your fave poem or some u roght...dont be shy cause they mite not mine some thing to some one else but youll no what it means!!


So much deppends upon you
looking behond isnt the key
you lost every thing
even me...

So much deppends upon you
you look behond
now you need me
but am not there...

So much dippends upon you
thought i needed you
now i know
i was wrong!

AWSOME POEMS!!!!!!!!!

Here's one I dedicated to my GF:


A special world for you and me
A special bond one cannot see
It wraps us up in its cocoon
And holds us fiercely in its womb.

Its fingers spread like fine spun gold
Gently nestling us to the fold
Like silken thread it holds us fast
Bonds like this are meant to last.

And though at times a thread may break
A new one forms in its wake
To bind us closer and keep us strong
In a special world, where we belong.

This is actualy a famous poem with many different tenses and from different points of view, but i thought i would post it anyways.

He wants to go home, but nobody's home
It's where he lies, broken inside
With no place to go, no place to go to dry his eyes
Broken inside
His feelings he hides.....
his dreams he can't find.....
He's losing his mind.....
He's fallen behind.....
he can't find his place.....
He's losing his faith.....
He's fallen from grace......
He can't find his place.....

He wants to go home, but nobody's home
It's where he lies, broken inside.....

Thats from Avril Lavigne on the CD Under my skin, and the song Nobodys Home


I LOVE AVRIL LAVIGNE

Anyways heres another.


Wish
If I could have just one wish,
I would wish to wake up everyday
to the sound of your breath on my neck,
the warmth of your lips on my cheek,
the touch of your fingers on my skin,
and the feel of your heart beating with mine...
Knowing that I could never find that feeling,
with anyone other than you.

Cool
Anyway here is one of my own

WHY?

Why did you have to fall grace?
Why did it seem to be to be so great?
Why didn't you escape?
Why didn't you just walk away?

Everything they said,
Every word soaked in,
You said you couldn't take it.

You hated all the thing they said,
You hated the walls that kept you in,
You hated the limits set,
You hated being obdient.

Did they push you over the edge,
Or did you willingly step of the ledge,
Either way now your falling, falling, falling!

Everyone stands in dismay,
Why are you acting this way?
Why did you say the things you said?
Why did you do the things you did?

You were supposed the perfect one,
Not the disoreinted one,
But they didn't know you,
They only saw on the outside,
ONLY ON THE OUTSIDE!

but i saw your pain,
i felt your suffering, my friend
And wept for soul.

so WHY didn't i help?
why didn't i move?
Why did i just sit and watch this happen?

I didn't want you to hate me,
I didn't want to be the one to push you over,
Why I have to wait,
For now i am to late.

I let go,
I LET GO!
I'm so sorry that
I let go.

KLKS
For My Best Friend Faith

copyright 2005

here's one dedicated to the greatest creatures to ever have existed!

you saw so high
you roar so loud
you make all else seem dull

you were the greatest
you were the best
but now you are no more

nothing stood you could not concure
nothing could out shine you

they said you were gone
they greeved your awful end

but you live on
were no one can do you harm

you live within our hearts and minds
you live within our soals

you live with in our dreams and tales
now you've made your holmes anew

you live in Alagaesia
in eggs as hard as stone

yes there will be blood
there will be war
but you shall live again!

thanks for reading hope it wasn't to long
Se onr Sverdar sitjar hvass
Blaze

Cool i love it A Dragon's Tribute. lol

Dragon poems are awsome no matter how long. IF you can, could you post another one?

as i said i only write poems for school when i have to.

all your guys's are good.

i love song lyrics!!

and it's really sweet to write your girlfriend a poem, you person. that's one of the coolest things. i've had a poem written about me Ü. i would post it, but i don't think you guys would understand it cause you don't know the guy.

A Friend's Pain

we met when we were six
and we've grown together
we said we would be friends
always and forever


but when we became freshmen
things started to change
you had made many new friends
our friendship would never be the same


i knew we were growing further apart
it seemed as though you didn't care
but i didn't want to lose your friendship
and you knew i would always be there


so as the skool year ends
and we say our final good-bye's
we bump into each other
and you just stare meeh straight in the eyes


no words left your mouth
and none seemed to be leaving mine
i try to say something
and you just walk away



Eryn

My Best Friend

Today I found a friend,
Who knew everything I felt.
She knew my every weakness,
And the problems I've been dealt.


