle and started training him in the ways of magic and swordsmanship. After a few years of training he was 14 and it was time for him to get a blade. Galbatorix took him to one of his own special Blacksmiths and designed for him the sword of a great rider. It was green like his dragon and had a red hilt like his dragon's eyes. His dragon name was Sinak and was now 3 years of age and was up to Ghansor's elbows. He loved to train with Shurtugal. Shurtagal taught him many ways to defend Ghansor if it was needed and about two years more later Sinak could breath fire. At this time Ghasor was 15 and he was ready to fight. Ghansor and his dragon Sinak were known greatly for destroying towns. Galbatorix was greatly pleased. After 12 years Galbatorix had a legion of Riders known as the Forswor who brought fear and destruction so Galbatorix could Reign. But it would now last as Brom and the elves made a plan of their own and kill these Riders. Brom killed many including Morzan. Galbatorix got worried and took Ghansor and hid because he was his most favorite pupil. After 2 years the had planned and one day took action and killed those who had killed their fellow Dragon Riders. Sinak was much larger and had improved his flying and his breatihing fire skill quite well. Gansor was also quite skilled. He could kill an army of a 100 men in one deadly spell. He was also quite cunning and swift. They had killed all those who had killed their fellow Riders except Brom. He was no where too be found. After a time they looked but soon forgot because of all that they did. They were quite happy for that time . . . .

Weapon: A two-handed long sword. It has a green blade and it had a red hilt. At the very middle of the hilt is a green cresent of the color of his dragon.

Like: He likes torturing people. Also speaking with his master about what is in store for the future and speaking with his dragon.

Dislikes: Humans and Urgals

Animal Companions: His green dragon Sinak.

Physic: Strong, muscular with dark greem eyes.

Dreams for the Future. To one day rule the land and destroy all that opposes him and his dragon. To have an army of Dragon Riders who are loyal.

Alignment: Only with Galbatorix not the Urgals. He dispises Urgals and humans alike.

Dragon Name: Sinak
Age: 10
Gender: Male
Parents: Shrukin and his mother is unknown

History: The egg was made from Shrukin and a fellow stray dragon Shrukin fell in love with. Galbatorix took the egg as the mother had run off to a land where she was forgotten. He loves to be with Shrukin and loves competing against him in flying/speed and flame shooting. He has few scrapes as he is young. But he has fought against two dragons. One he tore it's wings up to bad it would never fly again and the other he had gotten the scrapes from. It was wise and bigger and stronger. He was very quick with his movement and he got Sinak right in the elbow. Ghansor had jumped swung with his long sword and severed his wing badly. That was Sinak's chance and he blew his gan green flame and burnt the other dragon badly. He only had a moment and swopped down and caught Ghansor. The other dragon only fell to earth with a loud smash as it landed on a tree dead.

Personality: Playful when with his father but often times quite quiet and swift like his Rider. He gives a few hints on his battling as he watches Galbatorix and Ghansor go toe to toe.
Color: Green scales, tail, and wings but Red eyes. His eyes look like they have a evil purpose when the moon shines on them.
Appearance: Wing span is 15 meters in length and 22 wingspan.
Future sightings: He wishes to be a large and terrible dragon. Like his father.
Unknown Powers: Sinak has mysterious ways with Emeralds. He creates solid barriers with enemies if they are close. It only works when he is very worried about Ghansor and his safety.

Um... Who exactly are you? Because you need to join the forums to create a character, and if you are already a member then you forgot to log in

yes good bio but i cant accept it intill I know who you are

Sorry about that. I'm not sure about what to do. I think I'm logged in?

Hmm, you're missing the "skills" characteristics. otherwise, its great!

Name: Ghansor

Age: 23

Gender: Male

Race: Human

Hair: Long Dark Black

Eyes: Green

Home: Uru'baen

Parents: Alira and Disu but were killed.

Siblings: One who is a brother but he betrayed Ghansor

Character Personality: Dark and very quiet. He waits and watches his opponents before he strikes. He serves loyaly. He has but one Master. Very strong and slim. He likes to keep to himself and only speaks with his dragon and his master. He is skilled with the blade. He is acknowledged with the bow as well. Favorite weapon would have to be his two handed long red hilted, green glint sword. He hates anyone who defies his master by all means and will kill them if they even think about betraying his lord. His favorite thing to do is pry into someone's mind and see what they are plotting and then gets them before they even can do what they were planning. He has a great way into prioring into someone's mind and torturing them.

