There once was wild a green dragon that lived in hiding from the evil king Galbatorix. Her name was Emrelda. She was quick-witted and had a nose for trouble! She had heard of a dragon egg hatching in Palancar Valley,-Though she had never thought there was any more dragons that would hatch for a rider- but had never gone there in fear of being confiscated by the Empire. There was only one that could make her overcome this fear: a rider. And the rider was...

I am a orange dragon (with a tint of red) and I am hiding with the dragon called Emrelda. I am named Gustoff (call me fire) and can get out of sticky situations. Also I'm male looking for a mate (not Emrelda) and hate the empire. lastly I wan't to find my real name.



OCC:I hope its ok that I travel with you Emrelda

Is that a riddle?:?

Yes, you can join me, Fire!
So, (I guess I come up with a Rider for me!) I was looking for... gosh! I can't think of anything! I need more characters!
(unless you could come up with something, Roan38.)

ummmm... one day I was out catching some deer and saw a boy ,who was 15, was hiking around and suddenly 4 ugals poped out. Then ,amazingly, he starts using magic on them.So I called over emrelda too see what she thought.




OCC:hopefully someone wants to be the boy for a new character

When Fire showed me this boy, I was quite intriugued (or however you spell that), because I was a wild dragon, and I had never seen a person that was not bent on capturing me. I thought urgals were nasty creatures Galbatorix had bestowed upon the land, there only to wreck everything and everyone in their path!!! But as I watched this boy more, I saw that he was starting to defeat them. I was very amazed! "Who could this person be?" I said.

"I'm not sure who he is but he's powerful," I responded. suddenly my nose ticled and I started to sneeze then a burst of flames flew from my nose and killed the remaning ugals.Yet lukly I din't kill the boy.But he started looking at us." hopefully I can get us out of this mess,"I thought.

occ- can i join???

ooc-plzz

i think the last dragon egg contains a green dragon like esmeralda

No, actually. But you can use your character in this story if you want.

Yes, of course!!!!

"Uh-ohhhhh" I said to Fire through my mind link.
The boy just stared at us. I felt the skin under my scales turn red. "Ouch! It feels like someone is tugging at my brain!" I quickly put up my mental barriers.

OOC:I can be the guy in the story if you want....

My head was burning hot so I put up my barries and tried to peer into the boys mind.But he was too good so I held back. Insted I swiched my barrier to atcking ugals to scare him off but that didn't work so I just held my barriers.




OOC: shure orik, go on ahead

OOC: Thanks
Hranak kept his barriers up around his mind. "I wonder what those Dragons are here for.." He muttered. He felt a dragon try to read his mind. After the Dragon gave up, Hranak thought of the events that had happened just now. He thought of the Urgals and the Dragons, and then he knew. The Urgals thought he had the Information about those 2 Dragons!! Hranak decided to communicate with the Dragons. He reached out and thought he feelt a dragons mind. He asked to talk to that Dragon.
OOC: I think its the Green one he is talking too.

Since I can be a little flat-headed sometimes, then I decided to put down my barriers just a bit to see if this person was nice. "Uuuummm, I-I'm E-emrelda...." I was not quite sure what to say. but I thought I heard the boy saying something, so I let my barriers down a little bit more.

Hranak heard the Dragon say her name. he took his barriers down and said, "Hello, I am called Hranak by my friends. What are you doing here? I did not think there would be 2 Dragons here, so Why are you here?". He walked to the Dragons and looked at them.

OOC- this is a farce of an RP with several broken rules. USE OOC OR BANS WILL BE PLACED.

I'm quite sorry, but what do you mean? I don't want to be in trouble with you or anything, I'm just not sure what you mean.

OOC, does OOC mean out of conversation? Sorry, I'm real new to forums, so I don't know that much about rules for them.

OOC- out of character, and dont double post!

OCC: do you mean we don't use OCC enouf?

OOC: We need to use OOC

OCC: ok, so where were we at again? oh ya never mind.



since the burnig feeling was gone I closed my barriers and asked Hranak" so who are you egsactly"

Hranak smiled and said " you mean my real name? I dont know that. you may call me Shrin."

"ok shrin, and not to be nosey but what are you."

Yes, I was kind of wondering too. After all, it is not every day you see one such as yourself defeating urgals like that. (Even if we did sort of help.)