She understood my wonders,
And listened to my dreams.
SHe listened to how I felt about life and love,
And knew what it all means.


Not once did she interupt me,
Or tell me I was wrong.
She understood what I was going through,
And promised she'd stay long


I reached out to this friend
To show her that i care
To pull her close and let her know
How much I need her there


I went to hold her hand
To pull her a bit nearer
And realized that this perfect friend I found
Was nothing but my mirror.



Barb

Honest Lies

Why does everything seeem to go wrong?
I try to keep a good face,
I do my best to stay strong.
It's just so hard when you're constantly feeling like you have to lie.
About your life and about the times you cry.
I feel like I should hide all my pain and everything I keep buried in my soul.
Do you know how exactly this feels?
I've never felt something this cold.
You might say, "I know exactly how you feel."
But you never will, at least not for real.
You'll never have the pain I hide deep within me.
Not until you look through my eyes and see what they see.
My heart just feels so empty and so full of pain,
and even sometimes my fear hurts and loneliness builds up and makes the anger towards myself hard to mantain.



Hillary S.


these are a couple poems that i really like, hope you guys like them to

Heres a Freeze origional,

Intricate swirls and grooves
Beauty beyond skill of mortal hand

Born of water
Freefalling for ages
As free as the wind

Memory as vivid as any picture
Swept away at the call of the wind

The unjudging final judgement of far to many
Clear as a crystal and cloudy as a storm

The diamond carpet of my heart
It glitters fro all who care to look.

heres an original, sorry if it doesn't ryme much

why doe's my soul bleed?
why can't i be happy?
why doe's everything thats bad have to happen to me?
why do i need to cry?
All i want to do is find that one person who understands me most!
But i can't! Doesn't everyone see that i'm not me?
That im not happy? or am i such an actress that i can fool my family and friends
And temperally myself?
Are people so into themselves that they cant see what i need?
I need a friend, i need happines! but i can't find it
I am hurt, I am lost, I am confused, I am lonely,I am worthless, I am nothing.
I am acting for my friends and family, when im bleeding inside,and i dont even relize
I need help, i need someone who understands.
I just want everything to be normal again!
I want it to go back to what is was like when i was happy!
When i was a child, innocent and oblivious to what the world is like,
The only happy days of my life.
I just want this to end! im sick and tired of dealing with the people that are on this earth!
I dont need this kind of drama!!!! oh how i hate this!!!
Why does it have to be me?
Why can't i be close to someone whithout having to worry about being stabbed in the back time and time again?
Life isn't worth living sometimes.
Tell me, will life ever end

ppl this is my poem i mean i never seen it on the internet:

I found a birdy in the snow how it got there i dont know
i lured it to me with a piece of bread
and i crushed that birdys little head.

poor birdy

I don't really like poems because there almost alwas sad with suffering (or is that songs) oh well here goes


I loved my dog nikkie,
but she had to go,
she was very deer to me,
but she got so slow,

she was sick,
she was bleeding,
there was a tick,
she was pleading,

but she had to go,
why did we do it,
that I do know,
she was suffering!!!!!
why oh why

the really sad part of this poem is that its true. the only parts that lied were: but she got so slow and there was a tick.plese take note this poem was very hard for me to write

aww *hugs you* i know what you're going through my dog has cancer and we are going to loose her very soon , its really hard for me couse we have had her for i think 11 years so there hasn't really been a time that i remember when we havn't had her{i was 2 when we got her}, but dont worry its gunna be ok

I HATE POETRY!!1!1!!

.


HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL HAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHA LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL

THAT'S FUNNY, I'M STILL LAUGHING WHILE WRITING AND THERES TEARS IN MY EYES FROM LAUGHING SO HARD......I CAN'T BREATHE OR ANYTHING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You r horrable!! though it was funny in a way!!! LOL. your laughing viris has spred to me now. LOL

who is it dedicated to??Elisa?? i think its a very good poem.

i lost my cousin and my pop-pop(granddad) to cancer. if my dad, my stepmom, and my aunt dont stop smoking they'll get cancer too.

thats why i have vowed to never smoke or get drunk....

