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zelf
Peasant Elder
Joined: September 24th, 2010, 3:15 pm Posts: 113 Location: smewhere eating a cookie
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Affiliation: Dragonriders
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kilev
Name: - kilev
Age:- Unkown.
Gender: - male
Skills: He is skilled in many kinds of weopons and magic. He can fight with just about any weopon he picks up, He does not like to use magic very often, but when he does he is an expert in defenseive spells. he is not very strong but he is fast and knows a lot of tricks *tries to think of more things to say*... and he is very good at keeping himself hidden for long periods of time.
Race: - half elf ((I will settle for elf if that is not allowed))
Hair: - black
Eyes: - dark green.
Home Village: - ((oh flip I forgot the name of the place the elves live))
Parents: - His parents are dead, names are unkown. Siblings: - none. Character Personality: He always looks as if he is up to something. he hardly ever talks and it is hard to tell what he is feeling. he spends most of he time away from the croud whatching everyone, when he does talk he sounds as if he is in deep thought, and startleing him is nearly impossible. if you were to threaten him with a knife, the most you would get him to say was a few coments on the sharpness of the blade, But he also is very obvserveant, he may look like he doesn;t care what is going on but he pays very close attention to everything. He is espeshily gentle with children, as they have never done anything to him. He is also known to say that he hates the empire without any hesitation at all. ((yikes, only six lines.. and my brain is almost out of personality ideas) he often wares a black cloak and keeps the hood up almost all the time, and never takes it off when there are a lot of people around. He often sits in one spot and thinks for hours, then randomly gets up and leaves. you could say most people think he is very strange, and many do not know what he is doing most of the time.
((I will add more to this later if I need to))
Character History: When he was very young his family was attacked by Galbatorix. he managed to escape but his parents were killed. We wonderd alone for a long time, he perfected his magic from lessons he learned from an elf that lived alone in a hut in the middle of a forest, He never told kilev his name. But he said he too knew what it was like to lose his parents and offerd to teach him. This same elf also trained him in the use of many other weopons. Soon he could not teach kilev anymore, so kilev went off on his own. he often had nightmares about his parents death, and swore that he would make galbatorix pay for what he did. So he set off to find ways to overthrow the king. Soon days turned to weeks then weeks into months and then months into years. slowly he stopped talking to anymore for more then a few minuts at a time, and avoided anyone he did not know for sure he could trust. he travled to many cities, not afraid to exspress his hatred of the empire. When knowlage of his feelings became too clear in a city he would slip away and disappear for a time. this went on for several years, untill people never mentiond him again. many think he was a myth, others say he was killed by the kings soldiers. but he is still around nd always watching and planning. Waiting for any chnace he can find to harm the empire. he travles constnatly, never staying around for more then a few hours.
Weapons- he uses a meadium length sword.
Likes: - there isin't much this charactor likes, but he is quite fond of children, since they have done nothing to hurt him.
Dislikes: - The empire and everyone that supports it.
Weakness / Fear: - galbatorix.
Animal Companions: -none
Character's Physical Description: Well as you know he has black hair and dark green eyes. His skin is slightly tan and he walks with a slight limp. he has a scar on his face and several on his arms. his rght leg is badly scarred and is the reason he walks with a slight limp. he is tall about 5/9 1/2. His right hand is always hidden from veiw, unless he is useing his sword. most of the time people only see his left hand. His ears are slightly pointed, but you will only noitce if you are looking really closely.
Dreams for the Future: - he dreams that he will one day be free of Galbatorix.
Reason for Dreams: - he watched his parents get killed by the dark king. and does not want anyone els to suffer the same fate.
Alignment/side he doesn't stay with one group. he supports anyonne who rebels against the empire.
((I am aware that some of the feilds may not be long enuugh. I will add more if i have to. and when i think of more things to add))
_________________ I am the marshmallow king. fear my puffyness!
Last edited by zelf on September 27th, 2010, 2:02 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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September 26th, 2010, 2:59 pm |
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DragonSlayer4
Black Dragon
Joined: February 2nd, 2008, 3:34 am Posts: 6998 Location: Me fav website in the whole world, SF.
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Skulblakans
Dragon: Faelia
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Re: kilev
This is a pretty well thought out character, zelf. You are right about the lengths, but you nearly nailed all of them. Just one more line on character personality and character history, and add a little bit to character physical description. Change those points as best you can, then I can happily Accept. I'm curious though; you say Kilev is half elf, which is completely fine, but what is the other half of his heritage? Just wondering.
_________________ Eka fricai un Shur'tugal. Wiol ono Rest in peace, ILS. You'll be greatly missed... Good: Felecia and Ebony Zeke Shaina Mýa Johdzsia Sarai Vermona Samantha Tyleek Sephora Sofranir Tel'aeír Jeria Sol Jessa Neutral: Leanbrara Naixul Autarkeia Sevena Vena Kenai Evil: Iaras Leurgan I will watch over your charries too, Rathon.
