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Name: - Laiel Nalin
(Lie-el)(Nahl-in)

Age:- ~400

Gender: - Male

Skills:
Spirit Magic: Different from Shade magic. Laiel will call on the Spirits of Destruction, Binding, Healing, or Mystic Spirits. Destruction spirits are spirits that are volatile and destructive. Binding spirits are sadistic and enjoy tieing down their opponents before killing them slowly. Healing spirits are caring spirits that like to heal wounds no matter the alliance. Mystic spirits are a varied type. They do things that the others do not, such as create barriers or hiding Laiel from view of his opponents. Laiel will call on these spirits with an incantation. The longer the incantation, the more powerful it is.
example: "Spirits of destruction, I call upon thee to strike down my foe. Burn his ashes to nothing. I call upon thee, o-spirits of death and fire, give me your power!" This would be a medium strength spell, capable of destroying a wall, or seriously hurting an unprotected opponent.

Release(sword): Laiel carries around a sword that he uses to channel his energy, not magic. Normally, he keeps his power suppressed because it can be felt by anyone near him if he didn't. According to his power level, his sword will take on 1 of 3 forms, these forms will be explained in weapons.

Release(Laiel) - Like his sword, Laiel has forms, but 1 form instead of 3. If he realizes his normal power will not be enough to defeat his enemy, he can go into a Release state. In his state his speed, strength, and power increase times 2. In this form he would rival the strength and running speed of an elf. (maintains for 5-7 my posts. 4 post cooldown) While in this state, his eyes turn red and black and 2 thick black lines curve down from his head, over his eyes, and down to his jaw, then down his neck. They rejoin on his chest and then break apart again to form a line on each limb (both arms and legs)

Speed - This ability allows Laiel to move very quickly form one location to the next so fast it looks like he is teleporting. He can only do this for short bursts. (3 times every post at max, 50 yards distance at max. max would leave him very tired.) When he is in release state, either weapon or himself, the number is doubled. If he is in both release states at the same time, is it doubled and +2.

Sense - Laiel has the ability to sense other creatures strength. Their strength takes the form of a colored outline, or aura, around their bodies. If Laiel concentrates, or if the aura is strong enough, he will be able to sense it from far away. He can control whether or not he sees and feels the aura, and chooses to not use this skill much because if he is around a lot of people, the number of auras would overwhelm him. Laiel's aura is white and emerald green.

Race: - Self reincarnated spirit

Hair: - White, spiky

Eyes: - soft gray

Home Village: - Can't remember

Parents: - Can't remember

Siblings: - none/ Can't remember

Character Personality: Laiel is a kind person who still stop to help a complete stranger. He would rather talk than fight, but will if he must. He hates that there is so much hate and turmoil in the world, and would change it all if he could. He tries to be friends with everyone he meets, even enemies. He doesn't care what side you are are, he believes that there is good in every being, including Galbatorix. He doesn't hate anyone at first, no matter how they may treat him. This doesn't mean that he is incapable of fighting however. If pushed enough, or defending someone, he will fight. His rage is equal to his kindness, it knows no bounds. If angered enough, he will slaughter anyone that opposes him. He is very skilled with the blade and his own magic as well as trickery. He can lead people to believe what he says, becasue he presents himself as an honest person, something he has practiced over many years. Although he hates getting like this (angry, hateful, deceitful) he knows that to survive it is necessary, but will often be depressed for days afterward. Generally, he is a happy, easy going person that if fun to be around and very, very difficult to anger. He will often give his opponents several chances to just talk before he attacks, even if they are attacking him. The quickest way to anger him is to attack someone he holds close like a friend. With you do, there will be no chances, no warnings, and he will likely go all out form the beginning in an effort to kill you as quickly as possible.

