im almost done whith the first chapther so itll take about a week and a half.

kool, I wnat to read it when you post it. No, it has alittle part of a brown-gold dragon and then a cliff in the background. but, there is a book in the series that has a silver dragon on the front, but I don't think it had a rider on it's back. I'll type in the little summary on the back.

Lessa's last chance
After ten long turns, Lessa is ready to come out of hidding, to reclaim her birthright...and to impress the young dragonqueen and become Weyrwoman of Benden.

Suddenly the silver deadly Thread once again threatens all of Pern with destruction. But the mighty telepathic Dragons that had defended Pern for centries are now few in mumber, not nearly enough to pretect the planet in it's greatest hour of peril. So Lessa hatches a daring and dangerous scheme: rally support from people who long ago ceased to exist...

i actually just started that book, im not too far into to it but i really like it so far

I writing many books. And im waiting to publish them when i get older.

What kind of books?

Myth and Folklore. Midevil battles to save races and that kind of thing.

cool, those are my kind of books cant wait to read them

Just dont forget though that itll be awhile before i publish them.

Why wait? publish them now! lol

thats to be expected - it takes me like a week just to make a new chapter in my stories/books i cant imagine actually trying to get them published (im a procrastinator lol)

yep. Itll take me awhile to.

Just go to ever publisher one the face of the planet if you have to, and if they won't publish it, publish it your self!!!!!!!! lol

i totally agree

Huh? Sorry im tired a little. I need a pepsi.

lol thats the way to go - when ever your tired just pump more caffine into the system lol (i love doing that, Mountian Dew is my savior!)

I cant have caffine but i dont like that so i do it anyway.

.....umm.... maybe i need some caffine cuz i didnt get any bit of wut u just said lol

I like to read about that...count me in ''one-of-firsts-which-bought-the-book'' after you publish it May I ask what's the title?

I need a little help please. I want to extend my first book but I am at a mental block, the girl is at a moment where she was forced evil, killed the evil guy and is stuck evil...???

id need more info on the book and the plot and things like that - but id be happy to help

I just need good ideas, I just got one so if you'll excuse me I need to write it down. I will give that stuff to you in a moments time.

Oh theres a bunch and im not sure if ill keep them.

I always have a lot of trouble with titles - so i usually just use a temporary one and then when im dont come up with a permenant one

Right now i just have them unknown.

lol sounds like a plan

well its as far as i got

lol

ooOOooo <--- look at the eyes they roll hehe (im easily amused)

I guess i dont get that either.

uh, dont get what?

why you put the eyes rolling thingy.

O, i just put that because it amused me lol do u see them roll?!?! lol

Uhhhh yeah. Okay i dont want to have this turning into a argument or something so ill just leave you with them.

bah - dont leave me!!! lol ill stop having them roll their eyes see, this one is smiling! lol

i like writing too...its really good if you just want to show how youre feeling but it doesn't have to be in a real world or anything...

that book "dragonflight"...if youre talking about the one by anne mccaffrey I HATE IT!! (no offence if you do but it really annoys me!)

Moral lession: Evil lives

Well...usually there is a person which helps to get back on dark side...If I was you I would make some spiritual elightenment (like she tries to resorect something, but instead of that she's pulled in world of shadows and evil and there she figures out that she's not evil inside her heart...that she doesn't belong here). Of course that I would do...I don't know what will you do, but I'm shure it'll be better than my idea

Lol...I just had to write this....And I figure out characters for my story But I am not shure if I would write it....

The first chapter (which I already wrote down on computer) is about parallel kingdom of Earth...and there time goes slower that Earth...but the kingdom is connected with Earth. How? Water and magic do miracles. On Earth there are meaner and meaner people and one day one of them finds himself in Mimore (that's how the parallel planet is called). He finds his way to queen as her right hand (the king died in battle which brought peace). Then he starts to have influence on subjects and he convince them that queen never should be on throne...that she and her baby daughter should earn the title of queen and princess...and then was only matter of time before the people started to resist. Queen has to leave the throne and her right hand puts her in jail. But for the baby princess...he sends her to Earth, with prophesy:

When she'll feel the time,
and clock struck one,
the magic will bring her back,
and to earn her title,
she'll have to find
all three forgotten mysteries,
the three lost texts
which will gave her
feelings to hear others sadness and happiness,
still the past will learn her
not to trust everybody
and on the end,
the courage
to follow her dreams
and to come true dreams
of those
which have no hope left.