History: At 9 years of age his parents were killed by the Varden. They had sent an attack on Uru'bean and had killed many villagers including Ghansor's parents. He was alone and it was the time when Galbatorix was looking for recruits. He took many villagers and tried to see if one of his dragon eggs would hatch for one lucky villager. As it so happened the egg hatched to Ghansor. Galbatorix was very pleased at that and called him into his own secret part of the castle and started training him in the ways of magic and swordsmanship. After a few years of training he was 14 and it was time for him to get a blade. Galbatorix took him to one of his own special Blacksmiths and designed for him the sword of a great rider. It was green like his dragon and had a red hilt like his dragon's eyes. His dragon name was Sinak and was now 3 years of age and was up to Ghansor's elbows. He loved to train with Shurtugal. Shurtagal taught him many ways to defend Ghansor if it was needed and about two years more later Sinak could breath fire. At this time Ghasor was 15 and he was ready to fight. Ghansor and his dragon Sinak were known greatly for destroying towns. Galbatorix was greatly pleased. After 12 years Galbatorix had a legion of Riders known as the Forswor who brought fear and destruction so Galbatorix could Reign. But it would now last as Brom and the elves made a plan of their own and kill these Riders. Brom killed many including Morzan. Galbatorix got worried and took Ghansor and hid because he was his most favorite pupil. After 2 years the had planned and one day took action and killed those who had killed their fellow Dragon Riders. Sinak was much larger and had improved his flying and his breatihing fire skill quite well. Gansor was also quite skilled. He could kill an army of a 100 men in one deadly spell. He was also quite cunning and swift. They had killed all those who had killed their fellow Riders except Brom. He was no where too be found. After a time they looked but soon forgot because of all that they did. They were quite happy for that time . . . .

Weapon: A two-handed long sword. It has a green blade and it had a red hilt. At the very middle of the hilt is a green cresent of the color of his dragon.

Like: He likes torturing people. Also speaking with his master about what is in store for the future and speaking with his dragon.

Dislikes: Humans and Urgals

Animal Companions: His green dragon Sinak.

Physic: Strong, muscular with dark greem eyes.

Dreams for the Future. To one day rule the land and destroy all that opposes him and his dragon. To have an army of Dragon Riders who are loyal.

Alignment: Only with Galbatorix not the Urgals. He dispises Urgals and humans alike.

Skills: Ghansor can stun annoy with just a touch of the palm. He intices in the workings of fear and uses it to his advantage. He absolutely loves fear. His skills with a bow are slightly under that of an elves but he tries. With the sword he can kill 20 men without moving from one position. He knows few magic spells but he knows enough to use it to his advantage.

Dragon Name: Sinak
Age: 10
Gender: Male
Parents: Shrukin and his mother is unknown

History: The egg was made from Shrukin and a fellow stray dragon Shrukin fell in love with. Galbatorix took the egg as the mother had run off to a land where she was forgotten. He loves to be with Shrukin and loves competing against him in flying/speed and flame shooting. He has few scrapes as he is young. But he has fought against two dragons. One he tore it's wings up to bad it would never fly again and the other he had gotten the scrapes from. It was wise and bigger and stronger. He was very quick with his movement and he got Sinak right in the elbow. Ghansor had jumped swung with his long sword and severed his wing badly. That was Sinak's chance and he blew his gan green flame and burnt the other dragon badly. He only had a moment and swopped down and caught Ghansor. The other dragon only fell to earth with a loud smash as it landed on a tree dead.

Personality: Playful when with his father but often times quite quiet and swift like his Rider. He gives a few hints on his battling as he watches Galbatorix and Ghansor go toe to toe.
Color: Green scales, tail, and wings but Red eyes. His eyes look like they have a evil purpose when the moon shines on them.
Appearance: Wing span is 15 meters in length and 22 wingspan.
Future sightings: He wishes to be a large and terrible dragon. Like his father.
Unknown Powers: Sinak has mysterious ways with Emeralds. He creates solid barriers with enemies if they are close. It only works when he is very worried about Ghansor and his safety.

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mmm, they're a bit powerful, but ill have to read it over again.

So what does that mean? Please don't logout yet.

there are a bit iffy parts. i can highlight them if u want

Ok deal, just please don't logout on me.

There....*yawn* im so tired lol, but ill get ya through this. Fix that part just a bit and I'll accept. hurry before i fall over lol

How's that? Please don't logout.

thats nice, its great, accepted, and good night.

Thank you!!! Have a nice sleep. Good night.