Name: - Nala

Age:- 16

Gender: - Female

Skills: - She is good at using swords her friend, Justin, taught her most of the intricating sword plays she knows now. She focuses on working hard and learning the hardest sets and moves before she actually uses them in a real battle. She wants to know it down-pat before she uses it. She also knows quite abit of ancient language including using adurna, brisingr, deloi, and the elf's language. She knows the elf way to say hello, Atra esterní ono thelduin/Mor'ranr lífa unin hjarta onr/Un du evarínya ono varda.

Race: - Part human part elf

Hair: - Brown

Eyes: - Brown

Home Village: - Carvahall

Parents: - Unknown

Siblings: - Unknown

Character Personality: She isnt very open to people she doesnt lye but she wont always tell answers that they want. She is very friendly towards people she knows and trusts. SHe doesnt trust many people and when she does it deeply hurts her when they break their trust towards her by lying or hurting her. She doesnt have very many friends because she is very hostile to strangers that just happen to cross her path. She doesnt attack them she might chat for a while but she will tense up when they ask her about her past, her family, or just about her. She can hide her emotions really well unless she is weak and her guard is low. Her eyes can give her away if shes ever really happy or deeply hurt or wounded. When she does have her trust towards someone broken its likely that they will never become friends again. When Nala is in a really really good mood she might do something stupid like trust the wrong person. But when she is hyper she will seem really really scary and people will probably not want to be around her. She overall is really just a sweet person who is judged by her rocky outlayer. She often feels alone but she knows that she is never alone. But she is tough, tougher than meat at times but she does have a soft side for animals in need of help or healing.

Character History: Her whole life she lived with adoptive parents and had no idea that she was adopted. But when she came 14 they told her that she was adopted and out of anger and sadness she ran away. While running away she stumbled upon an emerald egg. She picked it up and a few days later it hatched into a beautiful green dragon female. She loved it and named it Ariela. After a while she had to move around and she found a small cottage one night while Ariela was still small. She went into it for protection and the next morning an old lady woke her up and gave her some food and clothes. She stayed for a little while getting a job down in the town and she stayed there earning money, helping out, and training in sword and ancient language. She learned alot of sword fighting with a boy that she will never forget. His name was Justin, she fell in love with him but knew it would never work and so she decided when it came time to leave she would have to just leave without saying goodbye. About a week later after she came up with that conclusion she decided to start riding Ariela to get her ready for the long trip to the varden. She stood outside on the night she was leaving, she stood alone on a small hill. She had silent tears falling from her face. She didnt want to leave him but she knew it was for his own good. "I love you." She said before drying her tears and hopping on Ariela. They set out for the Varden that very night. That was the last time she ever cried.

Weapons: She has a sword that has a special gold handle that has two blue stones that sit on the oppisite sides of the handle, the blade is emerald. What those stones do is hold power when they are full they shine really bright. She also has two bows one is just a regular oak small bow, the other is a willow large bow. The small bow she uses for moving around if she is going to do archery while moving she uses her small bow, but if not or just for hunting she uses her willow. She has a small dagger that she keeps in her boots. The dagger as well has blue stones that are for storing magic as well.

Likes: - She likes swimming, flowers, running, flying, and practicing different skills, such as magic, sword play, and logic.

Dislikes: - She doesnt like anyone hurting Ariela and doesnt like to be threatened. She also doesnt like opening up to people.

Animal Companions: - She has a medium size snake called Wyrda and her dragon, Ariela.

Character's Physical Description: - She has a slim body like figure and is slightly shorter than most people. She has really tan skin from being part elf and pointy ears. She has brown hair and brown eyes her hair goes down to just below her shoulders. She is normally considered very beautiful because of her face and body. She wears mostly leather shirts, pants, and thick boots. Though mostly dirt and sand cover her scars from previous battles.

Dreams for the Future: - She wants to find out who her parents are and help remove Galbotrix from his throne.

Reason for Dreams: - She wants the next generation to have it easier and not have to deal with a bad leader. She wants to find out who her parents are because she would like to know her blood lines and such.

Alignment/side: - Varden




Dragon Name: - Ariela

Age: - 1 yr 3 months

Gender:- Female

Parents:- Unknown

History: She hatched a few days after she felt her riders presence near her egg and grew very well behaved trying to show that she was a good dragon, because she had heard of dragons getting killed because there riders didn’t like them. She grew up in a cottage because of a big storm. She stayed with a lady for a long time. Ariela felt pain for Nala, in the heart, She knew she didnt want to leave but she didnt want him to be put in danger. If only she would open her eyes and see that that wasnt the right way, that she should marry him. But she didnt on the night they were leaving she could feel the sadness and heaviness of the pain on Nalas heart. But when she came back all she said was, "Lets go."

Personality: She is sweet and caring but also daring and brave. She isn’t afraid to take risks, its how she is. She is protective of Nala, but more of a best friend towards her not like a mother. She gets along really well with other dragons because she isn’t overbearing and protective. She is easily provoked by anything or anyone who threatens her or Nala. She also trusts alot more easily than Nala. She focuses more on the good rather than the bad as well.

Colour: - She is the color emerald

Appearance: - She has the same body as Saphira does in the movie but she is just a little more muscular in the wings and in the legs. She has huge teeth and wings that spread out and can cover people which she does for Nala on rainy days.

Armour: (if any) - She doesnt have anything but she does where a leather saddle with a few packs hanging off of it.

Dreams for future: - She wants to stay faithful to Nala, find a mate, and live life to the fullest.

Reasons for dreams: - Because she wants to be a good friend and be there for Nala. She would like to help bring back the population of dragons as well. Also she wants to have fun in her life and not just be a boring old lump on a log.

You're first sentence is a run-on. Might want to fix that . You have several verbs in place of adjectives (e.g. "intricating sword plays") You also say "... including adurna, brisingr, deloi, and the elf's language." The elf's language is the ancient language. Speaking the elf's language would mean speaking the ancient languages as fluently as they do. "She knows the elf way to say hello, Atra esterní ono thelduin/Mor'ranr lífa unin hjarta onr/Un du evarínya ono varda." This actually translates to "May good fortune rule over you/Peace live in your heart/And the stars watch over you," which doesn't exactly mean hello. Once again we see run-ons in Personality, and you should probalby make sure you use apostrophes in contractions (isn't, you're, aren't, etc.). Small contradiction when you say she's hostile towards strangers, then say she will chat with ethem a little while. "Hyper" is a broad word, might want to specify what you mean by that.. excited, anxious, nervous, so on. "really really" isn't acually incorrect, but it's very repeditive and would sound better with just one "really" or a "very." You should actually use another word sometimes, I can almost see a huge column of "really"s. You say that she is a sweet person judged by her rocky outlayer(which isn't a word, by the way.). But from the first part of her personality we got that she is hostile to people she doesn't know, isn't open to people, but has really good moods which she trusts the wrong people in. Once again, maybe a contradiction you should probably clarify a bit. Other than a few more run-ons in history, and some more repeated concepts ("later after" is the one I'm looking at), your history is excellent. In weapons, try to find some variaton other than "that has." How about "...sword with a special gold handle that has two blue stones which sit on opposite sides of the handle, and an emerald blade," or something to that effect. [Not sure about this, but isn't a "large bow" called a long bow, and a small one a short bow?] You're last sentence about your weapons has "as well" twice. In your Physical Description, you just have another run-on, and your last sentence should say "Most of her scars from previous battles are covored by sand and dirt," or something. Dragon looks good, so hope to see you RPing soon!