Name: Kelsey

Age: 25

Birthday: June 14, 1981

Gender: Female

Job/Specialty: Dragon Rider

Hair: Brown hair with blonde streaks going down.Her hair goes down to her shoulders.

Eyes: Brown like her hair, just has a little sparkle to them.

Body: Very thin, but muscular.She 5"6 and wears a tunic with short pants.

Home village: Ellesmera

Varden or Empire: varden

Parents: Father(Fyloin) and mother (yranda).

Siblings: Has none that she know of.

Charachters personality: She is a very nice and kind person.But when it comes to a fight, shes all in it.She likes to stay alone, although she meets up with her freinds sometime.She travels all over alagaesia in search of new riders to tell them news of if they are being wathced by the kindgom or known of.Like all elves she is expression free when she meets people.She is also very protective of her stuff and dragon, Kiyla.When something goes in the wrong direction, she goes on a mad rampage until she can fix it, no matter how long it takes.So when she does, stay out of her way.Like all elves, she gets sick at the sight of meat, any kind, all except for wolf meat, but rarely eats it unless starving to death.

Charachters History: When she was a little girl, she had a happy and proud life.But after that last day with her parents, they were killed by the mob of urgals that found them while walking in the hadarac desert.From that battle she had gotten a feirce scar down her left cheek.Shes been lonely ever since.She became an orphan, like every other kid who olost both their parents.She was adopted by her uncle, Nori, the day after the mob had attacked.She was then raised into a beautiful women.But after so many years, she still was lonesome.So she ran away and went to Eldor Lake, where she found a red and black "stone".That night, the so called "stone", had hatched for her.She was awakened by a squeek of a beautiful red and black dragon.Ever since then, she had been training by herself ever since her dragon, Kiyla, had been hatched.Now, shes wandering out everywhere in Alagaesia.

Charachters Good Personality Traits: Nice, kind and gentle to all people, except her enemys.

Charachters Bad Personality Traits: Easily angered when annoyed.

Animal Companions: Kiyla, her dragon.

Dreams for the future: To avenge her parents death.

Reasons for dreams: Because they were killed.

Things charachter has forgotten: Nothing in particular.

one or two spelling mistakes like character is spelt wrong a few times. Also could you extend personality a bit please.

alright, thanks Glenwing

so...fix what I said?

yeah, but i dont think it was enough, tell me and ill fix it.

its fine