OOC: I need to get better at name making.
Shrin, surprised at hearing the voice of the red Dragon, was awestruck. He smiled and replied"I am a human. as to what ive done, I have been trained with minor magic. my Grandfather was an accomplished magician, and my great grandfather was a Rider. so magic runs in the family. Ive been looking for a Dragon all my life. those Urgals were here under Galbatorixs orders to capture you. i followed them and they spotted me. so i had to fight. and you know the rest of the story. Now i know Emrelda's(hoped i spelled it right ) name, but i dont know your name Red Dragon. so can you tell me? Thanks." Shrin bows.

my name is gustoff, call me fire, but I don't know my real name

"Well then, Hello Fire. It is a honor to meet two noble Dragons in the same day. But look, its getting dark. I will make camp out here for tonight." Shrin retrieves his pack from its hiding place and got out some supplies that he would need for that night. He also pulled out a Green sword that he never used. "This sword was my great grandfathers. It was his favorite thing, Besides his Green Dragon." Shrin grew quiet, thinking of his great Grandfather as a Rider, and of his longing to be a Rider.

that's a beautiful sword! I looked closer, it glinted in the light of the fire. do you know what the name of your great-grandfather's dragon is? I asked carefully, trying not to sound nosey or like a nuisance.

i am a wild silver dragon named silva. i am out hunting when i see a green and orange dragon flying above a human. i decide to get a closer look without letting them see me.

As I was wondering around I spotted smoke. So I decided to look into it.




OOC: I am going to do a breaf description of this charictor (I spelled that wrong.)

It is a girl the age of sixteen, one emerald eye the other ocean blue, strawberry blonde hair.
and the names Erais.

P.S. If you want more info about her go here http://www.saphiraforums.com/en/viewtopic.php?t=832

OOC: you have to use ooc if your charecter isn't talkin

suddenly in the middle of our conversation a tree fell down so me and emrelda went to the spot to check it out and we saw a silver dragon...

OOC: Okay But what does it mean? Never mind

I heard a crash as I was getting there so I quickened my pace. After about two minutes to my astonishment I saw two dragons and a boy staring at another dragon, I froze in my path then the boy looked at me.

"Excuse me, I was just wondering, but what does the name 'Galbatorix' mean to you?"
I said to the girl.
"And I have a feeling we are being watched."
I looked around but saw nothing.

"What do you mean, by that." I said startled. "Do you mean how I have such anger agains't him for keeping me locked up since as long as I can remeber." I said glaring "Do you mean how he has killed out the dragons. How he bewitched the dragon egg I have with a spell right before it hatched so it won't intell I swear to him in the ancient language my obeidnce." Then I coverd my mouth relizing what info I had just reveled.

I was shocked. "you have a dragon egg??? What spell did he cast? And isn't there some way you can break that oath? It sounds like you have suffered a lot from the king." I knew I was starting to sound like a chatterbox, but I couldn't help myself.

"Yes," I said, "I was about to make the oath but then he was destracted for enough time for me to get away I grabbed the egg and left. I know I don't even know why he kept me there for so long."

wow thats quite a tale. just wondering but are you good at flying and fire beathing?

OOC- gladr for got ur chars name and hope i can but in.


Her sence didnt fail her for there was someone waiting and hiding.

OOC-what?

Shrin looked at the girl. She seemed familiar somehow. " Fire, Emrelda, who is she? Who is the other dragon? They serve Galbatorix?! Watch them, they may have Urgals nearby. Dont tell them your names, or we are chopped liver."Shrin said to the Dragons. to the girl he said, "Hello, my name is Hranak. Who are you? And who is your dragon?" Shrin looked at the Silver Dragon. He put his hand on his sword's hilt, just in case.
OOC: so you know, Im the Boy. Im uuuuugly j/k

OOC: LOL

IC: "What, thats not my dragon. this is mine." I said then pulled out the egg. "I haven't ever seen him before. I heard the tree fall and came to check it out." i said then returned the egg back in my bag. "This might convince you that am not working for Galbatorix." I then uncoverd my Dragon scar. "Is that convincing." I then coverd up my scar...

ooc- silva is a male dragon.

"i am silva and i am a wild dragon. i have no idea who this girl is. i was out hunting when i saw the two dragons and decided to take a closer look," i mentally tell the boy," what is we're name and who are the other two dragons."

"We should probley leave. We might look strange walking around in public." I said...

a blur as dark as night blured past them, like a howling wind. theys saw deathly yellow eyes. the character rushed past them and dissapeared. the power coming from him was to powerful for any of them to match. who was he?

OOC: Uh, Orik, just to let you know, the defenition of chopped liver is being ignored. Oh yeah, are we all talking in the ancient language?

'i still do not know who you all are but i do agree with the girl"

"Oh sorry," I said emberessed. "I am Erais. We should start going. I think we should head to the spine." So we started off. "Whats that sound?" I asked. "I don't know." Fire replied. "Wait that sounds like soldiers. Run." I said and we took off torwards the spine...

