The third and final addition to Crugan's army. His position has strayed from one as a Shade...:S, but I like the new idea I got for him. If you want me to change the color for the font of name just say so. =P

Name: Freohr

Age: 712

Gender: Male

Skills:

Death's Language: Being a Lord of Death, he can use the language of Death. This can involve Necromancy, enabling him to raise corpses and such. Death's Language consists of mainly instant-killing spells and dark magic. The former uses less energy to Freohr than that killing spell would in the Ancient Language, but the latter uses more energy than spells in general. The spells from Death's Language are practically the same spells as the twelve killing words from the Ancient Language (but there are more killing spells in Death's Language), and thus can be blocked by the same wards one would use for the Ancient Language, but the wards would have to be specific.

Poison- He can exert very lethal poison from anywhere around his body. The poison isn't strong enough to kill unless inhaled or swallowed by the enemy, but through direct contact it burns. The poison itself varies from purple, which is his weakest poision, to a dark green, which is considered the middle poison, to a dark red, which is his strongest poison. All three can burn, with dark red burning the most, and the purple burning the least, obviously. But the stronger the poison, the more energy it uses.

Old Age: An ability Freohr acquired when he reached 700, one of his late-arriving abilities. Now considered old by Death, Freohr can slow someone's movements by just coming into physical contact with them. It doesn't slow their movements permanently, but it slows a person's movements whenever they come into contact with him. He has to have the intention of performing this ability for it to work, however, and it uses energy.

Cloud of Withering: He can emit a black cloud around him that travels around him in a circle, and whatever inanimate object it comes into contact with withers away. The farther the cloud goes, the more energy it uses, however.

"Death" Form: A form he takes in dangerous situations, and it is indeed very powerful. His name wasn't given to him just because it sounded cool, but because he is an agent of Death. The radius of his ability with Old Age is increased to anyone within four feet of him. He is extremely fast, but his strength doesn't increase much. His energy gradually drops when in this form.

"Matter" Transportation: Freohr can reduce his body into simple dots of matter and travel around quickly when doing so. When stopping, he just reforms. His body divides itself into thousands of particles smaller than the size of a dime, and they float through the air at a quick speed, and reform at the place he chooses. It uses a small amount of energy to divide and reform himself. He also must remain still for a few seconds before dividing his body particles, so it is not meant for dodging a close-range attack in the least. He can move quickly as particles, but it drains his energy at a very slow, constant rate. It's still great for travel, however. He also can pass through solid objects in this form.

Race: Agent of Death

Eyes: Black

Hair: Short and dark gray.

Home City: Fulnivr

Parents: Father's name was Graham, mother's name was Isabella.

Siblings: None

Personality: Much more level-headed than Zar'rac, but just as merciless and evil. While Zar'rac is a little insane, Freohr doesn't speak much, preferring to analyze things with his mind other than his words. He is much more cautious than Zar'rac and Crugan. While he isn't paranoid in the least, he just believes that someone in their trio has to have some sense to watch their back. Therefore, he tends to think about things before acting, and thus is an excellent strategist. Because of this, he often plans the battle plans in the war, and is great in surveillance. While Zar'rac and Crugan are mostly just causing mayhem in Alagaesia before moving in with the army, Freohr is studying the land's agriculture, landforms, and positioning of cities. Because of this, even though they have only been in Alagaesia for around a year, he has already planned out in his mind on how to attack several different cities, including Dras-Leona. However, despite his more natural calmness, he is quite unmerciful, and often acts without hesitation in the least. He has a certain terror to him, and while he plans out how to attack Alagaesia, he also kills those who he believes deserve to die, often saying that, Death is calling them. Death had chosen carefully who to have serve under him, and so far, Freohr has been working diligently under Death, and while this leads Crugan to think that Freohr will betray him, Freohr has already promised in the Ancient Language that he will work with Crugan as long as he shall live and never harm him.

History: Freohr used to be known as a man named Oblete. Oblete was chosen at birth to be an Agent of Death. A skull and crossbones was branded into his shoulder at birth. No one knew how they got there, but they did, and no one knew what it meant. However, it still aroused suspicion from his parents, and they did nothing at the time, but they were always weary of him, always suspicious of his movements and such. After a particular meeting with a wild boar when Oblete was 18, in which he almost died, he had a meeting with Death. It was in the confines of Oblete's mind, and for Death to be able to contact someone in the living for the first time, that person must be near death. Anyways, Death had explained about the skull and crossbones and what they meant. They meant that Oblete was chosen to be an Agent of Death.