i ttly agree with you *saphira* i will NEVER drink or smoke not even try it

Alien Brother

I see you stairing
with your eyes glaring
mad at who i am
like some completely alien man
why won't you stop
why won't you stay
loving and hating me
in the same day
but yet i know you'll see
what a brother you can be
And it turns out i'd have no other
than you my alien brother


this is a poem i wrote about my older brothers relationship with me

me 2...It's awesome

who is that peom dedicated to? we want to know.

heirs a poem. the wind rattles the grass as the cunning snake rattles it's tail.
every tree has a tale as the mountains do to. the secret night sky reveals more than you know, for the full moon reveals dragons flighing so slow. only the keenest of eyes could spot one a thousand miles below. stay hidden my dragons. you are the last secret.

that was a cool poem

made it up of the top of my head.

wow, *gifted*

a little

lol, im not really in to poems but here's myn i guess..

Day by day
he gazed upon her
Day by day
he side with pation

night by night
he dreamed about her
night by night
he slept alone

morning by morning
he prepaird to meet her
morning by morning
he turned away

evening by evening
he regretted his acttions
evening by evening
he dreamed of this day.


`~`
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thats realy good but this guy sounds realy pathetic

isn't that poem in spiderman 2 ?

ok im not very good poet, i mainly write. but here is one im making up as i go.

Heart of the Ancients

a far away ocean
lost in the dark
Forests of wonders
trapped in an ark
Chaos is rippling
right through their souls
Mountains of darkness
covered in holes
A dark sun is shining
with everlasting light
some day, oh some day
they will win this fight
Never this far
have secrets been told
slowly forgotten
but never grown old
lost in the darkness
covered with frost
people in glaciers
sad cold and lost
this is a story
lost beyond all
The heart of the ancients
is going to fall

WOW...did i write that????

that was really good if it was somthing you just thought of !

thx lol

Sunset Sky
As I look to the sunset sky,
I think about the perfect guy.
What would I like in my man,
That will make me his number one fan?

What can possibly win my heart?
Well I guess he doesn’t have to be smart.
How in the world can he win my love?
He doesn’t have to look like an angel from above.

What do I want to tuck me in at night?
I want someone that will keep away my fright.
What do I want to hear him in my ear?
I want him to tell me there’s nothing to fear.

I want the golden blanket of love
To help us fly like the wings of dove
The golden thread of love divine
Will keep us warm for the rest of time.

I really want this man to be like the sunset sky
I want him to help me learn how to fly.
I want him to be perfect in his own ways
I want to love him for the rest of my days.

that was to romantic for my taste

same here

i thought it was sweet, guess thats cause im a girl

ok heres sumthin off the top of my head.

theres an angel in the sky
im scared too shoot it cus it might die.
soo i yelled out to that thing would u mind me killing off ur sibling?
it told me ur a durty minded fag
so i tried to kill it with a rag.
the end

wow that was short... but not sweet

Here's one that took me 5 minutes

Are you there?Are you there God?
Have you abandoned me?
Why have you done this?
You’ve taken him from me

You took my love, and
You’ve taken my joy.
You’ve stolen him and left me alone.
Why have you become a thief?

He used to love the beach.
The sun would touch his deep brow hair.
His sad brown eyes would start to shine,
When we visited the seaside.

We used to run along the sea.
Be loved to play catch, and only with me.
My little one used to lie in the sun,
To just sit upon the sand.

Lord why did you let him leave me?
Why am I left alone?
I have one last question.
Do all dogs go to heaven?

I hope so

mine took me 1, but thats cause im a little too creative, so ya u get it.

*When you like someone, you want to have her for your own selfish reason
*When you care for someone, you want to make her happy and it's not just for yourself
*When you love someone, you will give anything for her happiness eventhough you have to sacrifice your life

*When you like someone you'll say, "May I kiss u?"
*When you care for someone you'll say "May I hug u?"
*When you love someone you'll come to her and hold tight her hand.

*Like, is when she cried, you'll say, "please don't cry"
"Care, is when she cried, and you'll cry with her
"Love, is when she cried, and you'll let her cry in your shoulder and said, "We will face this problem together"

*Like, is when you see her you'll say, "She's very pretty and beautiful"
*Care, is when you see her you'll see her with your heart not with your eyes
*Love, is when you see her you'll say, "She's a greatest gift from Above God ever gave to me"

*When the girl you like hurts you, you'll get angry and stop talking to her
*When the girl you care hurts you, you'll cry for her
*When the girl you love hurts you, you'll say, "It's fine, she doesn't know what she's doing"

*When you LIKE a girl, you'll MAKE her to like you back
*When you CARE for her, you'll LET her choose
*When you LOVE a girl, you'll always devoted to her and WAIT for her faithfully

*If you Like someone, you'll be with her when it's benefit you
*If you Care for someone, you'll be with her when she needs you
*If you Love someone, you'll be with her no matter her condition

*To like is demanding
*To care for is about take and give
*To love is to giving sincerely


So now... decide with your heart, who's the people that you Like, you Care, or you Love.

cool

Wow I like that its really good.

