This is my first one, so what do you think?
Name:Knurlnien Shadeslayer

Age:30

Gender:male

Skills:Very skilled with the blade and bow. Has a strong mind, and is a very skilled wizard and herbalist. A skilled smith. Good tunneler and climber. A skilled hunter and tracker.

Race:dwarf

Hair:brown

Eyes:green

Home Village:Tronjheim

Parents:Knurl (father) and Ragni (mother).

Siblings:none

Character Personality:Determined, brave, bold, and noble. Very intelligent. Has a deep hate for Galbatorix and all who serve him. Generally calm. Never flinches at danger.When he knows he's right, he knows he's right and can get argumentative.

Character History:Was born into the Durgrimst Ingeitum (dwarf clan of metalworkers) at Tronjheim.His mother taught him to talk and fight with his mind, the magical skills of a wizard and the skills of a herbalist, and the humans language and the Ancient Language. He learned and practiced all he could on these subjects, and soon surpassed his mother in skill. At the age of ten, he began training as a soldier for ten years. After completing his training, he received Ascudgamln (fists of steel). Also, his father gave him his old sword, Brisingr, that had once belonged to a rider. A couple of years later, he saved a werecat named Luken from a beor (cave bear native to the Beor Mountains) while out hunting.They then became good friends. Then about a year later he traveled to Celbedeil (dwarf city). When he got there he found a shade, Darna, trying to take over the city. He then slowly crept up to the shade, and stabbed it through the heart. Thus they dubbed him shadeslayer. As a gift of thanks Gannel gave him a necklace that, when worn, would use his own energy to protect things such as his heart, lungs, brain and every thing else necessary to live and all of his veins and arteries and all of his bones. He also taught him how to put energy into the diamond at his swords pommel and withdraw energy from it.

Weapons:An old riders sword, colored red, with a diamond as its pommel, named Brisingr (fire).Also an Urgal horn bow.

Likes:The Varden, the Elves, Surda, and the dwarfs.

Dislikes:Galbatorix.

Animal Companions:The werecat Luken, that wanders and comes to him at will.

Character's Physical Description:Very strong, of course as short as a dwarf. Fast runner ,flexible, and agile. Has short brown hair and a beard.

Dreams for the Future:To help bring down Galbatorix.

Reason for Dreams:Well, he was raised with the Varden!

Alignment/side:What ever side is fighting Galbatorix.

So,what do you think? Please vote on poll!

Try not to ask for feedback, we ask that people don't post here unless their posting they're own bios. Anyway, add a few more lines to your Personality, a little more to Weapons, and a few more lines to Physical description if you can. Other than those things, it looks good.