hey the person before U writes something and U have to ad to it .. it has to be a fantasy story

not that kind I mean add to the story. I terace was walking in the woods. I had just witnessed the death of my family. I fell to the ground crying. I sat there shaking violently with sobs, when I heard a twig snap. My huge dragon Star Gazer jumped infront of me. " show Ur self." I yelled

an it was an angel from the forest of narnagaesia and it roared RAAAAAAAAAWR I AM A MIGHTY ANGEL

show ur self or I will have to kill u. I am more powerful than I apear. Show ur self.

The rabid mouse bit the poor little angel on the leg and scranbled away!

I walked over to the pathetic creature and hovered over it. " u dont look mighty. A mouse bit u and u cant move. By the way, here Shade. He's my pet mouse." I laughed at it. It growled at me. I bumped it with my sword.

Huh? What shade lol? What are u talking about?

you wrote a rabid mouse bit him, I named it shade , its my pet LOL

suddenly, a grenade flew over to them. Arnold Swartsnager{sp} jumped out, then lunged at them while yelling in his accent, " Get DAHWN (down)"

arnold swartznanager lives in the human world

Nah, he's the Devil lol.

I tell arnold to take a flying flip and go on talking to the angel. then another twig snapped. I wirled to se.........................................

So she turned around, and screamed, for in between 2 trees...was BARNEY WITH AN AXE! And he yelled,"......

bends down and picks up a knife, she throws it at barney, slicing his throat. Make ur own characters terace is mine. make something up.

Barney? Arnold Shwortiniger (sp)? i think star gazer was thinking this could be a good story like a serious one. but i guess it hard when you cant talk together about whats going through their head. just try to make a good story if i get into it i'll let you know.

then gets pushed by BARNEY SWARTSNAGER, who eats the tree, which is really a NACHO, and dips it in the cheese/blood! BWAHAHA!

while Barnewy regenerates, and sends Dr. Jackal to another dimension, from which escape is IMPOSSIBLE! He then looks at the gril, picks up the scythe, and says,"I'm farmer BROWN!"

enough I yelled. Lightening surounded me. No one touch the girl or u all shall die. I walked over to her and checked to make sure she was alright. I wrapped her up in a blanket, and turned on the creatures. Go back to what ever demension u are from, and leave us be.

p.s I realy did intend this to be a serious story.

The creatures lunged. I blew them into near by trees. A wall a flames encircled me. My eyes clouded over. I threw ice from my hands and for ever froze the creatures. I noticed the little girl was starring at me but I let it go and led her to my dragon.

I turned. It was dark so I couldnt make out much. Star Gazer's eye markings( a star encased in a moon) lit up, along with the star on her head. the star right below my neck,and my dragon tatoo circling my gut lit up. I was a sight to see. " foolish girl, I warned u not to fight, but You called forth ur dragon rider. I am THE mighty Star Gazers rider, She the queen of the night stalker dragons is a force to recon with. turn now or forever regret ur choice. I terace can wield her awsome power and me alone. Then from behind me a noise sounded. I broke my power surge and slid down to the ground into unconciousness. The little girl screeched and stood over me. She turned to see


this is ur cue lenora


by the way I thought i was protecting the little girl covered in blood, oh well.

The most beautiful person she ever saw walk forth from the trees. The woman was singing a strange song that made the girl want to walk over to her.

the young girl began shaking terace. " wake up. Please, I need u here." she wailed. Star Gazer snorted at the singing woman. The young girl ran to the dragon and hid under her belly.

Though the woman looked as if she wasn't paying attention she was, in fact, completely aware of the small girl.

"Fear not, young one," The woman said, her voice sounded just as musical as her singing. "I mean you and your companions no harm. I wish to help."

The young girl shrieked as the woman came closer. i was listening as I regained conciousness. The woman sounded mesmerizing although Star Gazer didnt seem to fall under her spell.

"My name is Lenora, I'm an Elf. Ask your dragon friend if you do not believe I speak the truth." She walked closer to the large dragon. Bowing deeply she said, "Great magesty, I have long awaited the day that I might see one as great as you. Please, i must press to you that i mean no harm to you, the girl, or Terace."

Star Gazer the queen of the night stalker dragons looked deep into the eyes of the elf. She nodded towards me, I was to speak for her. Curently I had sat up rubbing my head. i felt drained. I couldnt figure out what happened. i stood facing the elf.