So So true that is. Now that is a true statement

that was really good

yes the first paragraph of my poem is from spider man but the rest i made up im not much of a starter on poems





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thoes were like beautiful,

heres mine its in my sig but im doing it anyway
Note: it doesnt rhyme

Pride is a strange thing, Guilt is everywhere, It's colored with anger and hate, Love is there, But can you find it? That is the question.

kinda has a strange touch to it. if it was a bit longer....

"Pride is a strange thing, Guilt is everywhere, It's colored with anger and hate, Love is there, So is kindness, Followed by care, But can you find it? That is the question."

Hi saphira75! if u seriously want an opinion about ur poem, ask svit-kona! she's great in things like this... If she ask why u ask her, just say fathskie give u references

I kinda agree with Shade of Fear, I thought it was cool .

i bet if u made it like 5 lines longer, it would be as good as fathskie's

Is that the pic of Durza for the new Eragon movie? I know off of topic, sorry.

I think so, I always pictured him as younger, with shorter slightly spikey hair!

yes, thats him.

Yea, me too

This is the one i entered but the line fixed


Say where
I've been there
Doesn't matter what you say
This is not a game to play
I'll have been there
What do you care?

This is a warning all must hear
For all those who face my fear
Never run far away
That is what I tell today
You'll never a home
And soon back you will come
To find that no-one knows who you are
After travelling so far

Away I flew
Even though I knew
That no matter where I went
If I lived in a castle or a tent
I'll always miss this place
There is nothing that can replace
The feeling that you belong
As you join in the next song

I ran from love
That sent me above
Above life
And now all I feel is strife
Never run far away
Because you'll come back some day
And that's when you'll feel true dismay
Love is where you need to be
No matter what horrors are thrown at thee

i missed an s and a who
and its in the comp section

this is a "spell" I create once I went to school when I'm bored and want to go home...

"Tick tock tickety clock
Spin spin and spin
faster so that the time is thin
Round round and round
till the last ring comes around"

lol I still remember!

thats a good one.

A beautiful maiden,
Her name was Haden,
So proud of her hair,
And she would love all with a hug like a bear.

Until it was time for matrimony,
Her father wanted someone with money,
Her mother wanted a kindly man,
But instead away she ran.

Upon a day,
So far away,
She met the one of her dreams.

He had bright fiery hair,
His whiskers were the softest I swear,
Eyes as green as the grass,
And he had so much class.

It was love at first sight,
Her heart took flight,
As he nibbled her ear,
She felt like she had nothing to fear.

Upon a day,
So far away,
She met the one of her dreams.

But alas, when they came home,
Her father, of sneezes and wheezes, was prone.
Her mother would laugh at the sight of the two,
And of course the cow always mooed.

As the wedding came close,
Her lover would wrinkle his nose,
He drank all the milk,
And slept on her silk.

Upon a day,
So far away,
She met the one of her dreams.

Coming down the aisle,
Her face glowing with a smile,
She looked at her new man,
But at the sudden sight of a dog, he ran.

When she finally got him back,
Wildly kicking in a sack,
She said, “I do”,
He said, “Mew”.

Upon a day,
So far away,
She met the one of her dreams.



I had to do this for latin and it was supposed to be about a forbidden love, like theseus and pyramus(sp) i hope you like it

At first i thought you were talking about a real guy

i know, i made it like that soo it becomes kinda funny. i realy like how it came out.

it was realy good though.

Yes, it was.

That is a really good poem. I hope you like this on


Baby Angel
Underneath a grave of stone,
Pushing up flowers to those unknown,
Lies a child no older than three,
Whose beautiful spirit has been set free,
And those who come upon his grave,
Say to the heavens these three simple words,
God bless him.[/list]

Nice...

