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 A piece of my life.. 
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Post A piece of my life..
I guess when it doesn't fit a category, it goes in here right? So here it goes.. :lol:


He was always a kind person, but he had a secret though... a dark secret.. one he did not tell many of his friends.. His childhood was far from fun.. Up to age 6 he did not remember much, but it was okay. Then they moved.. They came to a different neighbourhood in town, and had to go to a different school. That's when the trouble started, the first day at school.. He did not have many friends, the kids at school were always "teasing" him as they used to say.. However, it was far from teasing, they used to bully him with all kinds of things, at first with words, next were actions.. from removing his clothes from the gymnastics class dressing room to throwing (!) him into the bushes.. He couldn't do much against such an overpower of at least ten kids.. The teachers didn't do much, they used to be like "oh, they'll stop soon", but they became more and more physical. Final grade at grammar school, he had two close friends, friends who were close to him, and still are 8 years later..
When going to high school he'd hoped to be rid of it all, but two of the worst kids came in the same group as him, and put the rest of the class against him.. again another year of harassing when you think you escaped it all.. This was the time he seriously considered killing himself, fortunately and for no obvious reason he chose not to.
The year after slightly improved though it was still far from gone, when he came in the 3rd year however, it all became very quiet, at last. He made some new friends and they got along very well, he was finally starting to breathe again and see the sun shining through the clouds.. After that, luckily it all got better.. During all those years of torturing at school, from about age 6 up to age 14 he always stayed friendly, he never got mad, he was always sad though, but he never became angry, he bottled it all up inside him and let everyone get away with it.....
[EDIT] forgot to add: His father wants to divorce from his mother, and has a new girlfriend aged 20, only one year older than the boy himself.. [ENDEDIT]
All that anger that is bottled up inside him, has reached it's limits now.. The bucket is filled and one final drop makes him lose his temper very quickly, he doesn't wish for this to happen, he wants to be able to smile with joy, face everyone without fear of hurting someone, to love his friends, his family, everyone around him, and especially her, his star in the black, dark sky, shining upon him, he'd die for her and would do anything to convince her to stay with him, forever.
Then the star exploded, BOOM!! Gone.. Forever.. Nobody noticed, but deep inside, he was raging, raging with anger, despair, hatred and sadness, couldn't stop, as he didn't know how.. His star was gone, not knowing what to do next..



What do you guys think about this?

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Last edited by Wolverien on January 6th, 2008, 2:40 am, edited 4 times in total.

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Post Re: A story about a boy
Shouldn't this go into fan-fic?

Anyways, very well written! how'd you think of this?

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moved to fanfiction

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November 30th, 2007, 5:48 am Profile
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Post Re: A story about a boy
Umm.. Well the reason I didn't post this in fanfic, is because this wasn't fiction!! :?

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It isn't the story of YOUR life is it? :?

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Post Re: A story about a boy
Actually, it is unfortunately... :(
A sad story indeed, but very true..




P.S. Edited the ending of it..

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Post Re: A story about a boy
Very sad story, I hope things become better. It's great to share how you feel though, there are people who do care, which is a good thing.

Oh, and I guess you can sned a PM to louis to let him know that this isn't fan-fiction, and honestly I don't know what category it would go in either.

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Yeah, I sent him a message, hope he understands that this really isn't fiction, I honestly wish it was!


P.S. Edit: Added line to first post

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I had a similar story then you, from grade 2 to grade 4 I was bullied and but mostly teased. On one occasion they amass everyone against me during one break and the only thing I could do was stay next to one of the supervising teachers. I never knew why they did that, but when I think of it, it might have been because of my different way of thinking or because of the grades I had. In grade four I moved to a private school in the hope that I would learn english and that it would finally stop. I don't know what happened but it started again, it was not has intensive, but I was in a weaken state since I was sad that I had difficulty doing my classes which were in english. Often I would know the answer to a math problem, but since I didn't know how to say it I could not.

Then in the middle of my grade 4 year we moved to the United Arab Emirates where my father had started a month earlier to work. I went to a school where everyone came from different parts of the world due to there parents work. Bulling was not existent and if it did happen they would make sure it never happen again. By the time I reached grade 6 almost everyone was my friends. For the start of my 9th grade I moved to a different school where the setting was quite similar and I am now completing my 12th grade.

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Post Re: A story about a boy
:( Oh that's sad...


I don't know how it feels... I'm never bullied...

Your dad's divorcing huh? You posted that on DAF some months ago and they havn't got back together yet?

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Post Re: A story about a boy
how old is ur dad? if hes gna marry some one ur frickin age and is going to want u to caall her mom or something? that would suck hard... good luck man and just relax a bit and dont put the trigger to ur head or anything just stay cool


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Yeah, sides, you look cool enough in the pictures. :)
It would be a shame if you killed yourself.

