Name: Elminster Anyor

Age:28

Gender: Male

Skills: Speed of light, Magic Bolt, Staves, Smithing, Enchanting, Healing, Soul Capturing, Proficiency
with Medium Weapons, Helfire, Ice of the Spine, Earthen Rage of Dwarves, Water of the Ocean, Lava of the Mountains, Levitation, Fire Touch, Chill Touch, Dimach (Soul Attack), Double Hit, Triple Hit, Multi Attack, Shield Defense, Shield Bash.

Race: His mother was of the Humans, his father an elf.

Hair: Dark as the the night in Fathen Dur's darkest caverns

Eyes: Brown like the wood from the Du Weldenvarden

Home Village: Surda

Parents: Both were lost in the attacks from Galbatorix

Siblings: He had none

Character Personality: The one who wont talk unless he has too, he loves adventure and battle, and, he is, a Dragon Rider. On hot summer days he loves to find a quiet place in the middle of the forest to think. On cold windy days he trys to stay out side for as long as he can and goes numb. He doesn't like to be around other people much because some think he is weird because of his seldomness. He is very good at flying on his dragon, but in the middle he tends to get nervous considering these are some of his first few battles. When he lays by the water he feals peaceful inside, knowning that the water is like his life, rushing up to him so very quickly, but receading slowly. When he visits beautiful places he can picture them in his mind like photo as a treasure and keep it there forever. The only thing that he remembers about him and his parents if of their trips together where they went to beaches and he even remember some elves.......

Character History: Born in Surda he grew up alone with his parents but his father was away from home msot of the time hunting or working for the town guard, his mother stayed home with him untill he was old enough to cook for himself. One day while out in the desert hunting for cactus milk and needles for his mothers salves when suddenly he saw smoke from the village, and as he ran back he thought he saw a shadow of a giant dragon flying from the town. As he entered town everything was in ruins, there were few people crawling out from under rubble moaning and groaning but there was even more ripped to shreads and roasted just like meat over a fire. As he walked to his house he dreaded what he might find there, but what he found was not as he expected there was nothing wrong with the house's outside but inside it looked like a war took place. He couldn't find his mother or father anywhere and everyone else in the village who was alive helped search but no one found anything. Now years later after travelling the road picking up bits of magic in places led up to his biggest event, finding a dragon egg in a fissure in the earth on the way to Farthen Dur from Surda. Then he was taken captive by Galbatorix's personal guards for treason because everyone from his village blamed him of dealing with an evil necromancer who conjured up undead to kill the town (which isn't true). But considering him being only a child they didn't believe him and locked him up. He lived in prison for 2 years rotting away like the sandwhiches given to him so they couldn't send him to sleep and read his mind, the only thing he ever ate was food a small salamander that was held captive for entertainment gave to him. Then one day a mysterious man paid the bail on Elminster and he was free, but as they walked out of the ruinous town, full of drunks and some very weird things, the man suddenly dissapered but left a picture with writing on the back saying Du Weldenvarden near the spine is where you should meet me to find out about his parents in 3 years. But the picture showed his parents standing and hugging clearly drawn by a very outstanding artist. Now 2 years later he is waiting for the chance of a lifetime to find out about what happened to his parents all those years ago.....

Weapons: He has a Greatsword of the Flame, and a Magical staff of the Forest of Du Weldenvarden

Likes: He likes finding somewhere peaceful to rest and lay low for a while before continuing his travels.

Dislikes: He dislikes having to battle but if he is caught in the middle of one he is a formidable opponent.

Animal Companians: A Large, dark, Fire Salamander from the Farthen Dur caves, and his dragon.

Characters physical discreption: He is tall for his age medium built, but when tense his muscles ripple under his shirt.

Dreams for the Future: He wishes to make everything peaceful again like hundreds of years ago when there was no war

Reasons for Dreams: He would like that to hapen so nobody else had to indure the pain he felt
Alignment: Good, helps the Varden with battles soemtimes.




Dragon Name: Yorgalian

Age: 4 years old

Gender: Male

Parents: It is unkown considering he was found in the wild

History: Hatched 4 years ago when 24 year old Elminster found him in a fissure and has been with him since. They have been in the battle of the desert with Elminster.

Personality: He is short tempered with other people but with dragons and when you get to know him he is quite harmless, unless of course. you're his enemy

Color: He is a Dark Red with a Gold strip down his stomach

Appearance: He is a tall dragon with very sharp teeth and a anger to match.

Armor: He has very strong stomach armor with enough space around his arms and wings for him to fly and has plates of steel on his head that lead around his ears and on his forehead.

Dreams: Well he has the same dreams as Elminster considering their link between each other.

Reasons for Dreams: It is the same reasons as Elminster.

Why isn't anyone replying?

You just need to be patient- believe me, you weren't forgotten.

Thanks for the hope!

Please add about 8 lines to personality and seperate the characteristics. And also, I think "Speed of Light" is a bit godly, as well as "Soul Capturing." "Soul attack" is fine. So of the things are a bit..."weird", but nice character.

Well in soul capturing i mean like if you have certain gems you can bind a defeated thing to it (it's soul to) the gem, which then just increases the price of them gem, the rarity of the gem and monster count.

Tell me if that is ok.

OH! Well why didn't you say so. I thought you meant like capturing a living beings soul then controling them with it. The way you said it is fine, but i'm afraid speed of light has to go, unless you tell me how you mean to use it.

Speed of Light (my description): This magical enchanment allows you to move extremley fast to a place, kind of like teleporting. Except with Speed of Light you are still whole instead of being just small particles like teleporting, thus, still leaving you open to harm. It takes less energy and magic power then teleporting though.

I hope that clears it up.

But if you want it to be un-godding, you'll have to make it cost at least 75% of your energy. Unless you are moving like two feet.

Hint: Sound travels faster then light.

Please do not post unless it is your character or you are a mod...

Soul trapping is from the Elder Scroll series that I now off.
Morrowind
Oblivion

Hmm i never knew that.

Also where the guy Eragon's twin sister Elais or whatever, I have a question.

Do you live in Ute Iowa? Cause that is like a 20-45 min drive from me, i live in Onawa.

On topic please. And Dawn Warrior, did you see what Shade just said?

All of your various skills seem like they need to be . . . toned down.

So how long does it usually take to get a bio Accepted (if accepted)?

Until Wing feels like it.

Alright, and i added more to personality and history.

GLENWING IS IGNORING ME

I THINK GLENWING IS IGNORING ME STILL!!!!

The last time i replied was more then a month ago, and nobody has posted still!!!! I think you guys forgot about me, but then again, my thread visits are at like 350.

sorry, but have you seen how many bios want to be accepted? Wing has a life off the computer too, like all of us do. You cant make him do everything at once. Please understand, Wing works hard to keep up with saphira forums. Also, he hasnt been on for a while. If you really want him to review yours, PM him about it.

you spelt galbatorix wrong

I fixed it, thanks for pointing it out.