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Post New version of my character...
Hey guys, like some of you (who read my RP) know, I am getting rid of some of my characters. Specifically, I finally decided to lose my dragon, and as a result have some interesting changes happen to Siromo. For one, I'm changing the spelling a little bit.

Name: Simoro

Age: 60

Gender: Male (of course)

Job/Specialty: Former Dragonrider who has sworn revenge against the empire and is sometimes controlled (differently from a shade, in which the body is almost completely taken over by an evil sprit) by a *not* evil spirit.

Skills: He is excellent with a blade, though his magic skills are much better. He is sometimes aided by a spirit of the dead - mabye his dragon, maybe something much longer dead - and during these times he has the abilities equal to a shade at his leisure, but he cannot control when these things happen... yet. However, some of the abilities have started to bleed over to his normal consiousness, and thus his power and knowledge has increased and is increasing all of the time. Unfortunately he has yet to understand why.

Race: Elvaan/(Part Shade)

Hair: Jet Black

Eyes: Sparkling blue

Home Village: Ellesméra

Parents: Oromis and an unknown member of Islandazí's family (no one knows about his parents, though.)

Siblings: None

Character Personality: He was once recessive, and rarely spoke. However after Gallabatorix killed Ohen, he tends to be more forceful and is not afraid to speak his mind. He built up charisma rapidly while a rider, and can handle himself well in public if nessesary. If and when he is approached by a stranger, he uses caution and rarely reveals anything about himself.

Character History: He is the son of a member of Islandazi's family, and Oromis, though none but him, Islandazi, and Oromis know. They had kept his existance a secret for almost sixty years, and if someone found out who he really was, they tried to cover it up. Because of this life of secrecy, he was not comfortable in large crouds, and had bad social skills. However, after forty-four years of this secrecy, he grew tired of it, and, without alerting anyone, he slipped off into the forest, and eventually deep into the mountains. During his time here, he grew a strong bond with living things. Suddenly, after two years of living alone with only the birds and the beasts of the wild, he heard a sharp peeping, which he didn't understand or recognize. However into the night, a great white dragon emerged from a stone near his glade, and claimed him as its rider. Since this time, he grew a strong bond with this dragon, whom he named Ohen. In the next three years, he flew back to Ellesméra, and met his father, Oromis, who was surprised by the fact that a dragon's egg had existed so deep in the wild and out of the Empire's, or the elves' grasps. However during those three years, he passed as much knowledge to Simoro as possible, and finally has decided it is time for him to reveal himself to, first the elves, then the world. While Simoro was uncomfortable with this, he agreed to do it, knowing that his presence would help destroy the empire, which he vowed his life to do.

Eventually, after many hardships and many friendships, he made the boldest of all moves. He went directly to Gallabotorix and showed himself, with an element of surprise. They faught and the king won, against Ohen. Then events fell into the hands of fate, and somehow Ohen called for help via magic at the last possible moment, and in a way it came. Ohen was frozen in stone, and Siromo, as he was still called, was in a magical place with someone known as Cassandra. He eventually left, and while Cassandra believes that the stone can be broken and the dragon freed, Simoro (as he has now chosen to be called) doubts of this, because if not by the fatal spells of the Empire's King, because of the immense power used for that final, fatefull call. Since the day he left that place, his power has grown beyond recognition of his old self. Somehow Ohen seemed to have imbued some of his power in Simoro, and with it came recognition of spirits that normally ignore humans; Spirits who usually make there appearances unseen and shrouded in mystery; Good spirits with the power of a shade, but without the dark aspirations. Now he is occasionally overshadowed (for lack of a more accurate word) by such spirits, and with each time they seem to leave him more power, and ultimately, more knowledge. However it is their choice when to come, and they rarely wish to alter the course of fate. Often they come at less convenient moments, and never before have they came at an important one, save the moment he spoke a word, unknown to the deepest magicians, incomprehendable by the greatest speakers of the ancient language, that saved him from a certain fate of death. Thus was made Simoro, "The Unfortunate." And now those who heard of his fight against Gallabatorix know him as "The Fated" or "The master of Fate." These are very innacurate, but is obvious that he is more powerful than he, or anyone, knew.

Weapons: He wields his magic, and a blade white in color.

Likes: Friends, family, and victory.

Dislikes: The Empire, and traitors.

Animal Companions: None.

Character's Physical Description: Siromo is short, and his dark black hair contrasts greatly with his pale white skin. His features were sharpened by his connection with Ohen. He wears light elven clothing, all white, and many think he is a ghost when he is "overshadowed," for he is said to glow.

Dreams for the Future: Overthrow the Empire.

Reason for Dreams: Ohen's Death

Alignment/side: He is not sworn to anyone still, but he fights with whomever is against the empire.

EDIT:OOC: Wow thats a lot of storyline...

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Last edited by Osthato Chetowä on April 13th, 2006, 2:41 am, edited 2 times in total.

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That's a very intriguing and complex character. I like him better than the older version.

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April 13th, 2006, 2:38 am Profile
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It is pretty good. It'll probably be accepted on sight. Can you please put spaces between the characteristics? It's kinda hard for me to read and I might have missed something. And Wing might suggest putting it in the right order.


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Thanks! can't wait to RP with him tomorrow.
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