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Post Re: A story about a boy
Yeah, unfortunately they won't come back together again, and if he makes me call her mom, I'll kill him.
He's 40 years old btw..

And don't worry, my life is too valuable to lose just yet :)

Thanks for the support guys, really appreciate it! :) :)

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hey, i wish i could relate in any way, to say that i understand how you feel, but i can't. but I'll pray for you, if you don't mind, wolvie.

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Wolvie sweety, no one can MAKE you do anything. Not anymore.
You don't have to like her or call her mom. I know I wouldnt. I don't even like my real dad.
You know your in my thoughts and prayers. I hope things work out for the best.
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My parents have been divorced ever since I was around seven years old I believe. My dad was a big jerk, and believed he tried killing my mom. He would get in trouble with the law and everything. He still doesn't stop to this day, and he doesn't pay childsupport like he is suppose to.

And I use to be smart until around 5th grade..(I'm in 9th grade btw now)...like I went brain dead, people tease and try starting fights with me more and more. Now I just play games and talk to people, and that seems to help me feel a lot better.

I know my life is nothing compared to yours, Wolverien. I hope things become better for you along the way, and don't kill anyone or yourself. That can destroy you, I think of that kind of stuff way to much sometimes.

You're in our prayers, Wolverien.

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Thanks a lot guys, really. Thanks! :)
Means so much to me :)

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Ya, Wolvie, I'm really sorry to hear all that :(
I also hope things become much better for you...


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i love ya man!! not in THAT way in the good way!!


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Lol, thanks man, appreciate it =)

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parents are bothering me too but not that bad its all about stupid stuff which im being a baby about but still some of it bothers me a lot


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*gasp* Wolvie I'm so sorry, I didn't know, I never knew I would never guess anything like that have been happening to you... I'm sorry, but you always so nice to anyone!! It's not fair :(
Looking forward to hear from you, now I'm back to e-world. C u on msn, 'kay!

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sorry to hear about all that, dude. hang in there, be positive, and getting through this might be easier. hope things get better, man.

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Thanks Fath, and welcome back btw too :)

Anyways, a small update would be in order..:

My father had been coming in and out of the house,
having arguments/fights (not physical) here, leaving my mom in tears..
He would come less and less over here, but since he still had the key,
he could come at any time..
Then at one time I had had it, and I literally threw/kicked my dad
out of the house and told him he wasn't welcome here any longer...
I believe he only came once again to give the key to the house back to us...
And he made sure I was at work..
As long as he (41) is with her (20) I despise him and I don't want to see him at all..

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Sorry to hear that I hope things get better for you.

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thats really depressing...
im sorry...
at least u had 2 friends!
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Now your father's no longer in the house.. I suppose that makes you the man in the family now, right? That's why you have to go to work while also studying @school (you still go to school right? Or did you graduated already?). Your mom must be really proud, Wolvie..

Just pay attention to your health, you know.. with numerous jobs you're at :) Eat properly and consume vitamin C if necessary!


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Now your father's no longer in the house.. I suppose that makes you the man in the family now, right?
Yes, it does =)
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That's why you have to go to work while also studying @school (you still go to school right? Or did you graduated already?).
No, I don't go to school at the moment, but I plan on doing so again in september/october.. ;)
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Your mom must be really proud, Wolvie..
She is, very :)
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Just pay attention to your health, you know.. with numerous jobs you're at :) Eat properly and consume vitamin C if necessary!
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Post Re: A piece of my life..
Some of you may have noticed I wasn't around the last couple of days/weeks... And to be honest I didn't really intended to come back in the first place as well..

Most of you know me as "the nice guy" who's always there for others..
It's true, that I even always put others above myself in regards to importance..
I don't care about me, as long as my friends/family are safe and happy; Maybe that's the mistake I made, so.. You want me to be the strict, mean, annoying moderator? Fine by me, cause I'm full of it.
[aggressive mode ON]

See y'all around, I guess.

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*Chews on lip* I've got nothing to say... just...

*Looks at inbox*

I'm going to have to wait for her to get back... or on msn...

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Im sorry i mean i know a lot about you from when we talk and i don't think its fair that you have to go through all of that i don't think anyone should have to.

I don't usually get bullied i mean i have but i always put up with it. i HATE my real dad and i hope to never EVER see him again because of the things he did.... but i don't have to see him anymore and i hope i never do. Ever since i was little i have thought of ending everything but i didn't i use to cut and be depressed all the time. So i know what is like to have family trouble trust me but i don't think anyone deserves to go through something like that. If it weren't for my friends i probably wouldn't be here.

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damn.. that's deep and meaningful.. and if it sounds like i'm mocking i'm not.

it's amazing how people can pour their feelings out to (often) complete strangers like myself. what can i say, it makes me feel good.

Btw, did you and Valk decide on a wedding day?

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