Her:

Name: Elfenla.

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Race: Half elf (Mother = elf) (Father = Human)

Appearance: Her hair looks like silver and shines very much. Her eyes are beautiful green and she is very beautiful thanks to her elf-mother.

Equipment: Her sword is green with a silver stripe on the metal. It's names Ta'zok.

Powers: Can communicate with her dragon, and she have some amazing magic powers. She is very, very good with her sword, and her magic-skills are awesome!

Bio: Sweet, kind, beautiful, love her powers, love her dragon very much and she is always looking for adventure and danger!

Dragon-stuff: 2 sadles, an amor and other.

Other weapons: And elf-bow, great arrows and a sharp knife.

Special signs: Her dragonrider-sign on her hand. She has a tatoo on her right shoulder. It's a green flame. She was borned with it.


Dragon:

Name: Zar.

Age: 3 years old.

Gender: Male.

Scale Color: Silver scale and green wings.

Eye color: Green.

Bio: Very strong, very beautiful, loves Elfenla very, very much! He's very good at fly-attacking and is very, very intelligent. He can be very evil, so do not come into his way if you're not a friend! He can be very violent!

Signs: A green flame on the chest. The same as Elfenla has on her shoulder!

Zar's parents were wild dragons. They were killed by Galbatorix and Zar wants revenge. He wants to see Galbatorix's blood and he wants to rip him into pieces.

Training:

Elfenla was trained by a very good man, called Konimos. He learned her to use her magic skills, and to use her weapons. It was not hard for her to learn because of her elf-site. He also learned her all the old-words and now Elfenla is a master in magic and weapon.

More:

Elfenla and Zar love each other very much. They take care of each other, and are having fun together. Elfenla got Zar's egg from a wild dragon. The wild dragon had got an arrow in the wing, and Elfenla got it out and healed the wing. Then the wild dragon gave an egg to Elfenla. The egg hatched and Zar came out and since then they have been together!

Elfenla's mother, Flow, ran away to be married to a human, Okan, and they got Elfenla. Elfenla has never been together with other elfs.

The parents were killed by a Shade. He ran away after because of an order to let Elfenla stay alive. They parents were both great people, and they could use magic. The father, Okan, was once a rider, but Galbatorix's men killed his dragon. Flow, the mother, was gifted with a smart brain and amazing powers. Okan and Flow were both very good with their weapons! Galbatorix tryed to get them over to his site, but they refused. Then he gave an order to a Shade. He had to kill Elfenlas parents, but not elfenla.

Elfenla wants revenge and she want to be brutal. She wants to see the Shade's blood!

Its okay, again. Better than a few I can name

I like your description.

Nice character, but I wouldn't mind knowing more about her parents!