In secund chapter (and thirs...both still in progress) she starts to feel that she doesn't belong here. But the man which send her here, didn't knew that he send someone else there...and when magic starts to work our girl comes back to her planet...where sun doesn't shine any more, where forest is spoiled with dark magic and brother has split blood of his own brothere. She figures out who she is...that here's passed only 6 years and it's revield that if she doesn't find three forgoten texts till 17 (she's 15), the man will stayed king and she'll be put to jail like her mother...

Then...I was thinking of giving her some company....for now I have her, the person which was send with her, talking sword and I'm thinking of putting there a goblin too.

So, what do you think (so far, that's all I come up with...)?

its coo

sounds good

[quote="dragon lover<3 at hear"]why hello! i didnt expect replys this soon! i love to write, im actualy writeing my own book, its called the fire stones. so keep an eye out for it, i intend to publish. even if i have to go to a hundred publishers to have it done.[/quote]

If you get your book published i want to know i love to read if any one has storys i so want to read them and ill let you know what i think im a sucker for a good book. i myself can only write poetry i get writers block really fast.

What do you think about line: ''Don't forget to oil and polish me!'' for the sword?

its good it shows you depth for the sword

I like it, it's really good!

Thnx. I'm right now writing how she meet him. A bit odd situation. Sword was once queens sorcerer. The bad guy didn't like it, so he turned him to sword (bad guy lurned magic...still not enough to keep him shut up. So he fix it on a cliff). Princess met him, when she fell over a cliff, still she caught his handle. The goblin (I don't know how to name it!!!) tried to save by building odd fly machine her and then sword talked this sentence:

'' Did you knew that goblin word for ''flying'' is more accurately translated as ''falling slowly''?

I'm trying to do some humor, so how does it sounds?

That's good. I think I've heard from somewhere else.

People tell me if you think this would make a good book or if it's a horible idea

There was this girl (13 at the time) orphined living with her aunt & uncle that always had a fasanation with swords; well one night she hears something out side & looks out her window to find a Southerner (magical beings with tiny eyes pointed teeth and no hair) she runs into her uncle and aunts room to find a southerner already in there so she run away... stuff happens... then when she's run as for as she can she callapses... she wakes up looks around her and sees a night blue stone about the size of her clappsed hands and picks it up... more stuff happens and thats all I'm going to write right now so tell me if it sucks horribly... and be awnist

caterpillar I really didn't realize till I thout about it how close that seems to Eragon
I promise I started writing that when I was like 5... wow

Don't double post! It's a good idea, a bit Eragon influence in it, but I suggest that from idea which you have; made few chapters and then decide for to be continued or not.

woa, this has been quiet lately.... anyway - anyone else here love to write?

writing is hard for me because i cant come up with names

sometimes i have a hard time with that too but i fell inlove with this site after i found it - http://www.behindthename.com/

I just got back from soccer provincals and Banff. Wrote 18 pages on the trip.

im writing a story and i have two differewnt story lines one is under "a book that has no title" and the other one is under "my story" tell me what you think

hello everybody. jezze i havent checked out my topic for so long, it grew biggerer.! my book is currently 298 pages long.

300?? Holy crap.

Nice, I'm at 227 pages on the computer.

i havent started typeing yet.

The number of pages will most likely decrease. When I was writing a page of looseleaf was half a typed page.

mine will probably increase, considering the fact that i will increase the ammount of detail when im done editing what i have. lol

I havent really started yet. Ive gotten some stuff done but i take it slow so i know whats to go in there and make sure that its done correctly.

i like potatoes!

Was that random?

what do you think potato head?

I thnk that was random but lets not keep this up. I dont want to get a warning.

i like writing but i need ideas so i made a topic its at the top of the book index.Please give me ideas!Thanks!

hello there I'm new so yeah lol. I'm in the middle of writing a couple of stories right now. I've been rewriting one for about 4 or 5 years and now I'm finally getting it lol. I only have 2 chapters written so far but hey that's better than nothing. I hope to get it published. I have an idea...maybe we should type up at least a little bit if not all of one chapter and see what everyone thinks of it? Just a thought .


Amber

yes please do.

hey everyone should give blagden some ideas to write about. It would be awesome if you guys did that. Who knows Blagden might become famous one day and use all of your splended ideas in his books (I hope that Blagden is a boy because if Blagden is a girl I will really feel bad lol. Please don't get made at me if you are a girl).


Amber

um i need title ideas for my story you can read it in fanfic its under the heading, a story that has no title

that would be cool - i so call not going first tho

hahaha.


