The sun rose to a glorious morning in Uru'bean, but something was happening in the castle that was less pleasant.
Rose hid behind the corner of the dark stone corridor as a few soldiers ran by, she held her breath so they couldn't hear her.
"Where she gone!?" Shouted one between gasps.
"The king wants her alive and unharmed, find her!" Said a harsh voice that Rose knew was the Leader's.
They headed off in the oppisite direction, thier metal boots clanking off into the distance.
Rose sighed and slid down the wall.
What does he want with me? She thought to herself.
I haven't done anything wrong.

Rose crept along the wall and sprinted silently down the way the soldiers came.
Her pale skin seemed to be ghostly in the dark, torchlit, corridor.
As she reached the end, Rose saw a large archway and walked through it.
She found herself in the Great Hall of the King's castle with its vaulted cielings and large unlit chadieliers.
Rose pulled up her hood so no one could see her face, but she need not bother.
The Hall was abuzz with servants cleaning and no-one had enough time to look at a tall 14 year-old girl.
She lesurely walked toward the entrance to the Gaint staircase that spiraled up the castle
while the stained glass windows cast bright aura's of reds, blues, and greens onto her cloak.
When she was out of sight of possible pursuers she began to run up the stairs toward her room that was on the 7th floor in the East Tower.
After nearly an hour, Rose found herself on the 7th floor.
She nearly laughed with relief and walked to the door of her room, but suddenly she noticed it was ajar and voices were coming from inside.
"We do not know where she has gone, sirs."
Rose recognized the voice as Borth, the captain of the palace gaurd.
"Then find her!"
Said an oddly serpintine voice.
"If you fail," said a voice almost exactly like the other.
"You will have to explain your failure to the King."
Rose was astonished, how badly did the king want to find her?
"Well well, it seems I have found our little princess..."
The voice came from right behind her and Rose spun around to see a tall man with blood-red hair and coal-blck skin, she stepped back in horror.
"Durza!"

Good beginning

i like it

its cool. i actually had a dream sumthing like that.

lol

Please quit spamming! You have posted "lol" so many times now!

ok, i'll never say lol agian on this forum, happy?

you just said it

No, I mean you can write lol, but not just on its own all the time. You know, not single word posts.

that one didin't count.

hey, rose, cna she use magic?