I was in Galbatorix treshery going for the dragon egg, but when I picked it up the alarm went off.
I ran with the egg in hand. "I have to hide." I said to myself. I went into an allyway and hid in the shadows. Then I heard a sound at the entrence. It was a soilder, I drew my swored and killed him. Ihave ot leave Uru'baen.But were will I go. I thought to my self. I know.

OOC- My eyes are hurting. Please do it in past tense, third person and put much more detail than that

Ill fix it a little bit.

IC- All the careful planning led to this, Ilian got past the last defences and was in Galbotorix's treasury. The room was full with gold and gems, apart from on three platforms, with one being empty, there were dragon eggs. Ilian moved towards it, silently moving through the large room, the second he touched the egg the magic kicked in. A scream filled the air and he was thrown back against the wall of the room, egg in hand. The sound of mailed boots joined the wailing as soldiers started investigating the noise. Making his own exit through a window, Ilian fled through the city. Once out of Galbatorix's palace he ran for a few minutes longer before stopping in an alleyway to examine the egg. A shadow filled the alley as a soldier entered, weapon drawn. Drawing his own weapon, Ilian rushed forward, parried an attack before swinging hard and he smote the soldier in the side. Without stopping to check, he started to run. To where? he thought to himself.

"hello there" said a young man with brown hair he had a sword on his belt. "its cold come in side and sit down u look like u could use some sleep.

Inside the little house stood one more man who looked at ilian."who's this guy" he said to the first man. Ilian walked in with dragon egg in hand.

"don't no but she has the who city gaurd looking for her, thought she could be of some use" said the young man.

"How d'you mean," Glared the man," we dont need another fugitive.There's already us two. Anyway whats that she's holding? Looks like a rock" The men studied ilian for a while then they settled down.

OOC-urm ilian is a boy

"Ah but its a very nice rock, we could sell it and have enough food for the rest of the year" said the young man thinking him self very clever. "Whats your name any way" he asked the girl.

" Sithira and its not a rock! Its a dragon egg."

OOC- You dont tell people its an egg!!! Also where is the detail there?

"oh my" gasped syrianna. He looked at dragon egg. "What are we going to do? We have to run if you have a dragon egg. We are all in danger now. Go get your bags packed my old friend we must leave. Hurry, hurry!" In a flash the two men got there belongings together." we will miss you" he said, tearfully at his shack.

"couldn't we just sell it tomarow i don't wnat oleave agian" asked ioksok "u didn't kill a gaurd did you?". ioksok went and sat down at the table where he helped him self to some cheese and bread.

" we could but the empire would track him" pointing to ilian"down and that would lead to us. Besides we havn't had any adventures for awhile. Anyway if this young man grows up to a dragon rider he could kill galbatorix and we could be free!!!"

OOC: Im a girl


"I will leave if you dont want me hear."she said to the men. " I dont want any trouble." She turned to leave. She picked up the egg and went out the door, teaving the to men alone in the room.

"Well should we go after her or just let her get killed" asked ioksok

ioksok and syrianna went after sithira "Why did we have to do this agian" asked Ioksok. he was miserable with the rain and haveing to doge the guards. they found sithira under an over hanging to a house.

I was running home in the rain looking back. Suddenly she triped and fell backwords and saw some one their."Hello my name is yawe." she said politely."May I know your's? Sorry if I disturbed you but I was running home and not looking........But I am so sorry!!! Please forgive me??!!" she said sadly.

Ioksok help the girl up and said "my name is Ioksok, no harm done u better get home. u didn't see any gaurd on your way here did u?"

"No I didn't see any gards their,...why? Is some thing wrong?"I said confused

"Um no nothings wrong just hury up and get home...or you will get a cold" Ioksok just said the first thing that poped into his head.

I stared at him wide eyed. Then I jumped at them both and pushed them to the groundas an arrow wizzed by.

"Oh wait!!....I did see a gard..and a girl was holding a stone of some sort!and two gards were chaseing her! we have to help her!!!!!" I shouded

"What was that" Ioksok said there was an arrow sticking out of the side of the house. the four of them stated runing for the gate.

I looked down at the red and gold egg to make shour that it was not harmed. she got up and started to run.

They made it to the gate and kept on runing "we are in big truble now" Ioksok said to them while they were runing.

the four of them made camp 5 miles away from ura'bean in a small wood by the river. there was no talking just a silece.

OOC- Start the topic again, live with it.