A look of concern fleetingly crossed the elven beauties face. She walked over to the girl, "Perhaps you need to rest first, or would you like me to strengthen you. I shall do that, but only if you ask it of me."

no i am ok. I can strengthen myself. I shall be with u in a moment







ps I am getting off now so see u tomarrow.

"Okay" Lenora's blue-green eyes darted around the clearing they were in. She spotted a log and slowly walked over to it and sat down.

to stretch I clenched my fist and Lighting surounded me. I dropped it and walked to the elf.

For a moment, the elf looked suprised but quickly masked that under a calm face.

(are you terace or the girl?? sorry im a bit confused here)

I am terace the elven princess

ok, gotcha

The elf quickly stood up and deeply bowed, "Princess" She murmured.

quit bowing. U should know I was bannished for releasing this girl from prison. She was inocent so I let her escape. Now what would u like to ask my friend here? i asked pointing to star gazer

"Even if you were banished, you are still a Princess." She said earnestly. "And I simply wish to ask if I may hear the story of this girls deliverance for prison."

Star Gazer growled. I translated.

The girl was playing in the field when she stumbled. My mother was infront of her. My mother had her thrown in jail for ruining her petticure. This is Star Gazers mom we are talking about.

"She ruined her pedicure? And was thrown into jail?" She was shocked. "Meaning no disrespect Star Gazer, but that is crazy!"

star gazer made noise in her throat. " she says her mother was ruined. She was turned into a puny pet. She dosent care. her mother disgraced her fathers clan." I said. so I freed the girl and took her away, untill these goons stole her. i said pointing to the frozen creatures.

why do u want to help.

"Helping those who are in need of it is what I do, have you not heard of me?"

not particularyly no. Now if u dont mind I need to get home to my husband John. The sprite prince.

"Ok, tell him I'm sorry I couldn't make it to our meeting yesterday. I was caught up in a fiasco with a chipmunk and a squirrel." She continued to mutter things about small rodents and them being sent to a very hott place.

will u please stop mumbling. The young girl walked over to me. I gave her a hug and told her everything was alright. I didnt know u knew john.

She stoped mumbling after something that sounded eerily like, "them all to a deep dark pit with a hungry dragon." She smiled coyly "But, yes. We go way back."

the girl glared at her and went back to Star Gazer. I will give him ur message. good day


ps I am getting off now talk to ye later.

"Thank you, and good bye." Lenora stood still for a moment, then sat back down. A few minutes later an all white horse trotted into the clearing, she mounted it and rode away with a small nod.

See ya later

I jumped down from star and whistled. A beutiful black pegasus flew down infront of them. I hauled the little girl into the saddle and we set off for the sprite kingdom

Deep within the trees, Lenora watched the path they took and calmly trotted after them, a determined expression on her face.

I felt like someone was staring at me. I looked over my shoulder the entire trip but didnt see anyone

Though Lenora tried, she couldn't shake the feeling that there was more to the small girl than Terace said. Ruining her pedicure?!?! That's insane!

p.s. yea - where is this story going?? and if it is going somewhere i think we need more people in it

I know, I think we need more people invite one of ur friends

yea, kinda new here but i have an idea

k what is it

well im gonna pm arya sivitkona cuz she was helping us out with the elimination game and im gonna see if i can get one of my friends (who also loves Inheritance and writing) to join

k back to the story. I entered the kingdom greeted by john with a kiss on the cheek. I walked past him and headed for the scroll room.

Lenora watched Terace enter the Sprite Kindom, and made her plans.

John watched me as I tore through scrolls looking for info on lenora

After a few moments indecision, Lenora decided to risk it and went to the nearest tavern and asked for a room there.

sudenly Star Gazer sent me a message saying " She's here!" I looked up.

Life helping other people was not a walk in the park, and Lenora reveled in the simple joys pf laying on a bed. She was amazed at how happy it made her to be disconnected from the thoughts of those praying to her for help. She was shoked that Terace had never heard her, Lenora thought stories of her had spread even to the Sprite Kingdom.

oh my she does the same thing as me! I save the world day by day. I headed for the nearest tavern

After a few minutes of laying there Lenora fell asleep, snoring slightly with her mouth open and a drop of drool dripping to her dress. Hey, even elves aren't perfect.

i entered the room the elf was staying in and stared at her .






got to go bye

Lenora's dreams were troubled with images of all the people she failed to help.

k, see ya later

I screeched. the elf woke up. i stared at her.

