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 Moris Vandir 

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Name: Moris Vandir

Age: 100

Gender: Male

Job/Specialty: skilled axe man, swordsman, and good with a bow and arrow. He also is a very good blacksmith

Race: Elf

Hair: Silver as the moon

Eyes: Silver as the moon

Body: Slim but muscular like all elves with a scar on his back that goes from his neck all the way down his spine that he wishes to keep as a souvenir of a battle

Home Village: Ellesmera

Parents: Vandor and Tiffany Vandir

Siblings: None

Character Personality: He is a tough elf that defends for him self. He always walks alone or with his dragon. He is an elf that gets angry quick but cools down in an instant. He also likes to fly whenever possible but sometimes he will walk when it is not necessary so he can stay fit. When in a very bad mood he will go to a training arena and spar with someone. When sparring or fighting he always brings back the pain of his scar to make him a better warrior. Whenever he is in a happy mood, he will usually do much for the poor whether they are evil or good.

Character History: He was born on the very day that the blood-oath celebration started. When he was born his parents rarely spent time with him. He usually spent time with his dad by learning how to make swords. He then started to train in magic with some of the best spell casters in Du Weldenvarden. At the age of 10 he was very skilled in both magic and blacksmithing and was brought to the dragon eggs. When brought to them a green dragon hatched for him. He named him Adin. On that day he started to train to become a dragon rider. Unlike the traditional ways of the rider he crafted his own sword and enchanted it himself. He was the perfect sword that was ever made. At the age of 16 he also started to train in the ways of an axe. He made an axe out of the same material he used for his sword and enchanted and colored that also. By the age of 30 he was one of the best dragon riders ever. Him and his dragon would go around town and fly everywhere. On his 50th birthday he got a scar on his back fighting a Forsworn dragon rider. He killed the rider and the dragon also died. He kept the scar on his back as a remembrance that there was still evil afoot. At the age of 75 he traveled to the Boer Mountains to learn more about the axe and blacksmithing. He learns it all from Hrotharg himself. Now it is his 100th birthday and he celebrates at the Menona tree. He dances and dances and at the end of it all he travels to the Hardarac Desert to go defeat Galbotrix.

Character's good personality traits: He is quick to cool down and always fights like it is to the death no matter who he is against.

Character's bad personality traits: He is quick to get mad and can really be stubborn.

Weapons: A Emerald sword with the one of most perfect emeralds in its hilt named Edon that is slung on his back., A mighty Emerald axe with another beautiful emerald in the handle named Lief sits on his mighty leather belt, and also a pair of twin emerald daggers that have yet another emerald in each with poison injection at the tip named Nig and Gin, the daggers are always hidden in his boots.

Likes: He loves his dragon and also his weapons that are always handy. He also likes nature and all around.

Dislikes: He hates the empire for what they do and did and especially Galbotrix

Animal Companions: None (as said before dragon not an animal)

Character's Physical Description (clothes, accessories, etc.):he wears emerald color armor which he crafted himself and has a mighty leather belt around his waist. He also has his back sling that holds his knife. His boots are made out of the finest leather that he could get without killing an animal that also have sheaths built in for his daggers.

Dreams for the Future: To kill Galbotrix and free the dragon that is under his spell.

Reason for Dreams: to free that dragon and also Galbotrix must pay for what he did.

Alignment/side: He is with all that oppose Galbotrix

Dragon

Dragon Name: Adin

Age: 90

Gender: Male

Parents: Barda and Jasmine

History: He hatched exactly 10 years after the Blood oath celebration. When he was 20 he was one of the best dragons around in the whole Alagaesia. When he turned 40 he helped destroy a forsworn and his dragon. When he was 75 him and Moris travelled to the Boer mountains. Now he is 90 years old and ready for battle

Personality: He always has a joke to tell and is always giving advice to Moris. He prefers to be in company of only his rider and sometimes another rider and thier dragon. He is adventureous and skillful in flight and will take any foe down.

How they met their rider: He hatched for Moris in the palace of Ellesmera.

Color: Emerald

Appearance: 50 spikes going down his back to the end of his tail and at the end there are spikes surrounding the whole tail for about 2inches that he uses as a weapon. He is the most magnificatn emerald color and he also wears a strap of strecthing leather on his head that has the finest emreald in all of Alagaesia on it.

Armor: He wears a leather armor that can stretch to his size so it never has to be replaced

Dreams for future: To kill Galbrotrix

Reasons for dreams: Galbrotix brought evil to all of the world.

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March 19th, 2006, 4:18 am Profile
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Isn't having poisonous daggers in boots dangerous?

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Unless they come out the front of the boot, so when you kick people they get stabbed! :lol:

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March 19th, 2006, 1:02 pm Profile
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Your character is very 'mighty,' isn't he? (I say this only as I noticed you used the word alot. Also, is his father's name Vandor Vandir?) More personality, and perhaps a bit more history.

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with the daggers they are kept in a sheath in the boot and they only let out poison on my command hense the part Poison Injection and yes his fathers name is Vandor Vandir and his mothers name is Tiffany Vandir

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I like your character, very long discription, it took me a while to read

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good that is how it is suppose to be. And also something i forgot about in last post is that he is not mighty only his stuff

and also svit-kona i did as you asked

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waiting ver patiently waiting very patiently man i am bored (again it has been 24 hours since i last posted on this subject so this is ok with rules)

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You could always just edit your previous post instead of adding another . . .

I like your character, but if your dragon was born at the Blood-oath, wouldn't he be alot older than 40 when he killed a forsworn?

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good character. the longer the better

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no Moris not Adin and actually 40 sounds about right cause it would be about 40years after galbotrix took his spot as king so that would be about right only 60 years from present day say time during eragon books

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hes never had a steed ar other animal?

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he got his dragon when he was 10 what do you think when he was 10 he was to young to really get one and he had his dragon plus elves dont really have steeds they call them from the land............... or stables

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1.yeah true
2.Eragon and his friends rode on steeds when they were travelign to Ellesmera

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yes but he needed the steeds because he needed to keep his dragon a secret and couldnt just fly around yelling hi to galbotrix as he went through

waiting for glenwing to accept this do de da do de daaaaaaa waiting for glenwing to finally be on do da do de

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You wouldent want to give away Ellesmera's location would you?

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no why in the world would i want to do that

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if you dont want to you would ride a steed in to Ellesmera

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Yeah you just use the stables as you know elves let the steeds run wild in Du Weldenvarden


waiting for someone to check and accept it come on ppl i am very bored i want to start using this char i am waiting

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waiting for glenwing

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you MUST WAIT! Pestering me makes me take longer, and your dragon needs more personality, appearance and history. Go go go, its a person too.

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I am done o great master Glenwing (bows in loyal manner)

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accepted...get louıs to add you I cant from here

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