O.k. here's mine but it's not a reall poem, cause it's more a story (Like Grinch).

D.Z.H- How did Dawn almost destroyed
all the names


Once upon a time,
there was a land.
So far, but yet
so close,
that you could
touch it with your nose.

In the city,
there was city book,
a special book
which contained all the names
and people had one,
but just one name,
from that book.

But, as always
there was someone
who didn’t like its name
and it didn’t have
the letter
after the surname.

‘’That stinks’’
That person says.
The person’s name was Dawn
and she hated that name.
And she didn’t have a letter
like Leo Knell B.

And why was this
so important?
Because the letter,
had a meaning.
b was beautiful
h as hope
and so on.

Everyone imagined,
what that meaning was
and they tried and
they were happy.
But not all.

Dawn lived,
but not in a house,
not even in a cave,
but she was hanging around
on the trees.

She didn’t eat,
she didn’t sleep.
Sometimes she drank,
but never too much.
Only one single drop
for each day
in the week.


She didn’t have dark hair,
like the others,
her hair was like
precious gold
but her heart…
Was like the darkest dark.

She was smart,
but not nice.
Here hips were smaller,
but she hits like a rhino.
She was taller in height,
but smaller as others
in her heart.

Her heart was as big
as a hamsters bag.
It was impossible
to discover her heart,
but quickly to find
her wrath.
That was Dawn.

What does she want?
Where does she live?
That nobody knows
but they remember,
that she hated all,
not only hers,
but all the names
that there were.

Hope you like it!

that was very discripedtiv

could it be.
an underwater world.
were the waves crash and the rocks hurl.
all the different coulerd fish
and all the sea plants that flourish

could i be
the tangled seaweed
and all the food that the fish need
all the rocks on the sea bed
some shaped round like a head

could it be
the water so clear
and all the sea animals i hear
all the different cretures.
and all thier different features

Let you're dreams flote
in ocean of memories
you'll sank
like a mermaide
in you're sleep.

Let you're dreams fly
throught the sky
let them high
hugh them thight.

Let you're fantasy mix
with sweet words
from his lips,
let you're daydreams go.

You will never be alone,
you will never be afraid
you will never go alone
even in night with no moon and stars
you'll have... someone

Shadows in hills
mist in my ears,
eyes are the soul,
mind is a puzzle
and you're there.

No matter what will happen,
no matter what did happen
I live today,
I wait for tommorow
and I never forget yesterdey.

I sail on clouds of dreams,
I swim in ocean of memories
I walk on rocks of past
and I see heartbeat feelings.

No matter what,
don't let you're dreams desappear,
you'll have your reword
with kings sword,
as a knight.

Through the solid air,
nature force of daydreams
and anger of fire
you'll dance dance of you're life.

Don't stop dancing. Don't stop dreaming.
Keep going. Youst...go.

wow, that's deep

this one really gives me a feeling that I can identify with..

do you just make them all up? or do they also have some feelings of yourself in it?
also, do you think you can write a poem easier when you have a certain kind of feeling?? (like anger, sorrow, happyness)

Akcually it's most of the time feeling, which is fault for poems. When I was crushed about fall love, I was angry, sad and I did not see meaning of life. And I wrote that. But to end this chapter I throwed away poems. I'm little sorry for that, but on other side I feel more easy to talk about what happen.

But sometime it's the insparation. Youst you, pen and note book. Nothing else. You writte and writte and you stop only if someone pulls you back in reality.

It's all up to you. Usually for those which are rookies (can't help I love saying rookie) are writting about feelings. But, when you're getting better in it, you can descripe more and more and sometime it can touch the other person. And when you know what you want to writte, the wall of you and opening your soul to paper will fall appart. Atleast I think that's how the writtening works.

wow, that's so cool..