Terace stared at Lenora and Lenora stared at Terace. "Ummm..." She said, glancing around the room.

oh I am sorry did I startle u? I said in a voice of cold hard steel. The elf looked uncomfortable. Yah u thought I wouldnt see u lerking behind me the whole trip, Star Gazer did.

i am zumiez the sorcerer

I whirled around. " are u working with her?" I asked him angry.

"I work with none but my horse," Lenora said quickly, curios by the sorcerors presence.

then what is he doing here? I asked. he definately isnt with me. I dont work with sorceres they dont use their special abilities they call upon others

"You'd have to ask him yourself, Terace." The Princess' name was said with a sneer.

and I dunno scarecrow - u can always reintroduce them

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woa.... thats just woa
anyway

Lenora's jaw dropped, "Bu... bu..." she stammered.

ooc: Suzy O__o AYAA IS HERE! YAY! ^-^ Ello...people...I'm Ayaa...LenoraSvitkona asked me to join so here I am. ^^d ooc means out of character - If no one knew that - And I have no idea what this is really about so it would be happy if some people would fill me in. :3 But here's a stupid random post from Ayaa. I'll just say he's in a different place than all the other characters as of now. ^^d

Everyone....its...WRATH!! OwO *throws confetti* BONZAI! This is a post from an other rp. woo hoo. He's a demon and he does NOT speak ancient language like in Eragon. It’s a DEMONIC language. I will not write down any words of it though...considering some people will run around talking like demons. And there ARE demon worshippers out there - Thus I will not write down the language. :3 I’ll write down the angelic language though…latter.

And if we don't want demons in this rp I can just make Wrath a shade and speak Ancient Language like in Eragon :3

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“Aah!” He bashed his fist through the wall again, ignoring the fresh pain in his knuckles.
He then let out a series of curses in an ancient language, words only known by him.

Pulsing with rage, Wrath summoned a ball of red energy in his palm which flew from his hand, and smote the barricade. He stalked the house angrily like a caged lion, his teeth clenched tightly as he whispered promises of revenge, in that same mysterious demonic tongue long forgotten.

Howling in rage, Wrath flung his sword at the wall. It sunk halfway through, were it shivered. Weaker demons that surrounded his sanctuary began to crawl through the shadows, and darkness of night. They growled in low whispers obviously, awakened by his fury and to see why he was so displeased.

Wrath shot nine bolts of energy at the demons – which killed them instantly – then ripped his sword free, and swayed towards his couch.

Repulsion curled his lip, as he stretched out his arms, and pummeled the couch with both fists. He sunk deeper into the couches offered cushions growling words of bitter distaste.

How could he have been so stupid? Everything was going fine…he had been smart enough to find the right house. He had been smart enough how to get in, right? But then he just had to walk into the wrong room didn’t he? And then he woke up that stupid woman. And then he panicked.

He who never panic’s.

He remembered her face clearly – Her wide frightened eyes, how the blood had drained from her face… It was all like a picture really.

So why did he do it? Why did he kill her? He could have just run passed her, slipped into that younger boy’s room, grab him and teleport into the night. But yet – he had killed her. And that stupid child came running right into his clutches.

The fact that he had killed the boy’s mother wasn’t what bothered him. He had slaughtered too many demons and humans alike to care about any of that. It was the attention that it would bring. Demon Hunter’s were sure to arrive at the crime scene. And then what? Be killed? Thrown in jail? Hell no.

Relax… He told himself. If you would have run away with the kid, and left her alive she would have called someone. You did the right thing. I did the right thing. He got the kid, and that was all that mattered. He had won. Now he would need the boy to corporate…

Where was that damn Tyrant? He wanted to kick something and for once that sniveling coward wasn’t following him around like a freaking shadow.

Eh, forget the useless son of a ****. He had more important things to worry about.

He sat there in the darkness… His eyes pierced through all the black. He sat there alone, he sat there fuming, he sat there plotting…

Thinking…Thinking…Thinking…

ooc: I drew a picture of him if anyone wants to see ^^d

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ooc: She's...somewhere else too. ^^;; But here's a lame stupid post to get her in. And her name is pernounced SHEE-UH

Shia carefully made her way, through the township. She tried hard not to brush against anyone's skin, but found it nearly impossible. People were around her at every angel and corner. They pushed her aside to get through, smashing her small and feeble body against them. Thoughts were colliding and muddling with her own. Shia tried to force them away, to concentrate on her own mind - But they were too overpowering. Shia's face concocted; the thoughts were horrible, and the echoed into her mind.

