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crazydragongirl
Pink Dragon
Joined: March 10th, 2009, 11:10 pm Posts: 5815 Location: Flying across the oceans on Valkaria's back and watching dawn bloom over the sky
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Talos-Zalda's dragon
Dragon Name: - Talos
Age: -A few months
Gender: -Male
Skills: Talos is a good fighter, he's very strong, but doesn't have much experience. He knows how to fight, but mostly only in theory. He's fast, but not much more than a normal dragon. Mainly, he relies on brute strength, which doesn't go well with his small size.
Parents: -Mother, Greentalon. Father unknown
Race: Dragon
Eyes: Tealy-green
Home village: Egg was laid in Du Weldenvarden, hatched in Gil'ead
History: -Talos’s mother, Greentalon, laid twelve eggs in Du Weldenvarden, ten of which were destroyed in an attack by Urgals. Greentalon was fatally wounded during the attack, and not long after, a girl, Raven, came a across her. Greentalon entrusted her with the two remaining eggs after she swore in the ancient language to take care of them, and one of which hatched for her as soon as she touched it. She named the dragon Oceanis, and for six years, the two of them searched for second egg's rider, at the same time preventing Galbatorix from taking it.
After some time, while the two of them were near Dras Leona, they sensed that the dragon inside the egg was stirring and knew his rider was nearby, but whoever it was left before they could find him. A while later, when they were near Gil’ead, they sensed the dragon stirring again. Raven entered the city alone with the egg to search for the dragon’s rider, and while she was separated from Oceanis, the egg was stolen from her by Zalda, who left her alive, wanting to get away as fast as possible before the egg could be taken back. Raven and Oceanis attempted to take the egg back, assisted by Corido and his dragon, Ser’lla, and Lakris and her dragon, Freed, but in spite of their efforts, it hatched for Zalda not long after. Oceanis and Raven were very upset when Talos’s egg hatched for Galbatorix, but as Zalda told him that his egg was found in an old dragon’s nesting ground, he doesn’t even know he has a sibling, and Ever since he first hatched, Zalda has been the most import person in the world to him.
Personality: -Talos is a very quiet dragon. He idolizes Zalda and would do anything to make him happy, following him like a puppy. He trusts Zalda absolutely, although he sometimes has doubts about Zalda’s actions. Zalda told Talos that he came across his egg in a destroyed dragon’s nesting ground, but he sometimes wonders about who his parents were. He often wished that he knew more about where he came from. In battle, he is a little nervous, and doesn’t like killing, though he won’t hesitate if Zalda is in danger. Talos’s reasoning skills are sometimes a little off, especially when pressure is on him, he’ll get nervous and make bad decisions. He rarely gets angry, but when he does, he won’t listen to anyone until whoever it is that has incited his rage is dead, and once someone gets him angry, he will never trust them. To those he likes, he is rather shy, but friendly and a little hyper. When he trusts and cares about someone, Talos will do anything to help them. He can be really sweet to those who show they care him, but most people don’t pay much attention to him, as he’s always kind of stuck in Zalda’s shadow. Talos doesn't really have as much respect as Zalda does, since, even though he's a dragon, he's very young.
Weapons: Teeth, claws, and fire
Likes: He likes Zalda. That basically covers it, but he also likes watching the sun rise, flying, and the ocean.
Dislikes: Anyone that would try to hurt Zalda. Dark, small places, crowds.
Color: -Dark teal
Appearance: -Talos is currently 20 feet long, and growing quickly. His form is rather bulky, obviously built for strength. His scales are a dark teal color (The picture above) and are darkest on his head, tail, and underbelly, lighter on his legs, neck, and back. His eyes are the same color as his scales, except a lot lighter and with a hint more blue. His spines and claws are all pure white, except on his front left paw, on which the leftmost claw is jet black.
Weakness / Fear: -His greatest fear is of being abandoned by Zalda.
Dreams for future: -To become strong enough to destroy anyone who wants to hurt Zalda
Reasons for dreams: -Talos adores Zalda and wants to assist him in any way he can
Alignment/side: He fights for Zalda, those he cares about, and himself.
_________________ Valkaria's bio Lakida's bio Nardia's bio Ikarina's bio Endruika's Bio Emeleneya's bio Minerela's bio Ninya's bio Zalda's bio and Talos's bio Corido and Ser'lla's bio Allen and Elaina's bio Darryl's bio You just lost The Game! Hyperbole and a half
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHAAAAAWWWWWWW!!!!!! <NOT MY WORK
If i make any random typos or grammar errors, sorry. I'm probably on my iphone.
Last edited by crazydragongirl on January 18th, 2011, 6:25 pm, edited 6 times in total.
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January 13th, 2011, 11:49 pm |
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DragonSlayer4
Black Dragon
Joined: February 2nd, 2008, 3:34 am Posts: 6998 Location: Me fav website in the whole world, SF.
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Skulblakans
Dragon: Faelia
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Re: Talos-Zalda's dragon
Alright, a good character, truly, but your missing a few pieces to your puzzle, so to speak. You need Skills, Race, Hair, Eyes, Home Village, Siblings, Animal Companions, and an Alignment/Side.