OOC: Erais you cant take control of another persons character, it is not allowed. Dont do that.
IC: "So your name is Erais." Shrin said. " We are going to have to fly out of here. May I get On either of your backs?" Shrin asked Fire and Emrelda. "Erais we are going to need to fly out of here." said Shrin. He ran and got his pack and got his bow and arrows.

OOC: Sorry.
IC: "Come on hurry." I said. There getting here fast. We left in the spine...

can i be a elf u meet on the way named Falin

OOC: Its okay with me.

OOC:ya just jump in at any time

never mind,sorry, i don't want to

OOC:then why ask

IC: so we were on our way when I saw an army of ugals...

" i think we can take them"

"Uhhh, are you sure." I replied...

" yeah, what are you unsure of you abilities or something," i replied," i still do not know who you others are."
ooc: do you think they will come with a game for the movie.

OOC:They are.

IC: "Well its just I have never fought any one else. Besides..." I broke off.

"those are the same Urgals ive seen before!!!!!"

"What do you mean?" I asked.

good story guys

"who are you."

"I am just a weird person. That galbatorix is after." I snapped back. Then ran into the spine.

"Wait! you can't go, they'll kill you!" I yelled after her (In my mind). But I was pretty sure I was too late.
"You can get on me." I said to Shrin, not knowing what this was going to be like since no one have ever ridden me. "Just hold on tight to one of my spikes, this could get rough." So I crouched down as low as possible without hurting myself too badly. "Ouch, hurry up, or I'll get stiff!"

OOC:nice story u guys have going here.

Then lightning fast I struck. Then they fell down dead. I then followed them...

i followed. " why didn't we just stay and fight. i think we could have taken them."

I soon caught up to them. "Wiat up." I yelled wayving my hand...

Shrin climed onto Emrelda's back and held on tight. " Erais, dont fight them! thay are too strong in that number." " Im ready" Shrin said to Emrelda.

Erais started to run into the spine.

"barzul knular, wait you can't beat all of those urgals by yourself. let me have some of the fun!"

"wait for me" this is gonna be good

ioksok looked at the companions runing after the crazy elf. i dont no what there doing but we should follow them he said t ohis dragon

and by the time I got there all the ugals were almost dead oh well I still got to fry some but emrelda and the others allready killed most of them.

I saw one urgal trying to sneak away, but because I was having so much fun, I accidentally forgot that Shrin was on my back. I reared up, roared loudly and breathed fire on the urgal. Oops. I forgot you were on me. Sorry about that!

Then Erais ran. There was a roar and Murtagh appearred. He grabbed Erias and took off. "Not again." Erais yelled.

ioksok followed mertagh finlly he thought i don't have to chase after the elf agian mertagh and ioksok landed in a small feild on the outskirts of carhaval. ioksok went into the town to drink while he left mertagh and erias alone in the camp.

Erias would struggle but couldn't get away.

fire started to follow ioksok and as I started to see better in the dark shadows he saw MURTAGH the one who killed my brother!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I started moving faster and gaining him.

i followed them and kept watch from the sky just encase somebody were to attack or if erais needed help.

get over here now came agothors call ioksok got up and left he only got one beer and he was mad. he made it to the last line of houses when he felt some thing wrong.

Erias would struggle. "Why do you want me?" "You know very well why?" Erias then screamed in pain. As the scar on her wrist began to bleed.

OOC- Only use one exclamation mark and no smilies please.

as I was gaining I was begining to see Erais and she was bleeding badly."she won't last long!" I thought and started going even faster but thorn was a well trained flyer.

Erais took her dagger and cut her wrist. The bleeding stopped. She gasped for air.

i went to help the orange dragon whos name i do not know with thorn.

Shrin woke up. he heard Emrelda say sorry, but it was far off.he rolled over and felt pain. one of his arms and both of his legs were broke. he had his sword and his arrows, but he couldnt get anywhere. " Emrelda, Fire, Erais!"he called with his mind. no reply. " Emrelda, help! An arm and both of my legs are broke. he called. Suddenly, Murtagh jumped out of nowhere. he had Erais. "what are you doing with here?" Shrin called. he pulled out his bow, but couldnt fire. he was knocked out into sub-conscienceness. Theyre wrong, he's bigger than they said Shrin thought before he went down into the never-ending darkness.

OOC: He is not dead, he is just knocked out by Murtagh.

Erais was glaring at Murtagh. She tried to stand up. "Don't even try." He said. Erais sat back down. She cut her wrist again to prevent it from bleeding. "Leave them alone. They have nothing to do with what you want me for." Erais yelled at him.