The man beside her was a rapist. The woman in front of her was pregnant, but the child was not of her husbands. The little boy was self conscience because other little children, teased him. The man on the other side of her was thinking about killing his elder brother.

Shia growled softly, and tried to push herself away from them. She needed to get away, or she feared that she would lose herself. With her staff held firmly in her hand, Shia zigzagged though the crowd searching for her cousin.

ooc: See? Told you it was lame. And Shia can read a person's thoughts when she touches them. So that's why she has a headache and why she hates crowds.

zumiez unleashed his rath for not believing in him HHAHAHAH

WOOT! go ayaa! the smexiness of wrath shall blind us all

but in the story
Lenora still lay there - unable to move - unable to speak.

ooc: Yesh, he shall blind all. MWAHAHAA!! Er...here's one of my characters to add in this little scene. I just made up this dude, I'll most likely change his name latter on.

Samuel slowly rose from his bedding, his brows creased slightly. He lightly pushed himself up his fingers groping for his staff, blindly. Finally his fingers curled around it and he was able to come to a stand, using the walking stick for a guide.

Finally he came to Lenora's room, which was next to his own. He pushed open the door and walked into the doorway cautiously. Samuel could sense another presence in the room...and it only caused him to tilt his head, confused.

"Lenora...?" Samuel inquired. His voice was low but not dark. "Are you...alright?"

ooc: Woooo that sucked

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Adriel crawled slowly on the roof of the tavern. His dark midnight hair, blew softly in the wind as he came to a stand his red eyes pricing through all darkness like daggers.

He smiled thinly, looking behind him to make sure none followed. Then ran on quick feet across the thatched roof, not bothering to keep himself silent.

ooc: He's gonna do something baaaaaaaaaaaaaaad =D

"Yes, Samuel. It's me. I'm fine, I just wonder what this idiot here," she gestured to Zumiez "is doing?" Lenora said calmly. She then cocked her head, "Did you hear that?" She meant the pounding on the roof.

ooc: eh that sucked but i jsut wrote a chapter for a new story this morning so my writing is used up for a while

Samuel could indeed hear it. The blind had very keen hearing and it only caused Samuel's body to grow tense. His thick dark hair spun with him, as he turned his neck back and forth trying to indicate where it had come from.

He frowned then turned back to Lenora. He knew it was her he could tell by the presence.

"Someone is on the roof," Samuel said, stating the obvious. He turned towards the other person, quivering an eyebrow. "Who...who are you?"

ooc: Adriel will come back latter. I don’t feel like posting as him as of now.

what in the world is going on here its like a freak convention. You shall never know where star gazer is or her sword. I yelled running out the door.

"Well, she left rather fast. Don't you think, Samuel?" Lenora asked calmly, not perturbed by the strange sorceror standing in the corner.

I ran down the hall and out the door right into john. I fell backwards and landed on my butt.

then all of a sudden a loud fart noise came out of it

matt stop it. get out of this story u dont have permission to join and dont talk to anyone or I will be ur living nightmare tomarrow.

so then the penguin ninjas kidnapped me and took me on their spaceship. we flew to mcdonalds and bought a hambergur then flew to australia (they let me drive ) there we met up with there enemy's the evil ninja nerds! its was a long intense battle that lasted about 5 minutes. so then we went and bought ice cream to celebrate...


so we were flying over the ocean when we got lost. all of a sudden the engine in the space ship stopped working so we jumped out. while we were falling we stopped to ask for directions some guy told us we were somewhere over the pacific ocean. so while we were falling we stopped to order a pizza cause we were getting a little hungry. so when the pizza guy found us............



im a good writer i know

please dont spam this is my story, u need to make ur own topic to do that. yes mat u are a good writer lOL

your no fun i just wanted to add to the story

then in the time line, make a fantasy character and find a place to add him or become an already made character thats not currently being used. Sorry, there are rules here.

ooc: Sorry guys...I was waiting to be accepted. I still have no clue if I am or not O_o So if I'm not allowed to post yet......um........SOWWY!!

Samuel smiled lightly, and inclined his head towards Lenora. Although he hadn't seen, her leave the room he could hear the quick paste of her steps, and the slamming of a door. Samuel offered her a light smile.

"Yes, she seemed to be in a hurry." He scratched the back of his neck, an annoying habit from when he was young. He didn't have an inkling to what she was talking about - Sword - Star Gazer. Non of it made sense.

ooc: weeeeee another lame post by the aww-sumness of ayaa.