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 The Scars of Sin, (poem) 
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New Peasant
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Post The Scars of Sin, (poem)
~The Scars of Sin~


Fear of falling,
Falling, falling,
Down into the pits of nothing,
Stretching out their hands and nearing.

Grasping hands,
Of morbid deceivers,
Suffocating breath,
That traps my lungs.

Shadows closing in,
Intoxicating me with sin,
With open mouths,
That bends and shrouds.

A hole in the heart of my enemy,
Instead a black soul of fire,
Melting me, I think my life is ending,
Can't see a light, just pray that I'll have sight.

Hollow robes of tattered remains,
Clothed around the diabolical fiend,
Who now possesses me and drains,
The life I once thought I claimed.

Something stirred,
A radiant joyful light,
Vaguely through shadows that hide,
Drifting away at the glorious sight.

The light remains,
Opposing darkness, but embracing sane,
Sin has left it's mark,
I think it's time for a new start.

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November 15th, 2006, 7:26 pm Profile
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You should post this in the Fiction area. Its good though.

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November 15th, 2006, 8:38 pm Profile
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I agree, but it is very good. Is it all your own work or plagerism/ inspiration from someone else?

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November 15th, 2006, 9:26 pm Profile
New Peasant
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It's all my own work, lol, I promise.

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"He is not his own, rather a duplicate, in a trapped reflection, only to find darkness, that once was not there."
~Drake~ From my book: The Island of Driss

"Soon, we must all face the choice between what is right and what is easy."
~Albus Dumbledore~

"To the well organized mind, death is but the next great adventure."
~Albus Dumbledore~

"I will only truly have left this school when none here are loyal to me... Help will always be given at Hogwarts to those who ask for it."
~Albus Dumbledore~

"It is our choices, Harry, that show what we truly are, far more than our abilities."
~Albus Dumbledore~


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