Name: Ray’Zaak (pronounced RAY-zack)

Age: 21

Gender: Male

Job: Dragon Rider, Warrior

Skills: Fast swordsmanship (faster than a normal human. he can almost match an elf.), control of elements is superb, high wisdom (skipped 5th, 6th, 7th, and 8th grades) very skilled with bow and arrow, high stamina and will. Can keep up fights for as long as the opponent doesn’t die. There is also his magic.

Race: Human

Body: 6.4 slim and muscular

Hair: Red with streaks of black.

Eyes: Green (for color of dragon)

Home Village: In Alea’ian, Alalea

Parents: Unknown

Siblings: None (that are known)

Character Personality: Ray’Zaak is a loner. He doesn’t care about his enemies and, beside his dragon, he works alone. He fights in the night and will help anyone poor. He can be angered very easily and if he is angered I suggest running away from him. He can subdue his anger by talking to his dragon or by being in peaceful places. Ray’Zaak’s anger has left him an enemy of all except the Varden. He is usually found in the Hadarac desert looking for slave catchers and killing them. His main quest is to find his parents and kill Galbatroix.

Character History: Ray’Zaak has lived wit his uncle for the past few years until he stumbled upon a shiny rock in on the street. Then Ray’Zaak kept the stone thinking it was worth a lot. He tried selling it but no one wanted it. Soon it hatched a dragon. A few days later soldiers and two men in cloaks came looking for a rock like Ray’Zaak found. One of the store owners told them that Ray’Zaak had it. Luckily Ray’Zaak wasn’t home when the strangers burned his uncle’s house, killing his uncle and his cousins. After this tragedy Ray’Zaak left town to avenge his uncle and cousins. He then stumbled on an old man who gave him his sword, Orie’estor.
The old man claimed that he was a rider and he could teach him the secrets of the riders. Then a few months later they met up with the Ra’zak. When they met up with them they killed Galen, the old man. And since then Ray’Zaak has been trying to hunt down the Ra’zak.

Weapons: Orie’estor, a sword given to him from a rider, Galen, who said to have been a rider and known his father. It is elven made and never rusts or breaks. And there is his elven bow.

Likes: Using magic, looking after his dragon, sparring, fighting on the war against the Empire.

Dislikes: The Empire and all who side with them.

Animal Companions: His dragon, Ray’Jour.

Character's Physical Description: Muscular teenager who looks.

Dreams for the Future: To fight alongside the Varden to help wage war upon the Empire.

Reason for Dreams: So that he may avenge his uncle and cousins and to find his parents and avenge them if their dead, and so that he can help bring peace to a broken world.

Alignment/side: Neural but wishes to join the Varden

For dragon riders only:

Dragon Name: Ray’Jour

Age: 9 months

Gender: Male

Parents: Unknown

History: Found by Ray’Zaak as a stone on the road, Ray’Jour has followed Ray’Zaak faithfully while he joins the Varden. He too wants to set free the land which the Empire has corrupted.

Personality: A fierce, protective dragon that looks after Ray’Zaak at all times and will not let him out of his sight.

Color: Green

Appearance: A green dragon that shines in the pure moonlight. His eyes glow yellow and his face is long. He is big for his age but is very strong.

Armor: Only his dragon armor. He has thicker scales on his wings allowing his wings more protection.

Dreams for future: To free the land of Alagaesia and let all dragons free.

Reasons for dreams: To be able to fly free without having to worry about being shot down or attacked. He also hopes that freeing all dragons would allow him to meet his parents.

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