Your missing roughly 8 1/2 lines in Personality, and 9 in History. Fix those points up, and we'll see.
_________________ Eka fricai un Shur'tugal. Wiol ono Rest in peace, ILS. You'll be greatly missed... Good: Felecia and Ebony Zeke Shaina Mýa Johdzsia Sarai Vermona Samantha Tyleek Sephora Sofranir Tel'aeír Jeria Sol Jessa Neutral: Leanbrara Naixul Autarkeia Sevena Vena Kenai Evil: Iaras Leurgan I will watch over your charries too, Rathon.
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January 14th, 2011, 4:37 am |
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crazydragongirl
Pink Dragon
Joined: March 10th, 2009, 11:10 pm Posts: 5815 Location: Flying across the oceans on Valkaria's back and watching dawn bloom over the sky
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Werecats
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Re: Talos-Zalda's dragon
*Shrug* Well, i used the template for dragons... I guess i can use the other one though. Also, i don't really think dragons have much hair....
_________________ Valkaria's bio Lakida's bio Nardia's bio Ikarina's bio Endruika's Bio Emeleneya's bio Minerela's bio Ninya's bio Zalda's bio and Talos's bio Corido and Ser'lla's bio Allen and Elaina's bio Darryl's bio You just lost The Game! Hyperbole and a half
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHAAAAAWWWWWWW!!!!!! <NOT MY WORK
If i make any random typos or grammar errors, sorry. I'm probably on my iphone.
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January 14th, 2011, 5:01 am |
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DragonSlayer4
Black Dragon
Joined: February 2nd, 2008, 3:34 am Posts: 6998 Location: Me fav website in the whole world, SF.
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Skulblakans
Dragon: Faelia
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Re: Talos-Zalda's dragon
lol Sorry. When you make a single dragon character, as you would for any other character, you use the main template, not the Dragon Rider one. And yes, I do concur with that, though you could replace hair with a description of any horns Talos might have on his jaw and/or skull.
_________________ Eka fricai un Shur'tugal. Wiol ono Rest in peace, ILS. You'll be greatly missed... Good: Felecia and Ebony Zeke Shaina Mýa Johdzsia Sarai Vermona Samantha Tyleek Sephora Sofranir Tel'aeír Jeria Sol Jessa Neutral: Leanbrara Naixul Autarkeia Sevena Vena Kenai Evil: Iaras Leurgan I will watch over your charries too, Rathon.
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January 14th, 2011, 5:10 am |
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crazydragongirl
Pink Dragon
Joined: March 10th, 2009, 11:10 pm Posts: 5815 Location: Flying across the oceans on Valkaria's back and watching dawn bloom over the sky
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Werecats
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Re: Talos-Zalda's dragon
Maky, though i'm not exactly sure that Talos is a "Single dragon character" as which i'm guessing means a dragon with no rider. In any case, can you just scrap this topic? When i've fixed up Talos's bio, i'll repost it.
_________________ Valkaria's bio Lakida's bio Nardia's bio Ikarina's bio Endruika's Bio Emeleneya's bio Minerela's bio Ninya's bio Zalda's bio and Talos's bio Corido and Ser'lla's bio Allen and Elaina's bio Darryl's bio You just lost The Game! Hyperbole and a half
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHAAAAAWWWWWWW!!!!!! <NOT MY WORK
If i make any random typos or grammar errors, sorry. I'm probably on my iphone.
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January 14th, 2011, 5:17 am |
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crazydragongirl
Pink Dragon
Joined: March 10th, 2009, 11:10 pm Posts: 5815 Location: Flying across the oceans on Valkaria's back and watching dawn bloom over the sky
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Werecats
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Re: Talos-Zalda's dragon
I redid it, it should have everything it needs.
_________________ Valkaria's bio Lakida's bio Nardia's bio Ikarina's bio Endruika's Bio Emeleneya's bio Minerela's bio Ninya's bio Zalda's bio and Talos's bio Corido and Ser'lla's bio Allen and Elaina's bio Darryl's bio You just lost The Game! Hyperbole and a half
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHAAAAAWWWWWWW!!!!!! <NOT MY WORK
If i make any random typos or grammar errors, sorry. I'm probably on my iphone.
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January 17th, 2011, 12:29 am |
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DragonSlayer4
Black Dragon
Joined: February 2nd, 2008, 3:34 am Posts: 6998 Location: Me fav website in the whole world, SF.
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Dragon: Faelia
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Re: Talos-Zalda's dragon
Better, but you still need just one more line on History, Personality, and Appearance. And does he have no skills? I was curious when I saw that field blank.
_________________ Eka fricai un Shur'tugal. Wiol ono Rest in peace, ILS. You'll be greatly missed... Good: Felecia and Ebony Zeke Shaina Mýa Johdzsia Sarai Vermona Samantha Tyleek Sephora Sofranir Tel'aeír Jeria Sol Jessa Neutral: Leanbrara Naixul Autarkeia Sevena Vena Kenai Evil: Iaras Leurgan I will watch over your charries too, Rathon.
