Name:malwin
Age:111
Gender:femal
Skills:archery, sword fighting, magic
Race:elf
Hair:grey but usaly keeps it dirty blond
Eyes:blue
Home Village:lived in Kirtan intill she was 28 then moved to Ellesmera
Parents:father Boyaton was killed while trying to do a spell without saying anything, her mother Kikouy was killed during empier raid when she was 6
Siblings:never had any
Character Personality:mostly calm but can go insane if push hard enughf
Character History:father died when she was 4 in Kirtan while trying to do a spell without saying anything. at the age of 6 her village of Kirtan was raided and her mother killed she stayed there for 22 more years intill she was ready to leave her home village and go to Ellesmera. once there she trained intill one day the queen was haveing all of the men and women come and see if the new dragon egg would hatch for her, it did. she spent years training with Oromis and Glader and now she helps keep peace in Alagaesia.
Wepons:gold rider sword and an elven long bow.
Likes:silencs, forestes, animals and flying
Dislikes:The Empier, water and the desert
Animal Companions:a cat named lither
Caracters Physical Discription:stronge form long day of training to be a rider, long legs and arms
Dreams For The Future:to teach a new rider like she was tought
Resons For Dreams:she loves to have people look up to her
Side:riders, elfs, dwafs and the varden



Dragon Name:deacon (D-a-con)
Age:83
Gender:male
Parents Defearon and Holaty
History:has nun
Personality:outgoing andvery nice
Colour:gold
Aperence:big, stronge and gracfull
Armore:made by the dwarfs after helping them
Dreams For The Future:to destory The Empier
Resons For Dreams:so that every one can live in peace

I think you need quite a bit more on history and personality. Otherwise, great character!

First of all, spellcheck. 2ndly, it needs to be longer. Way longer.

Yes. If glenwing sees this before you correct it... Well let's just say it won't be a good idea to let him see it. Other wise, yes it is good.

too short

I would advise taking a look at the accepted bios!

thankz but i'm doin to much stuff right now so i'm probley goin to quit

ya do it when u have time

i think i'm just guna stop doin rps

ya and plus u cant say they dont have history unless they have been brain washed or something

no i might make a new 1 cuz i don't realy like dis 1

ok make one him/her i want to see ur rpg character making skills

i'm not that good at makeing them but i think i'mok at rping so i think i'll try and make a differnt 1

check out my rpg character fanil kalem

ok i will

tell me wat u think abour him

ya i did he's realy cool:D:D:D

It's okay now.

wats ok now?

Sorry. I was zoned out. It still needs to be longer.

ya i no i might add stuff but probly not

thx