The Prophecy Of Scale
By, Blake Burns


Dedications: My Mom for lovng me no matter what....My Dad for laughing with me...My Brother for annoying me...My favorite authors....last but not least....you guys....For helping me in the begining.....Thanks...

let the story begin with the prolauge

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Prologue

In The World of Rosun, A world under siege by Enemies known as the Banes. The People of Dsuius were to protect each other, and that they did, but it wasn’t enough. The Dsuiusians had a room of prophecies.....all that have happened have been correct. There were a very special few...that said that a great Hero will save them from the Banes. All the other prophecies suggest that this prophecy will come next....it is known as the The Prophecy of Scale......

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That's the prolauge give your opinions please...

I like it but post more i want to read more.

yeah thats pretty good id like to read more when you post it

Her ya go right of the preses..not really..but yeah...lol

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Chapter 1: That feeling that tells you something...

Knock! Knock! It was Mary....Mary is Chris’s baby Sister....Chris got up and went to the door...He opened it and saw Mary sitting on the floor dressed up and ready to go sledding...oh yeah..it’s winter I always take her out because mom always cooks a big dinner...why am I the 12 year old? He thought.”Hi!” Mary said.”Hi!” Said Chris. “We go seding?” asked Mary. “Yes we will let me just go and get my stuff.” Chris said smiling at his sister. He loved his sister she’s just so sweet and innocent. He walked into the kitchen to get his gear in the closet. “Hi mom.” said Chris. “Hi honey. Are you going with Mary to sled?” She asked. “Yeah.” said Chris. “don’t do anything bad it’s almost Christmas.” She said. He gathered up his gear and went to get Mary. Something feels wired today....just wired....He thought. Don’t worry it’s almost Christmas. He thought and gathered Mary up. He stepped outside and started plodding through the snow to the hill they always sledded on.

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Replys plz

still good can't wait for the next chapter

Here ya go chapter 2

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Chapter 2: Why You Should Hate Falling....

When Chris and Mary got to the top of the hill they made their way down and up and down with Mary yelling with joy all the way down. When it was 8:00 Chris wanted to gather up Mary and the sleds so he could get home eat and flop on his bed and go to sleep. He was about to gather Mary up but he couldn’t find her anywhere. He looked for her and she was on the top of the hill saying “More!, More!” she yelled. “Ok one more time.” said Chris. They went to Mary’s Favorite part. The one with the ramp they went down onto one of the smallest ramps so he didn’t hurt Mary. It was one of the ones no one rode on because it was so small just a test one to test to see if the snow was strong enough. They went down and hit the ramp he closed is eyes for impact.....there was none...he opened his eyes and saw himself falling into blackness.

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It is good. Just hard to read.

nice twist

Okay..i havent benn posting lol (complete accident....)
but heres more.

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Chapter 3: That Sinking Feeling...

Chris fell and fell for what felt like an eternity until he heard running water. Splash! He hit the water and wondered where he was...The sewer! Of course that little one I see in the summer....everyone says that people have fallen done that and have never ben seen again....I hope that’s just a story.... He thought. He still felt Mary in his hands they were floating down the sewer. What is this stuff it smells good in a sewer......Fresh water?! He thought surprised. The there was a great tug on them...What now? He thought very annoyed......Swoosh! Swish! Chris and Mary were being pushed towards a waterfall. Mary was already unconscious.....Wait...were hea- that was his last thought before that back of his head hit a sewage pipe and he was knocked out...they went over the waterfall only Chris hanging onto Mary...as they fell to their death...Unconscious and helpless.....

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there ya go......

if not to much to ask if you could post your favorite animal here id apreciate it (writers block)

What made you say 'baby sister' instead of 'little sister' ? How old mary was ? I was mistaken it as "baby sitter" until I re-read them

And oh, my favorite animal is cat.