Amber

im gonna write a kids siries wht should it be about

Just a question. Shouldn't you have an idea of what you want to write rather then I want to write this and I need ideas for other people?

uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..... im not,u know, like good at that sorta thing

I'm the complete oppisite, I get good ideas, but I don't know exactually how to put them into words.

this is an excert from my book The Rose that i am currently in the middle of writing... (a note - selene and isodle are sisters and selene is in love with aaron) tell me what you guys think

"Selene lay on her bed, sheets tangled in her legs. Sweat dripped off her body onto the already damp sheets. She sat up, breathing hard. Visions of what she had seen in her dreams still flowed through her mind. She rubbed her eyes, trying to make them disappear. I will always love him, She told herself. I could never love anyone the same way I love Aaron. But the seeds of doubt were already planted, sprung from the nightmare she had just endured.

She had seen herself, alone on the sea, held out of the freezing water by a small rickety boat. After what seemed like hours of calling for help, the boat started to sink. And at the moment her head was about to go under, a hand reached into the water and pulled up up and out. So, she looked to see who's had gracioulsy saved her life, and was shocked to see the most handsome man she had ever seen... But it wasn't Aaron, and for that, she was shocked. Shocked at the feelings stirring within her body and soul.

She pulled a robe over her nightgown and dragged herself from the toastyness of the bed. She hopped quikly across the room, feeling the warmth flee from the soles of her feet to the cool stone floor. Her agile body jumped up to the window seat and she swiftly pulled her feet underneath her lean body.

Selene loved looking out through the window, and she counted herself lucky that she had a room with a glass window. Her father's study was the only other room with one. This was one of the things Isolde didn't like, she had always thought that she should get the great window seat, and many arguments had stemmed form this belief.

Selene looked out the window and regarded the sky. The moon seemed to be dancing in the light from the brightly shining stars. She sighed as a wonderful feeling of calmness and serenity washed over her. She huddled her legs even closer to her body in an attempt to conserve her body heat. Her eyes traced the flight path of a large owl as it made it's way across the endless pool of darkness that was midnight. She felt instantly awake as a wolf howled in the distance.

Probably on the other side of Beirland, she reasoned with herself, but her feelings were betrayed as she jumped an inch into the air at another eerie howl. Her body sagged up against the velvet curtain, and as she fell asleep, she had one thought in her mind. I will always love him..."


So, wut do ya think?? good?? bad?? opinions anyone???

well i love writing too... i'm writing a book at the monent but i'm hesitating to give it to other people...

I understand, but other people can help you with reading and suggestions that you could never of done.

well maybe i give it to my best friend when i finished it...

have u posted it here yet? if u havent please do

hey lenorasvitkona I love it will u message it all to me anyway i'm writing a story kinda taken off from inheritence its not very long at all yet but the notebook its written in has got orlando bloom on it dressed like he does on pirates of the carribean

if you want i can just post it in the fanfic section but if not then ill message it to you - im only 4 chappies in tho

That's AWESOME! I love writing too! My stories don't usually get too long because I'll get a better idea and start on that instead. Because of that, I haven't written anything over fifty pages yet. My goal is to get published before I turn eighteen.

i finaly found a title for my story
im gonna call it "the change"

that sounds cool - wut is it about?

u can read part of it in fan fic its under the heading a book that has no title and under my story

Book 2 reached 300 pages bringing Volume 1 up to 491 pages long.

MY BOOK IS 346 PAGES LONG! *said proudly* and now i have to go to bed. night everyone.

Whoa that's long. When did you start and what's it about?

Have you written it on the computer or is it on paper?

Wow...I couldn't write that much on paper.

Mine's on the computer.

i posted my finle version [the one im gonna stick w/] in fan fic but no1s posted there yet!! its under the heading the change

Hmm, I'll go over there and check it out.

thankx and peeez post

I'm on now. What is your thing called?

i started my book a year and a half ago, it took me so long because i dont write on the weekends or summer break. and its on paper, though im starting to type up the begining now. and i intend to see it published! no matter what it takes!

I started mine awhile back. I havent gotten to far. I take my time to make sure everythings right.

why hello there! long time since ive talked to you. watcha been up to? and my book is almost done, i tend to go through the pages first as a first copy, then go back and edit the pages, then type it up, then edit those pages, then i go back and edit it again ontil everythings just right and every sentence and paragraph flow togethor like colours in a work of art, and i make sure that theres not a single paragraph thats out of place in the story.

I started a book about 2 moths ago and it took me like a month for the first chapter. I hate the first chapters its so hard to do. But now im starting to get into it further and its going good ...i think

I love writing but i think i have a bigger talent for music. Ive been playing for five years and counting. heh. but im doing good on my book. oh and by the way Dragonlover3, dark dragon is the guy i told you about that youre friend was crazier than.