Nah, youst lot of dreaming in middle of school. And lot of different feelings.

ah, well dreams are good ^.^

Yeah, but not if you dream them in middle of a test Luckuly I study and on the end I've got 8 points (,math, english,slovenian language is counted from 1-10 points , other subjects from 1-5, and little of my knowing
Points:
0,1=F
2-4=D
5,6=C
7,8=B
9, 10=A

Grade
1=F
2=D
3=C
4=B
5=A Simple!¨)

New Path I wonder

As I wonder and wander through the darkest place
A black star shooting through time and empty space
Moving through life without a trace
Going on till the legend dies
With blade of truth cutting through the lies

But a new day dawn
So I sing a new song
Abiding the truth to the floor
Across to the open door

I wonder how I crossed this path
Invisible on this achiest Taft
Awaking from a treacherous nap
I falter across the worlds faded way
Broken to heal is all I can say
Soaking to seal the puzzle I feel
While standing in the rain of a falling red stain.....of grace
Creating what once was an elegant face
Only 'oh' but a taste of his heaven

I wonder as i begin to depict
Peeling away layers of guilt and lost nicked brick
Watching the crumbling corner stone tare away
The potter’s hands never revealing his true plans
A new image cast upon his say
What lay left being true in a brand new way
As Dawn is to day
And Night to morning light
We are who we are in his image

~Pete Knowlton

Let those thoughts fly,
Let those burdens sink,
Let those worries slide,
Off like water on oil.

Let us dream,
of what was once,
of what is now,
And what will.

But most important,
Dream of what might,
Dream of what couldn't,
And dream of those things that you love.

For in dreaming you create possibilities,
Possibilities that might come true,
But be sure that some,
Like evil never do.

__________________________________________________________________________

Any one ever had night mares knows this, I suffer from the fear of agressive dogs, not even knowing why, perhaps I was once a cat, or a horse chased by coyotes. but never mind me, read on, read on till your heart flies and your spirit soars to greater hights that you never felt possible.

-my gosh ever feel really deep and you know weird after you write something, uh wierd.

not too bad of a poem. did you actualy write it? if yes. what made you write it?

No time

No time to be sad,
No time to stop
Cause time goes by
And with it, it takes sorrow.

But time needs time
To heal wounds
And with it,
Hurt stays.

No time to cry,
No patience to say last by
Cause it hurts too much
And I’m not ready to say goodbye.

Ages will past
When I’ll visit you again,
Centuries to get over
All the lies and hurt.

We won’t be same more,
I’ll change,
But first love kiss will be here
Like a shadow, memory on us.

No time to let hurt out,
No time to study hard
No time to let go hand
Of beloved one.

You must go on,
I won’t lie
There won’t be anyone
Like him
But there will be others,
Which will love to take his place.

If I could wish anything
It would be time,
To say by,
To cry,
To study hard,
To let go hand
Of beloved one
And to scream out loud
All that pain.

I would wish joust a second more
Only a small part of time
To say decent by
Before I turned around
And walk away.

Joust time
Which could gave me
My eternal fight peace
To soul, heart and mind
To confess that you’re
Not here any more with me.

But there is no enough time,
No time to spare,
No time to scream,
No time to let go
All your works and names.

No time,
No more wishes
And on end they say:
You must go on, it’s time.

Is it?
Or it’s an illusion
Like your disappearing picture
In my head.

I won’t lie to you,
I won’t lie to myself
Any more,
No more.

There is no time
Which could gave me
Decent goodbye,
No men, child or a girl
Which could replace you.

There’s joust not enough time
In my life.
Joust…
No time…

Mashed Potatoes

Mashed potatoes, mashed potatoes,
Piled up high,
Mashed potatoes, mashed potatoes,
Up to the sky.



Mashed potato clouds,
Mashed potato moon,
Scoop it all up with a giant spoon!

WOOT~ GO MASHED POTATOES!

That is probably one of the funniest poems here lol.

ya normaly poems are dull and sad and there names are why, lost, come back, and stuff like that

I look in the sky and all i see are
my memories of you staring back at me
We used to be close, we used to be friends
When we were young our friendship had no end
And now thinking back to those days im glad
That we had a chance to be friends, to act silly and bad
Now we're all grown up and still i see, my very best friend staring back at me
I thank God above for those days and nights, by my bed i still pray
That you would be safe and kept out of harm and in your life, be no alarm.
I love you with my heart, with all my soul and i thought its about time that you should know.
No matter what im going through, i know i can always depend on you.
And that is why you are my best friend and no matter what, i'll love you till the end

I love love
I love my love
My love is you
So, I love you

Oceans of peace
the tree of life
crystal dreams
sallution to sun.

Valley of tranqulity
four elements
seven chakras
the temple of secrets.

Love eternal
yourney to zen
hidden valley
new snow.

Dreams of Neptune
Chakra of dryads
lonosphere
shadow of a song.

Jing and Jand
illusion fantasy
reall life
the suffering heart.

