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Name: ilian

Age: 13

Race: Human/elf

Gender: Female

Hair: blond

Eyes: deep blue

Body: slim and slender

Home Village: Uru'bean

Parents: never knew then

Siblings: none

Personality: Kind, Loyal, can get very angry, smiles alot, thinks of others before herself,(sometimes things tend to disappear when she around) trustworthy

History: She grew up on the streets of Uru'baen. She was kind to everyone. One day she was taken in by a farmer and his wife at the age of 5. When she old enough she had gone to see the king for an answer, and she did not get the answer that she wanted, she insulted the king. When he found out he had the farmer and his wife killed. She vowed to her self that she would never go back to the king unless it was to kill him.

Weapons: short sword and a daggers

Likes: someone who can take a joke. Also a good companion

Dislikes: people who are impatiant, and who mocks others

Animal Companions: Dragon red and gold

Physical Description: A silver bracelet.Whith a tattoo of a serpent runing down her back. She wears a black circlat a brown shirt and a pair of black paints that is torn slightly. with a dark green clock slightly faded from use.


Dreams: To kill the king

Reason: He killed the only people that she ever cared about

Side: neutral


Dragon Name:
Age: not hatched
Gender: female
Parents: don't know
History: Galbitorix tried to get her to hatch for years but she never did, until the day that ilian came and stole the egg.she hatched for ilian when she and the egg were out of the city for two months.

Personality: protective, loyal, wise
How they met their rider: ilian stole the egg
Color: gold with red stripes
Appearance: looks evil but is not
Dreams for future: to see the dragon race come back
Reasons for dreams: she does not want the dragon race to be lost forever

nice charry

how is he neutral if he wants to kill the king? just asking

you dont have to work for the varden to want and kill the king

but thats against evil, so that means hes good, not neutral. oh well, his charry

I think you're going to need more history and personality, and you're missing a couple fields, like RACE. I don't know whats the be all end all of being accepted, but that's my opinion.

Im not a guy
And what does your last think say svit

You should probably fill out the Dragon from application, on the sticky topic. It will tell you what the needed fields for your Dragon are.

Oh, and my name is 'Svit-kona,' the elven honorific for a woman of incredible wisdom.

sorry

do I do that here or where

Just edit your post so that you have all the required fields and your history and personality are older.

in answer to your pm, a lot

do I need anything else

see previous message please.

is that a yes or no

Lots more personality for both.

ya glenwings right it's good but more personality would be smart

Also more appearance and better spelling.

good.needs some more history on both. i like the part where the dragon isnt hatched.a lot of people dont do that. i also like the part that the dragon is gold with red stripes

thank you

more on personality and appearance

glenwing you need to chill i read it the first time

yes but you didnt change it before he logged on and looked at it so he thinks you need more if you changed it or you still need more even if you havnt changed it

Its pretty good all you need to do is edit it a little

better