Name: Kora Swiftblade
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Job/Specialty: Varden Soldier
Race: Human
Hair: Brown
Eyes: Brown
Body: Kora is tall, about six-foot seven. He is slim and muscular, but not bulky. His white skin has been tanned from hours spent in the fields outside Yazuac while sparring with Drake. He has a scar running from underneath his left arm down to his upper thigh. NOTE: Kora is left-handed.
Home Village: Yazuac
Parents: Daemon and Dana Cibarbra
Siblings: Kari
Character Personality: Kora grew up in a small town with a few close friends, and never met anyone remarkable. However, this does not make him a simpleton. His close relationship with his parents helped him learn deep values that are close to his heart. Loving to spend time with Drake and his family, he gained amazing intellectual insight by reading great literature untainted by Galbatorix’s hand. He is a hopeless romantic who dreams of finding love, however, in the small town, he never found anyone to love.
Character History: Kora was born in Yazuac 20 years ago. He grew up in blissful ignorance that the father of his best friend, Drake, was an underground agent for the Varden. Recently, he and Drake went out hunting. Upon returning they found their parents and siblings along with friends brutally murdered, the town sacked. When Kora found family, it broke his heart. The unbearable pain of losing his beloved parents and sister drove him into a fury beyond comprehension. He ran through the gates, driven by his fury, rage, and sorrow, desperate to find the people, the creatures, the monsters that did this to his family. He and Drake now fight side-by-side, spurred onward by their vow to avenge their town.
Character's good personality traits: Loyalty, courage, and honesty are traits passed on to him from his parents. Fencing with Drake has been one of his favorite pastimes, and he has thus become an excellent swordsman.
Character's bad personality traits: The basis for his strength lies in his fury and desire to avenge his family, and his want to do so can make him irrational.
Weapons: Kora carries a sword he was given by the dwarves named Yawe. He and drake also carry an assortment of knives and such.
Likes: Dwarven food, wine and beer, his best friend, Drake
Dislikes: Empire, Urgals, Slavers
Animal Companions: A horse taken from a band of slavers which he named Roxana Character's Physical Description (clothes, accessories, etc.): Kora enjoys rich, deep, and dark colors. He often wears blue, red, or black, tunics. He wears black pants most of the time, although he also has a brown pair. He has two bandanas he ties around his forehead, one black, one blue. He carries two rings, one gold, his mother’s, one silver, his father’s, taken from the dead hands of his parents. He keeps the gold ring hidden away, and plans to give it to his future wife. He wears the silver ring every day as a reminder of the pain that drives him to fight the Empire.
Dreams for the Future: Kora’s greatest dream was to find a love greater than any man before, as he his a passionate romantic. However after the incident, his is now desire to kill the Urgals and soldiers of the Empire that destroyed his town.
Reason for Dreams: He is in constant pain as a result of his losses. Also, growing up in a small town, he never found a young maiden to call his own.
Important things character has forgotten: Kora and Drake, while searching through the wreckage of Yazuac, never found a definite body of Kari. With all the burnt and eaten skeletons alongside the bodies, they assumed she had suffered a more horrible fate.
Alignment/side: Varden

Hey, this is my first try at an RP. This looks like alot of fun and me and my friend have alot of ideas for stuff to do and adventures to RP! Look for Drake coming soon!

Em... dont double post for a start.

It's nice and complex, and a good length.

Seems fine, accepted.