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September 26th, 2010, 10:20 pm |
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zelf
Peasant Elder
Joined: September 24th, 2010, 3:15 pm Posts: 113 Location: smewhere eating a cookie
Gender: Guy
Affiliation: Dragonriders
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Re: kilev
ok, i'll need to think of more things to add to those...
and the other half of his heritage is human.
_________________ I am the marshmallow king. fear my puffyness!
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September 26th, 2010, 10:25 pm |
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dracoaestas
RPG Team Head
Joined: November 17th, 2007, 6:26 pm Posts: 5587 Location: attending a pie-eating contest with the other aspiring evil overlords
Gender: Girl
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Dragon: Ardel
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Re: kilev
Well you could add to Physical Description whether or not his ears are pointed. That might be important for staying hidden, if he's a half-elf. For History, you could elaborate on the old elf hermit a little more, for example, his name, and why he decided to train a half-elf. Hope that helps a little. I look forward to having your charry join us in our adventures.
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****Phalynx**Solarae**Rigel**Alna'ir**Sirius**Ecco**Temias**Kalo****
And I'm watching out for your charries, ILS. *****Faefnir***Navarre***Rimfax*****
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September 26th, 2010, 11:48 pm |
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zelf
Peasant Elder
Joined: September 24th, 2010, 3:15 pm Posts: 113 Location: smewhere eating a cookie
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Re: kilev
ok, still thinking about how to put those in..
EDIT: added a bit more. not sure if it's enough.
_________________ I am the marshmallow king. fear my puffyness!
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September 26th, 2010, 11:59 pm |
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dracoaestas
RPG Team Head
Joined: November 17th, 2007, 6:26 pm Posts: 5587 Location: attending a pie-eating contest with the other aspiring evil overlords
Gender: Girl
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Dragon: Ardel
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Re: kilev
Actually, all of your lengths are correct now, zelf. Good work. lol I know the first bio can be difficult, but if you make more charries or get into rping, it can get a lot easier. Who knows: maybe new history or personality traits of this charry will come to light as you rp? lol
Anyway, I Accept.
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****Phalynx**Solarae**Rigel**Alna'ir**Sirius**Ecco**Temias**Kalo****
And I'm watching out for your charries, ILS. *****Faefnir***Navarre***Rimfax*****
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September 29th, 2010, 12:54 am |
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dark dragon
RPG Team
Joined: August 21st, 2006, 9:28 pm Posts: 8122 Location: I don't know, how could you expect me to when it was you who brought me here!
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Affiliation: Dragonriders
Dragon: Avadius
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Re: kilev
Looks good, I accept =)
_________________ Good: Equinox Eris/Galedrim Aaron Ephidel Tvashtar Savania Incendia Radenya Zeuk Quasar Nainocaro Alex Archayac Sahara
Neutral: Snare
Evil: Crimson Dsurion Demondred "Destroyer of Hope" Solstus "Dragon of the Night"
Let your spirit flow in each and everyone one of us and may we bask in your forgiveness, love, and mercy.
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September 29th, 2010, 1:07 am |
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zelf
Peasant Elder
Joined: September 24th, 2010, 3:15 pm Posts: 113 Location: smewhere eating a cookie
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Re: kilev
you say it is accepted, But I cannot do anything yet.
_________________ I am the marshmallow king. fear my puffyness!
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September 29th, 2010, 2:54 pm |
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DragonSlayer4
Black Dragon
Joined: February 2nd, 2008, 3:34 am Posts: 6998 Location: Me fav website in the whole world, SF.
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Skulblakans
Dragon: Faelia
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Re: kilev
That's because you need three acceptances.
I Accept.
_________________ Eka fricai un Shur'tugal. Wiol ono Rest in peace, ILS. You'll be greatly missed... Good: Felecia and Ebony Zeke Shaina Mýa Johdzsia Sarai Vermona Samantha Tyleek Sephora Sofranir Tel'aeír Jeria Sol Jessa Neutral: Leanbrara Naixul Autarkeia Sevena Vena Kenai Evil: Iaras Leurgan I will watch over your charries too, Rathon.
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September 29th, 2010, 9:28 pm |
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dracoaestas
RPG Team Head
Joined: November 17th, 2007, 6:26 pm Posts: 5587 Location: attending a pie-eating contest with the other aspiring evil overlords
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Skulblakans
Dragon: Ardel
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Re: kilev
Awesome. Welcome to the rps, zelf. I hope you have fun.
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****Phalynx**Solarae**Rigel**Alna'ir**Sirius**Ecco**Temias**Kalo****
And I'm watching out for your charries, ILS. *****Faefnir***Navarre***Rimfax*****
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September 30th, 2010, 1:57 am |
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