He took up his role easily, and for his first assignment, he was to murder his parents. It happened that night. His parents were always suspicious of Oblete, but when he had been almost killed by that boar, they had become more calm around him. It was all a part of Death's plan. It allowed Oblete to approach his parents without them being prepared to defend themselves immediately. Oblete had murdered his parents with a word of Death's Language that night. He immediately left his house, following whatever kills Death specified. Normally, he would be known through Friore, but he killed silently, secretly, and no one was the wiser of his appearance.

Soon, he met Crugan and Zar'rac. Oblete came to like Crugan almost immediately. Zar'rac, not so much. The two were at each other's necks when they first met and until a good hundred years afterwards. By now, Crugan had renamed Oblete as Freohr. Freohr had told Death that no matter what order Death placed on him, he would not bring himself to kill Crugan.

Death had simply smiled and said, "I know, and it makes no difference. Death alone cannot get rid of that Demon," and that was when it was decided. Freohr was going to help Zar'rac and Crugan take over the world. They have been in Alagaesia for almost a year now.

Weapons: A scythe of death. Before his transformation, it is more like a Battleaxe. It is black in color and trimmed with white. After the transformation, however, the weapon's true form is unleashed, and it takes the form of a black Guillotine, able to be called by Freohr at any time when he has transformed. The Blade is very powerful, able to cleave everything but the toughest of objects in two, and while it is a Guillotine, Freohr can easily handle it with one hand. It also is a tool required for some of the spells Freohr can use in Death's Language.

Likes: Death, Crugan, world conquest.

Dislikes: Cocky people, Elves, dragons, and humans.

Weakness/Fear: The same as Zar'rac in that someone will come along who is strong enough to defeat Crugan, which would practically ruin the entire plan.

Animal Companions: None. He gets around with his Matter Transportation ability.

Physical Description: Tall and lean, Freohr stands at 6'5", and has short, dark gray hair and black eyes. He usually wears a high-collar cloak with a skull-and-crossbones in the middle and on the sleeves. He has pale skin, and despite looking frail, he is very powerful and fast.

In Death's form, he wears a very large, black cloak, and instead of a head, he has a pale Skull. Some think that this is just an outfit, but this really is his true form. When he calls his Guillotine, he holds it in his right hand, and along the Guillotine is a golden chain.

Dreams for the Future: To take over Alagaesia,

Reasons for Dreams: To both please Crugan and himself, as he would be content owning so much power.

Thanks Dark!

Could you elaborate on the Death language and the transportation ability for me? With the former, how would it be used? what can he do with it? limits etc.

With the latter (transportation) just a little elaboration please.

Death's Language- Added some stuff to it, but I feel compelled to also say that the spells from Death's Language are practically the same spells as the twelve killing words from the Ancient Language (but there are more killing spells in Death's Language), and thus can be blocked by the same wards one would use for the Ancient Language.

Transportation- I'll explain this one in this post. His body divides itself into thousands of particles smaller than the size of a dime, and they float through the air at a semi-quick speed, and reform at the place he chooses. But, it uses a fair amount of energy to divide and reform himself.

Sounds good to me.

With the transportation skill, I want to make sure it can't be used really as a combat application. ie. dissolving every time someone tries to hit him, etc. Not that you'd do that, just saying. Maybe there could be a period of vulnerability when dissolving/reforming, or that he can't move when entering/leaving the state.

Also, can he float through solid objects? Any distance limitations?


I apologise, I should have said what I meant in my previous post.




Other than this, consider yourself accepted by me. :]



PS: The font color is indeed difficult for me to read.

Ok, that makes sense. :)

So, when he is dissolving, he must remain still, so any close-combat attack (ie sword, fist, and whatnot) would still strike through him, and say...do more damage since he is dividing his body particles?

As far as he goes depends on how much energy he is willing to use. The drain on his energy while moving in this form is slow, but constant. I meant to say this before, but I forgot. :P

And yes, he can float through solid objects, but only if they are inanimate.

And I changed color as well. Grrrr, I liked that color... Lol

Something like that is what I had in mind, yes. Being frozen + draining his magic/strength or whatnot proportional to the viciousness of the attack.

Alright, last thing- if you could combine that into the OP so it's not confusing for future readers. :]

my old eyes thank you for the color change

Anddddddddd....Finished!

One more person to look at it and we're good.