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Eragons twin sister Erais
Sovereign DragonRider
Joined: February 13th, 2006, 11:02 pm Posts: 4247 Location: A little place I can call my own...
Gender: Girl
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 Kiakashi: A new knight born
Even though Kiakashi has spent her life in a orphanage, she isn't sure if it really is her eighteenth birthday, but she is told she needs to go out on her own now.
She was given some food and was sent on her miserable way. She was told that the town of Shiyunt often had free positions for jobs. So she decided to make her way there.
She set out on a road that led from the small she knew only a little of. She headed south for the new life she hoped would be grand.
Twilight was coming down like a blanket and Kiakashi put her hood down, her dark hair was shimmering agaisnt the coming stars and moon. The cool air felt good and it was fresh as if a slight rain storm had come down earlier.
Kiakashi was not looking where she was going, she tripped over what seemed to be a low wall. It was made from wood and when she went to look closer it slowly turned into a small glass rose. When she looked closer she noticed a little Ither trying to free herself.
Kiakashi broke the silver rose and the Ither came to her ear, and she began to talk toour to her.
"If you cotinue to your destination, stay there and learn trades, stay there and work al over town. As soon as you have mastered the skills there I will see you."
Then she was gone, Kiakashi still confused kept walking. Kiakashi walked all night long and didn't feel tired at all, the Ithers words still in her mind, troubling her.
About the time the sun started to rise Kiakashi could see the town. She walked a bit faster, it took about another half half hour to reach the town. When she did she consintrated on looking for an inn. She found one and walked in.
"What can I do for you ma'am." The bar tender, also owner, said to her in a heavy Irish accent. "I need a place to rest, but I don't know how I could pay for it." The bar tender came around to her. "You can work for you stay, are you a good cleaner, a good cook?" He asked her with a smile. "I am good at cleaning, but I have never cooked before."
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Last edited by Eragons twin sister Erais on August 21st, 2006, 3:14 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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August 8th, 2006, 4:39 am |
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Shade of Fear
RPG Team Head
Joined: February 6th, 2006, 11:51 pm Posts: 4527 Location: Dreaming.
Gender: Guy
Affiliation: Lamp Shade
Dragon: DrAgonPhD
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Nice job Erais, plz write more ^^
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August 8th, 2006, 5:03 pm |
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Eragons twin sister Erais
Sovereign DragonRider
Joined: February 13th, 2006, 11:02 pm Posts: 4247 Location: A little place I can call my own...
Gender: Girl
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Thanks Shade.
If I get five more honest opinions then I will continue.
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Take the Magic: The Gathering 'What Color Are You?' Quiz.
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August 9th, 2006, 3:20 am |
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Zarkal the plague
DragonRider in Training
Joined: April 3rd, 2006, 12:56 am Posts: 532 Location: somewhere deep in my mind
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i liked it plz right more
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I remember when i was young in 1777. I remember being a powerless man that could not control my fate much less that of the people around me. I temember hearing the howls of the wolves and wishing i could run with them. And then came that faithful day when i was attacked by a lone wolf looking for food. It turns out what he called a curse was a blessing to me. I was finally able to run with the wolves not just in my imagination but in reality with four paws of my own. I was no longer a mere man or a victim of fate but a creature of the night, an immortal, A WereWolf.
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August 9th, 2006, 11:16 pm |
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Tarikaa
Peasant Elder
Joined: April 27th, 2006, 10:38 am Posts: 88 Location: Sydney Australia
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it's really good...write more!!
_________________ Atra esterní ono thelduin;
mor’ranr lífa unin hjarta onr;
un du evarínya ono varda.
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August 21st, 2006, 9:39 am |
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Pomfret
Sovereign DragonRider
Joined: March 11th, 2006, 5:22 pm Posts: 4742 Location: Hint: i belong in the air.
Gender: Guy
Affiliation: Dragonriders
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Yeah. Put some more in there. Its great! 
_________________ Forever Honor-bound, Forever Strong
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August 21st, 2006, 3:04 pm |
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Shur'Turgal Eragon
Peasant
Joined: December 14th, 2006, 12:06 am Posts: 45 Location: camping with my dragon in Du Weldenvarden
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ya this is really awesome,wright some more!
_________________ (\.../) This bunny may seem cute....Buts its...EVIIL!!
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(") (") the bunnys will someday rule!!!!
Thier weapons:spoons,using karate with ears,and their furry feet of doom!
I used to be a chimpanzee,i threw bananas at innocent people.
bunnys will invade my workshop of plans on how to make world domination easy
We are all doomed!!
O->-< stickman,he is my stickman! AkA "Evil Genius"
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December 18th, 2006, 4:06 pm |
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ioksok
Wise DragonRider
Joined: February 25th, 2006, 11:30 pm Posts: 1068 Location: Freeburg
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yeah i like it to
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MY RP Charies Ghoum http://www.saphiraforums.com/en/viewtopic.php?f=55&t=4342 Groudes http://www.saphiraforums.com/en/viewtopic.php?f=55&t=1439 Ioksok http://www.saphiraforums.com/en/viewtopic.php?f=55&t=991
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December 18th, 2006, 9:39 pm |
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