Name: Fairiana
Age: 13
Gender: female
Job/Specialty: dragon rider
Race: ½ elf; ¼ human,¼ dwarf
Hair: brown
Eyes: light blue
Body: 5feet, 6 inches very muscular, built like a small elf.
Home Village: she and her father lived in a remote shack on the edges of lake fläm, although she was born in du weldenvarden.
Parents: mother : Ariannia, an elf; father: Orikon, ½ dwarf, ½ Human of clan durgrimst ingaitum
Siblings: one eleven ½ brother who she has never met.
Character Personality: shy but very brave in battle. She is very stubborn and if she makes a promise she keeps it. She dislikes crowds in case they ask her to bless some one, as she has met elva.she tends to only socialise with people that she knows well otherwise she becomes withdrawn and mutters initelliglbly when asked something, and she gets very annoyed if asked to repeat herself more then once.
she will do anything to gain revenge on the slavers who killed her father and gave her terrible scars, or anyother slavers for that matter. she also will do whatever it takes to meet her mother or find out her fate.
Character History: when she was born, her mother, was quite ashamed of giving birth to a totally mixed race child, that she dumped Fairiana on her father and left her a blue elven sword, an elven bow with arrows and a letter explaining why she did it.her mother thought that she would be thrown out of du welduvarden. At the age of 9 she accidentally used magic and , delightedly her father taught her it. at the age of eleven she and her father went on a journey to the southern edge of du weldenvarden.this was because her mother had wished orikon to let her visit du welduvarden when she could do magic. While crossing the hadrac desert they came across slavers and in a skirmish, her father was killed and she was made a slave. She was kept a slave for 1½ years. When she finally escaped she raided the slavers tents and found Raidia’s egg. She then travelled to fatherun-dur and is being educated with the varden and hopes to be taken to train with the elves and meet her mother one day.
Character's good personality traits: generous
Character's bad personality traits: quick temper
Weapons: elven sword (wryda) and bow of yew tree sang from a yew tree by her mother
Likes: dragons
Dislikes: slavers
Animal Companions: dragon (see below)
Character's Physical Description[b] (clothes, accessories, etc.):[/b] on her fore arms she has the scars of the brands the slavers used on her. She wears a blue tunic and always wears siulver and iron alloyed into a strong hard metal armour.
Dreams for the Future: to get revenge on the slavers for her terrible scars and the death of her father and to meet her mother
Reason for Dreams: the slavers killed her father and she has never met her mother
Important things character has forgotten: the elven greetings
Alignment/side: Varden

Dragon Name: Raidia
Age: 6 months
Gender: female
Parents: unknown
History: was carried by an unknown dwarf who was captured by the slavers and had the egg stolen from him.
Personality: fierce but loves fairiana and hates war but will fight if it helps stop the slavers who flourish under gallbotrix
How they met their rider: her egg was stolen from the slavers when fairiana escaped from the slavers.
Colour: mottled dark blue and light blue with gold eyes
Appearance: mottled dark and light blue scales. She has golden eyes and her claws are sliver.
Armour:none
Dreams for future: to help rescue the dragon eggs from Galbatorix.
Reasons for dreams: so there can always be dragons
is that ok?[/b]

Pretty good but DRAOGNS ARNT ANIMALS

yea it is a good character though.

not bad

Dragons can be listed as animal companions. Interesting parentage. More history and personality.

is that better?

by the way if it isn't, what sort of stuff should i include for personality?