Character History: Laiel was once a mighty human warrior. He lived in Alageasia, but can't remember where exactly. He died in a battle, a massive battle, but like his home, he can't remember which one. He was a kind person and fought when he was ordered to, a trait he retained after death. After he died, obviously he became a spirit, but he had a powerful spirit. In the realm of the dead, his spirit glowed brighter than those around him, and when he would get near one, he would absorb it, causing him to glow brighter. In death, he met several spirits who befriended him and allowed him to use their power when he needed, at the cost of some of his own energy. He continued to roam the death realm for an untold number of years, accidentally absorbing weaker spirits. He didn't know he was doing this, all he knew was that he wanted to live again. One day, he glowed brighter than ever before, and a solid figure began to take shape. The process took many years, but once it was complete, he had a physical body again. Since he was technically no longer a spirit, he was shunned from the realm of death and back out into Alageasia. Once there, he found that one of the spirits he had met had given him a special sword, fashioned from part of his own soul that he could use to focus his power and make it change shape and abilities. He couldn't remember anything from his past life, or death, but he knew that he had been alive and that he had died and that he had been given a second chance. He wasn't sure how old he was when he died, so he began counting his years of existence form the time he was reincarnated. he has kept count up to year 400, when he decided that it was no longer important, as it was obvious that he wouldn't die of natural causes. He has traveled almost every where and met and befriended many people. He has connections that many do not know about inside both the Empire and the Varden, but he uses them merely for news so he can stay informed when he travels for a long time. Although he has many friends, he is always looking for more.

Weapons:
Spirit Sword: Laiel's sword is not like any other sword in existence. This sword has abilities that Laiel uses in combat and can be enhanced for a certain amount of time with Laiel's own power. He can use these forms by speaking the sword's name and a phrase, "Lexidon, show them your tru self." for form 2. "Lexidon, end this." for form 3 It takes 3 different forms:
Form 1 - This is it's basic form, a straight bladed katana wit ha silver blade, silver oval cross guard, and black and silver hilt. In the pommel, there is a dark ruby. This form has no abilities.

Form 2 - When Laiel says "Lexidon, show them your true self." His sword will replicate itself into 2 swords, one black with curved spikes around the cross guard and one white with a white halo around the cross guard. In this form, the black sword can take control over surrounding shadows and bend them to Laiel's will. Meaning, he can use them for power, projectiles, shields ect. The white sword allows Laiel to bend the light around him, making it seem as if he is not there, or if there are more of him than there is, or that his is some where is is not, or to temporarily blind his opponent.
(maintains for 10-13 posts. 5 post cooldown)

Form 3 - Laiel must first go threw form 2 before form 3. By says the phrase. "Lexidon, end this." The two sword rejoin and become a long pole weapon. There are blades on either end of the pole. Both blades can use the combined powers of Form 2 as well as the added power to send forth a shock wave when they strike something.
(maintains for 6-9 posts. 5 postcool down. Must wait at least 3 posts before using, after Form 2)

Likes: - People, talking, happiness, sunshine, music, having friends.

Dislikes: - mean people, senseless violence, cloudy days, having enemies, fighting.

Weakness / Fear: - He fears that he will do something to harm his friends, or do something and loose his friends. His weakness is battle, he hates it. He also fears dying, hes already done it once and doesn't want to again anytime soon.

Animal Companions: - none.

Character's Physical Description: 5 feet 7 inches. Short, white, spiky hair. Soft, kind gray eyes. He wears his sword on his back between a long black trench coat that skims the ground when he walks and his gray short sleeve shirt. He wears brown pants and 2 black belts, one for looks that hangs ow on his left side and one for function. His boots are black and worn from walking every where, but well suited for running. He wears a white tank top under his gray shirt that he wears when working or sleeping. Although he was a warrior, he doesn't believe in wearing armor, as it slows him down so evading is more difficult to do for him. So no matter who he is fighting, the only protection he has his his skills and sword.

Dreams for the Future: - that Alageasia will see a new ruler, and have peace once more.

Reason for Dreams: - He hates to see people suffer

Alignment/side: - Good


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December 1st, 2010, 2:23 am Profile
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Post Re: Laiel Nalin
Sounds like a very interesting character Rathon :) I accept, but maybe edit the spirit magic a little so it doesn't seam as if he could be over powered. Everything looks good other wise =)

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I tried to explain it as best I could without stepping into copy right and canon boundaries...I based Laiel off of the anime and manga Bleach xD
Thanks for accepting

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Looks good to me as well. I love him, Rath. :D I Accept.

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Thank you ^^
So does anyone know what I'm talking about when I say Bleach? (not the cleaner)

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Post Re: Laiel Nalin
I do! In fact, when I was reading about the sword I thought of that. (Astralwing, a member here who kind of left, let me borrow her copies of the first couple seasons).

Anyway, do his sword's second and third forms take energy? As long as there's some sort of energy limit (doesn't have to be too strict) then you're set. :)

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Aye there is an energy limit...like in the series, he can only hold it for so long, but the more he uses it the longer he will be able to hold it....I should probably put one though

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Alright, that works. :) I Accept.

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