Zane and Canis were flying through the air searching the ground below for a shade named garzl. " He attacked us in the night, Canis we'll find him and he better be ready to die because he is running out of time. " 'patience dont let the thought of revenge overtake you it is an evil emotion'
" I know Canis I can only try but even a shade should have honor and we must watch out many evil beings prowl these lands". Zane and Canis flew for many miles before anything happened thyen they sensed a powerful being just raw power " Land Canis we " ' Continue on foot ' " You read me like a book Canis lets go. "

OOC: Ok, you really need to fix gammer and spelling. Also, to make it a bit easier for other people, start another paragraph when you are about to write speech.