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Name: - Beleg

Age:- 22

Gender: - Male.

Skills: He started his axe skill when he was 10, after he found his fathers axe in his closet while his father was away. Since then he has taken to the axe like a babe to its mother. He learned quickly how to use axes and to use nothing else. He hates any other weapon but an axe, as he is too obsessed with axes, and refuses to learn any other skills.

Race: - Dwarf.

Hair: - Reddish brown.

Eyes: - Brown with flecks of blue.

Home Village: - Buragh

Parents: - Father is Sarn and mother is Hiril. Both parents died in an Urgal attack while he was at home practicing with his axe.

Siblings: - None

Character Personality: Beleg is easy and outgoing and loves children. He wants to get married and have many children to carry on the family name someday. His weakness seems to be beautiful women, especially the city sweetheart Meleth. He often drinks; solely for the fun of having the icy feeling of the alcohol slip down his throat. When he drinks, he is unable to practice his axemanship, which makes him mad and goes home to sober up and feel sorry for himself. When alone, he loves to write poetry - though he has next to no talent for it- and to sharpen his axes for the next time he goes out into the countryside to try and find the Urgals that killed his parents.

Character History: Born into a family of Stonemasons, Beleg was forced to adopt the Stonemason's trade. When he was 10, he put up his tools and left to think in the mountains. When he came back everyone that knew him could tell that he had changed. It was not till 4 days later that his parents learned the truth: He was quitting the family tradition of Stonemasonry. His parents and friends did not support this decision as Stonemasonry is an admired trade in the “Dwarven circles”. He began wanting more and more to join the Dwarven Military; during this time, his father and mother went away for one week. While his parents were gone, he went looking around his house. What he found surprised him. He found an axe, a matching leather carrying device for the axe and a sturdy leather belt. He played with them for a few days before he put them away. He had numerous scratches and bruises when his parents returned. When his parents asked what had happened, he said simply, “I was playing with my friends and it got a little crazy”. He did not ask of his fathers weapons until two years later when he approached his father about them. His father explained that he was once an Officer in the military, until he turned in his axe for Stonemason tools. Beleg asked his father for permission to start rapid training with the axe. His father granted Beleg's wish and set up training sessions every other day with his old mentor Tropin. Around this time Beleg's parents went out into the countryside and were spotted by an Urgal patrol and killed. Beleg grew to love his mentor until he tragically died in a battle with the Empire's soldiers. Beleg has from thence trained himself and is one of the greatest Axe-men alive.

Weapons: A leaf bladed axe. He uses it to hunt all manner of beasts and to fight with Urgals in attempts to get his revenge on the urgals that killed his parents in cold blood.

Likes: - Beautiful women, drinking in excess, and killing Urgals.

Dislikes: - Urgals, Empire soldiers, anyone that dislikes him.

Animal Companions: - None.

Character's Physical Description: His hair is the color of rust that has been polished to a dull shine. His skin is tanned and looks like olive oil. It is regarded as looking as fair as an elves'. His muscles are impressive and helps him to attract the beautiful women he loves so much. His height disadvantages him in a fight with an Urgal. At a stout 4' 2” he is short but can stand up to anything that comes in his way; short of Galbatorix himself.

Dreams for the Future: - To avenge his mother and father deaths.

Reason for Dreams: - His parents were brutally killed by Urgals and put on stakes for sport.

Alignment/side: - Varden/dwarves.

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Last edited by fronzz on May 3rd, 2007, 4:15 pm, edited 1 time in total.

May 2nd, 2007, 9:19 pm Profile
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Its good, all I can see is that the personality needs to be 6 lines longer.

O.o Wow, you use "axes" in almost every sentence.

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I only say he has some spelling mistakes, but other than that, excellent job Fronzz! :D

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Added a few things. :D

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Well Imo thats good enough! True you do overuse the word axe a little bit, but who doesn't these days! Accepted!


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