Hard mind
sensetive soul
venomus poison
and my name.

Not a song,
not a poem,
youst something
from Shadowsong.

Oceans of peace
the tree of life
crystal dreams
sallution to sun.

Valley of tranqulity
four elements
seven chakras
the temple of secrets.

Love eternal
yourney to zen
hidden valley
new snow.

Dreams of Neptune
Chakra of dryads
lonosphere
shadow of a song.

Jing and Jand
illusion fantasy
reall life
the suffering heart.

Hard mind
sensetive soul
venomus poison
and my name.

Not a song,
not a poem,
youst something
from Shadowsong.

This is a poem i wrote about my grandad after he died of cancer
its a sonnet in case you don't know

Forever gone

As I say goodbye to the human race
I think of my time, my past and present
I think further back of hunted pheasant
I see once more a fallen loved ones face
As I leave my home for the other place
And though I believe my life’s been pleasant
Pain forces me to accept the assent
Heavens gates reveal all time, all space

I think of the family I leave behind
Will all the love I feel always show?
Will they remember how brightly I shone?
Will they remember my actions so kind?
No time to worry about what they know
For with these words I am forever gone

i made it right up on the spot lol

Fear.
Something which I hate.
My heart is beatting faster,
I can hear the storm,
no one can save me,
no one can hear my voice.

Scared.
I am.
My eyes are running,
my legs don't obey me,
I'm panic,
still I'm com.

What do I fear?
Spiders, those are nothing.
Darkness? A little bit.
Lusing you?
And to late you go?

I can't. I still dream you're smile,
you're eyes,
and I still can't let you're hand.
I don't want to lose you,
cause I allready I lost you're face,
you're picture in my head.

I'm scared to be alone,
to let you go,
still I want to move on.
Both can not happen.
So what will I do?
Go with you, to the lost paradise
of peace and dreams?
Or stay in hell, all alone
with no mind,
only a shell?

There is one more option.
But I don't want to loose you...

Alright peeps i sent my poem to firetongue and she really liked it. i hope you do to. here it is although i didnt make it myself.

Hello mudduh (mother) Hello fadduh (father)
here i am at camp grenada
camp is very entertaining
and they say we'll have some fun if it stops raining
i went hiking with Joe Spivey
he developed poison ivy
you remember Lenerd Skinner
he got totally poisoning last night after dinner
all the counselers hate the waitors
and the lake has alligators
and the headcoach wants no sissies
so he reads to us from something called ulysses
now i dont want to really scare ya
but my bunk mate has malaria
you remember Jeffory Hardy
theyre about to organize a searching party
Take me home oh mudduh fadduh
take me home i hate grenada
dont leave me out in the forest where
i might get eaten by a bear
take me home i promise i will not make noise
or mess the house with other boys
oh please dont make me stay
ive been here one . . . whole . . . day
dearest fadduh darling mudduh
hows my precious little brudduh (brother)
let me come home if you miss me
i would even let aunt bertha hug and kiss me
wait a minute it stopped hailing
guys are swimming guys are sailing
playing baseball gee thats betta (better)
mudduh fadduh kindly disregard this letta (letter)

How was it? Was it okay?

That was funny

he wakes up in the morning
wipes the long hair from his eyes
puts on his tatered jeans
and his leather jacket ripping at the seems
he jumps down the stairs playing air guitar
goes out the door and jumps in his car
turns on the ignition turns the radio on
head bangs down the street to his favorite song

He has the spirit
the spirit of rock and roll
he loves to hear it
rock's in his heart and in his soul

He jumps into the concert hall
runs to the stage having a ball
jumps right into place
his heart starts to race
as he plays that one single cord
and then the crowd roared

He has the spirit
the spirit of rock and roll
he loves to hear it
rock's in his heart and in his soul

he says goodnight to his fans
all in a deep deep trance
goes out to party
and he does it harty
he goes home and sleeps it off
as he softly listens to his rock
chanting in his head
as he lies asleep in his bed

He has the spirit
the spirit of rock and roll
he loves to hear it
rock's in his heart and in his soul

thanks.

I like it.

heres one i made up last night. it makes no since but oh well. i was bored....

a love true. Ive seen not one
love true. Ive seen many "Loves"
but not one pure, tender, and well
true. Is there a such thing as a love
true? or is there no hope for me and you?