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January 17th, 2011, 9:11 pm |
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crazydragongirl
Pink Dragon
Joined: March 10th, 2009, 11:10 pm Posts: 5815 Location: Flying across the oceans on Valkaria's back and watching dawn bloom over the sky
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Werecats
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Re: Talos-Zalda's dragon
I have sixteen lines in history, twelve in personality, and five in physical description. Isn't that all i need?
_________________ Valkaria's bio Lakida's bio Nardia's bio Ikarina's bio Endruika's Bio Emeleneya's bio Minerela's bio Ninya's bio Zalda's bio and Talos's bio Corido and Ser'lla's bio Allen and Elaina's bio Darryl's bio You just lost The Game! Hyperbole and a half
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHAAAAAWWWWWWW!!!!!! <NOT MY WORK
If i make any random typos or grammar errors, sorry. I'm probably on my iphone.
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January 17th, 2011, 9:32 pm |
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DragonSlayer4
Black Dragon
Joined: February 2nd, 2008, 3:34 am Posts: 6998 Location: Me fav website in the whole world, SF.
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Dragon: Faelia
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Re: Talos-Zalda's dragon
Oh snapdragon. I must have counted wrong. My apologies, you do have enough lines. I Accept.
_________________ Eka fricai un Shur'tugal. Wiol ono Rest in peace, ILS. You'll be greatly missed... Good: Felecia and Ebony Zeke Shaina Mýa Johdzsia Sarai Vermona Samantha Tyleek Sephora Sofranir Tel'aeír Jeria Sol Jessa Neutral: Leanbrara Naixul Autarkeia Sevena Vena Kenai Evil: Iaras Leurgan I will watch over your charries too, Rathon.
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January 17th, 2011, 9:43 pm |
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crazydragongirl
Pink Dragon
Joined: March 10th, 2009, 11:10 pm Posts: 5815 Location: Flying across the oceans on Valkaria's back and watching dawn bloom over the sky
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Re: Talos-Zalda's dragon
Ok thanks, i'll add in his skills later.
_________________ Valkaria's bio Lakida's bio Nardia's bio Ikarina's bio Endruika's Bio Emeleneya's bio Minerela's bio Ninya's bio Zalda's bio and Talos's bio Corido and Ser'lla's bio Allen and Elaina's bio Darryl's bio You just lost The Game! Hyperbole and a half
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHAAAAAWWWWWWW!!!!!! <NOT MY WORK
If i make any random typos or grammar errors, sorry. I'm probably on my iphone.
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January 17th, 2011, 9:55 pm |
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crazydragongirl
Pink Dragon
Joined: March 10th, 2009, 11:10 pm Posts: 5815 Location: Flying across the oceans on Valkaria's back and watching dawn bloom over the sky
Gender: Girl
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Re: Talos-Zalda's dragon
I edited in a section on skills.
_________________ Valkaria's bio Lakida's bio Nardia's bio Ikarina's bio Endruika's Bio Emeleneya's bio Minerela's bio Ninya's bio Zalda's bio and Talos's bio Corido and Ser'lla's bio Allen and Elaina's bio Darryl's bio You just lost The Game! Hyperbole and a half
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHAAAAAWWWWWWW!!!!!! <NOT MY WORK
If i make any random typos or grammar errors, sorry. I'm probably on my iphone.
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January 18th, 2011, 6:27 pm |
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crazydragongirl
Pink Dragon
Joined: March 10th, 2009, 11:10 pm Posts: 5815 Location: Flying across the oceans on Valkaria's back and watching dawn bloom over the sky
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Werecats
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Re: Talos-Zalda's dragon
Hey, it's been nearly two weeks, anyone else accepting this? *Wonders where draco has been for the past three weeks*
_________________ Valkaria's bio Lakida's bio Nardia's bio Ikarina's bio Endruika's Bio Emeleneya's bio Minerela's bio Ninya's bio Zalda's bio and Talos's bio Corido and Ser'lla's bio Allen and Elaina's bio Darryl's bio You just lost The Game! Hyperbole and a half
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHAAAAAWWWWWWW!!!!!! <NOT MY WORK
If i make any random typos or grammar errors, sorry. I'm probably on my iphone.
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January 31st, 2011, 9:22 pm |
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dark dragon
RPG Team
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Re: Talos-Zalda's dragon
Sorry CDG, I didn't see this. Looks good to me, I accept
As for draco... I don't know where she's been...
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January 31st, 2011, 11:30 pm |
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Makaveli
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Re: Talos-Zalda's dragon
Your character can now be RP'ed with. (I'm moving topics for the RPG people) By the way, you do know you can change your signature. That's not hardwired or anything; I'm not that mean.
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February 3rd, 2011, 3:14 am |
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crazydragongirl
Pink Dragon
Joined: March 10th, 2009, 11:10 pm Posts: 5815 Location: Flying across the oceans on Valkaria's back and watching dawn bloom over the sky
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Re: Talos-Zalda's dragon
:) Thanks! I've been waiting for these to be accepted for a while.... *Wonders when draco will get back* And yeah, i know i can change my sig... Just don't feel like it.
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February 3rd, 2011, 3:40 am |
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